1. FACTORS ASSOCIATED WITH THE OCCURANCE OF PNEUMONIA IN
CHILDREN IN THE HEALTH OF BUNGA RAYA 2014 THE FACTORS THAT RELATED TO THE INCIDENCE OF PNEUMONIA ON CHILDREN AT BUNGA RAYA SOCIAL HEALTH CENTER IN THE YEAR OF 2014 Because You should consider the sequence of subject + predicate + object, this is the basic of witing. 2. Pneumonia is a disease that attacks the lungs and on the mark with coughing and difficulty breathing. marks Because It should be in line with the first verb after that, using present tense. by cough and the difficulty to breathe. Because It should in line with the first noun. 3. One of the causes of death as well as that play a role in the process of growth and development of children namely respiratory tract infections, diseases such as pneumonia can be prevented by immunization. One of the factors that caused Because in this research, you need to find the factors. Thats why I added factors there to clarify your sentence meaning. caused the death and affected the growing development of children Because it should be in line between caused and affected because they are past verbs, and the death and the growing development because they are noun. is respiratory tract infections, Because to be is here is a predicate or verb of your sentence. such as pneumonia that could be prevented by immunization Because I understand what you mean, thats why I wrote this. Im sorry. You need to make a good sentence too in Indonesian. 4. This research was conducted at the health center Bunga Raya region with the aim to determine the relationship of mothers education, immunization status and Asi exclusive with occurrence of pneumonia. The writer conducted the research Because The research cant conduct itself. in the area of Bunga Raya social health center Because of wrong sequence of the name of this place. in order to find out the relationship between the incidence of pneumonia and mothers education, immunization status, and exclusive ASI. Because It is easier to understand. 5. This type of research is quantitative analytic design with cross sectional approach, with a sample of 96 respondents. This research was an analytical quantitative research using cross sectional approach with 96 respondents as the sample.
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6. The sampling technique is done by random sampling. The respondents were chosen by random sampling technique. Because wrong choice and sequence of words. 7. The research was conducted by using a sheet cheklis , and data analysis using univariate and bivariate analysis with chi square test and OR to determine the relationship of each of variables studied. The writer used checklist sheet to collect the data and used univariate and bivariate analysis using chi square and OR test to analyze the relation of each variables. Because it is easy to understand and has wrong mechanics of writing. 8. These result indicate that there is a relation between education and the incidence of pneumonia with a P value = 0.003 and OR = 4.833 values and their relation to the incidence of pneumonia immunization status premises P value = 0.007 and OR = 4.050 and the value of existing exclusive Asi relation to the incidence of pneumonia with a P value = 0.005 and OR = 4.278 tilapia. The result of this research indicated that there is a relationship between the incidence of pneumonia and mothers education with the value of P = 0.003 and OR = 4.833, immunization status with the value of P=0.007 and OR=4.050, and exclusive ASI with the value of P=0.005 and OR 4.278. Because it used many useless words and is hard to understand. 9. The conclusion from this research relationship mothers education, immunization status and Asi exclusively with the incidence of pneumonia in children under five premises p value < 0.05 . The conclusion of this research is there was a relationship between the incidence of pneumonia and mothers education, immunization status, and exclusive ASI on children with the value of P<0.05. Because it takes a long time to understand your sentence. 10. Therefore health personnel should provide information and education about the disease pneumonia . Therefore, the health personnel should consider to provide information and counseling about pneumonia. Because of using wrong mechanics of writing and it is like a necessity not recommendation. 11. Keywords: Mother Education, Immunization Status, Asi Exclusive Pneumonia, Toddler Mothers Education, immunization status, exclusive ASI, pneumonia, children Because you should use possessive noun there and you used wrong sequence of phrase and choice of words.
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