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Mrs. Gardner
English 10H
12 November 2016
Racial Equality
My name is Belen Altamirano and as a Mexican American I want to get one message out
there. It is something everyone is born knowing, but lose sight of it as they mature and are
influenced by others. We are all equal. A persons race should not determine how they are
treated in society or whether or not they will have a successful future. I hope this message
inspires a more united and equal future for everyone in this country no matter their color.
The issue I am talking about is based on race, ethnicity, and color. It doesnt just affect
those of color but it affects the ones judging them as well. I personally have witnessed how
those of color are either mistreated or not treated equally, and those who are mistreating them
lose their kindness. We are all children of God. A person doesnt choose their race so why
mistreat them over something they have no control over. The scope is this issue is grandglobal
evenso why not work to change that. Why not work towards a better future for our country
Even if this issue doesnt affect you personally, it is constantly around you. Racial
inequality causes conflict which can cause the unity of our country to be lost. This issue has the
power to throw the country into chaos which in the end would be your responsibility. Chaos
could be initiated by people rebelling and fighting for their rights. At the moment racial inequality
is a spark which has just ignited a fire that if not taken care of can burn and consume everything
in its path. The downfall of our country is not something you want to occur during your
presidency, nor in that of any future president to come, which is why I ask you to take action for
Though this issue could have very drastic consequences that can be avoided. As the
president it is up to you to set the example for our country and take care of it. One way you can
work towards making a difference is by making the government more diverse with people of all
colors. Another way we can address this issue is by showing young people that color has
nothing to do with a persons character. According to pacer.org, 55% of students are bullied
because of their appearance. Stereotypes should not determine how people are treated or
viewed and people should not treat or view people based on stereotypes. Not all cops are bad.
Not all colored people are criminals. Not all white people are racist. This country needs so stop
judging and work together to make a change. As President you could encourage schools to
introduce equality and get rid of stereotypes and racism the way Michelle Obama introduced
their color, there are still those who disagree with this. Some people consider themselves
superior because of their color or race. As you know many people are brought up with that idea
that color and race and stereotypes determine what a person is like. One example of racial
inequality in shown in the type of people that get pulled over. According to dosomething.org,
Studies show that .... In New York City, 80% of the stops made were blacks and Latinos, and
85% of those people were frisked, compared to a mere 8% of white people stopped. This is just
one of many things that show how people are influenced by color. It is understandable that
some people would disagree with what I am saying but they should put themselves in the shoes
of a colored person being discriminated. If the roles were reversed wouldnt they too want
change. People have a choice to reject those of different races or to accept your diverse
country. Those who disagree with me should change their perspective and realise that this
change not only affects those of color but themselves as well. Living in a country full of
discrimination can separate the people and throw the country into chaos. Doesnt everyone has
I invite you, the next president of the United States of America, to take action and make
a change for the future of the country and for the rights of the people. (751)