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This book of Independent Writing Narrative Reports
Activities covers the genres for the Time Travel The Inter-School Sports
9 to 10 year old age group. It has Stimulus 5 Competition
been written to the UK National Planning notes 6 Stimulus 26
Strategy Primary Framework for Final Written Work 7 Planning notes 27
Literacy. Final Written Work 28
How a Creature Came to Be
It contains at least two independent Stimulus 8 School Book Day
writing activities for each genre type Planning notes 9 Stimulus 29
and is an ideal vehicle for assessing Final Written Work 10 Planning notes 30
pupil progress in writing when used Final Written Work 31
with the different Levels found in the The Fairground
Writing Assessment Guidelines, Stimulus 11
Planning notes 12
which accompany the Primary Explanation
Framework for Literacy. (The Final Written Work 13
School Rules
appropriate levels for this age group Stimulus 32
have been reproduced under licence Planning notes 33
at the beginning of this book.) Play Script Final Written Work 34
The Argument
The author has also used this Stimulus 14 A Day in the Life of a Zoo Keeper
approach successfully with children Planning notes 15 Stimulus 35
to embed the features of each genre. Final Written Work 16 Planning notes 36
This was achieved by re-visiting a Final Written Work 37
previously studied genre later in the The Birthday Party
term, so that the children practised it Stimulus 17
once again. This ensured that the Planning notes 18
features of that particular type of Persuasion
Final Written Work 19
writing remained firmly embedded in Join Our Club
the childrens memory. Thus when Stimulus 38
the children were tested or came to Planning notes 39
write in that particular genre at a later Instructions Final Written Work 40
date it was not just a distant memory. Directions From the School
Gate to Your Table The Electric Skateboard
There are six similar books in this Stimulus 20 Stimulus 41
series covering the work of pupils Planning notes 21 Planning notes 42
from Year 1 through to Year 6 (ages Final Written Work 22 Final Written Work 43
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Stimulus 23
use on Interactive Whiteboards. Poetry
Planning notes 24
Who Am I?
Final Written Work 25
Stimulus 44
Planning notes 45
Final Written Work 46
Sports Day
Stimulus 47
Planning notes 48
Final Written Work 49
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The National Strategies | Primary | Primary Framework for literacy and mathematics
Assessment guidelines for writing L2, L3
Writing assessment guidelines: levels 2 and 3
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Pupil name Class/Group Date
AF5 vary sentences AF6 write with AF3 organise and AF4 construct AF1 write imaginative, AF2 produce texts AF7 select AF8 use correct spelling Handwriting and
for clarity, purpose technical accuracy of present whole texts paragraphs and use interesting and which are appropriate and presentation
and effect syntax and effectively, cohesion within and thoughtful texts appropriate to task, effective
punctuation in sequencing and between paragraphs reader and purpose vocabulary
phrases, clauses and structuring
sentences information, ideas
and events
Level In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing
3 reliance mainly on straightforward some attempt to some internal structure some appropriate purpose simple, generally correct spelling of legible style, shows
simply structured sentences usually organise ideas with within sections of text ideas and content established at a appropriate some common accurate and
sentences, variation demarcated related points e.g. one-sentence included general level vocabulary used, grammatical function consistent letter
with support, e.g. accurately with full placed next to paragraphs or ideas some attempt to main features of limited in range words formation, sometimes
some complex stops, capital letters, each other loosely organised elaborate on basic selected form some words common content/lexical joined
sentences question and openings and within information or events, sometimes selected for words with more than
and, but, so are the exclamation marks closings usually paragraphs/sections, e.g. nouns expanded signalled to the effect or one morpheme, including
most common some, limited, use of signalled some links between by simple adjectives reader occasion compound words
connectives, speech punctuation some attempt to sentences, e.g. use of attempt to adopt some attempts at likely errors
subordination comma splicing sequence ideas or pronouns or of viewpoint, though often appropriate style, some inflected endings,
occasionally evident, particularly material logically adverbials not maintained or with attention to e.g. past tense,
some limited in narrative movement between inconsistent, e.g. reader comparatives, adverbs
variation in use of paragraphs/sections attitude expressed, but some phonetically
tense and verb sometimes abrupt or with little elaboration plausible attempts at
forms, not always disjointed content/lexical words
secure
Level In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of writing In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of writing In some forms of
2 writing writing writing ideas in sections writing writing writing usually correct spelling of writing
some variation in clause structure some basic grouped by content, mostly relevant ideas some basic simple, often high frequency letters generally
sentence openings, mostly grammatically sequencing of some linking by simple and content, purpose speech-like grammatical function correctly shaped but
e.g. not always correct ideas or material, pronouns sometimes repetitive established, e.g. vocabulary words inconsistencies in
starting with name or sentence e.g. time-related or sparse main features of conveys relevant common single orientation, size and
pronoun demarcation with words or phrases, some apt word choices story, report meanings morpheme use of upper/lower
mainly simple capital letters and full line breaks, create interest some appropriate some content/lexical words case letters
sentences with and stops usually headings, numbers features of the adventurous likely errors clear letter formation,
brief comments,
used to connect accurate openings and/or questions about events given form used word choices, inflected endings, e.g. with ascenders and
clauses some accurate use closings or actions suggest some attempts to e.g. opportune past tense, plurals, descenders
past and present of question and sometimes viewpoint adopt appropriate use of new adverbs distinguished,
tense generally exclamation marks, signalled style vocabulary phonetic attempts at generally upper and
consistent and commas in lists vowel digraphs lower case letters not
mixed within words
BL
IE
Key: BL Below level IE Insufficient evidence
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 2 Secure 2 High 2 Low 3 Secure 3 High 3
Level In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing
3 reliance mainly on straightforward some attempt to some internal structure some appropriate purpose simple, generally correct spelling of legible style,
simply structured sentences usually organise ideas within sections of text e.g. ideas and content established at a appropriate some common grammatical shows accurate
BL
IE
Key: BL Below level IE Insufficient evidence
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 3 Secure 3 High 3 Low 4 Secure 4 High 4
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The National Strategies | Primary | Primary Framework for literacy and mathematics
Assessment guidelines for writing L4, L5
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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 4 and 5
Pupil name Class/Group Date
AF5 vary sentences AF6 write with AF3 organise and present AF4 construct paragraphs AF1 write imaginative, AF2 produce texts AF7 select AF8 use correct spelling
for clarity, purpose and technical accuracy of whole texts effectively, and use cohesion within and interesting and which are appropriate appropriate and
effect syntax and punctuation sequencing and structuring between paragraphs thoughtful texts to task, reader and effective
in phrases, clauses and information, ideas and purpose vocabulary
sentences events
Level Across a range of Across a range of Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of Across a range of Across a range of Across a range of writing
5 writing writing material is structured paragraphs clearly structure writing writing writing correct spelling of
a variety of sentence full range of clearly, with sentences main ideas across text to relevant ideas and main purpose of vocabulary grammatical function words
lengths, structures and punctuation used organised into appropriate support purpose, e.g. clear material developed writing is clear and chosen for effect almost all inflected words
subjects provides accurately to paragraphs chronological or logical links with some imaginative consistently reasonably wide most derivational suffixes and
clarity and emphasis demarcate sentences, development of material is between paragraphs detail maintained vocabulary used, prefixes
wider range of including speech effectively managed across within paragraphs/sections, a development of ideas features of selected though not always most content/lexical words
connectives used to punctuation text, e.g. closings refer range of devices support and material form clearly appropriately likely errors
clarify relationship syntax and back to openings cohesion, e.g. secure use of appropriately shaped established with occasional phonetically
between ideas, e.g. punctuation within the overall direction of the text pronouns, connectives, for selected form, e.g. some adaptation to plausible spelling of unstressed
although, on the other sentence generally supported by clear links references back to text nominalisation for purpose syllables in content words
hand, meanwhile accurate including between paragraphs links between succinctness appropriate style double consonants in prefixes
some features of commas to mark paragraphs/sections generally clear viewpoint clearly established to
sentence structure clauses, though some maintained across whole text established, generally maintain reader s
used to build up detail errors occur where consistent, with some interest throughout
or convey shades of ambitious structures elaboration, e.g. some,
meaning, e.g. variation are attempted uneven, development
in word order, of individual voice or
expansions in verb characterisation in role
phrases
Level Across a range of Across a range of Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of Across a range of Across a range of Across a range of writing
4 writing writing ideas organised by paragraphs/sections help to writing writing writing correct spelling of
some variety in length, sentences demarcated clustering related points or organise content, e.g. main relevant ideas and main purpose of some evidence of most common grammatical
structure or subject of accurately throughout by time sequence idea usually supported or content chosen writing is clear but deliberate function words, including
sentences the text, including ideas are organised simply elaborated by following some ideas and not always vocabulary adverbs with -ly formation
use of some question marks with a fitting opening and sentences material developed in consistently choices regularly formed content/lexical
subordinating speech marks to closing, sometimes linked within paragraphs/sections, detail, e.g. descriptions maintained some expansion words, including those with
connectives, e.g. if, denote speech ideas or material generally limited range of connections elaborated by main features of of general multiple morphemes
when, because generally accurate, in logical sequence but between sentences, e.g. over- adverbial and selected form are vocabulary to most past and present tense
throughout the text with some other overall direction of writing use of also or pronouns expanded noun clear and match topic inflections, plurals
some variation, speech punctuation not always clearly signalled some attempts to establish phrases appropriate to likely errors
generally accurate, in commas used in lists simple links between straightforward purpose homophones of some common
tense and verb forms and occasionally to paragraphs/sections not viewpoint generally style generally grammatical function words
mark clauses, always maintained, e.g. firstly, established and appropriate to task, occasional phonetically
although not always next maintained, e.g. writing though awareness of plausible spelling in
accurately in role or maintaining a reader not always content/lexical words
consistent stance sustained
BL
IE
Key: BL Below level IE Insufficient evidence
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 4 Secure 4 High 4 Low 5 Secure 5 High 5
T i m e Tr a v e l
One evening you go to your computer and accidentally press one of
the keys you have never pressed before. Suddenly you are
transported into a different time!
Task
Your task is to write about where you travel to, what the place is like, who you meet
and how you manage to get home again.
Name Date
Time Travel
Where did you travel to and what form did your transport/journey take? (Remember:
You can travel back or forwards in time.)
Name Date
Time Travel
How a
Creature
Came to Be
Tika obeyed her mother. Bruno was more adventurous. He didnt believe his mothers
story, and went to see for himself. Well you can guess what happened the fuzzy
wuzzies stuck to his head! No matter how much he rolled around they would not come
off. That is how the lion got his mane!
Task
Your task is to think of an animal that you are familiar with e.g. a pet, a zoo animal, an
animal you have seen in the wild etc. Make up a story to explain how your chosen animal
obtained a particular feature that helps to identify them.
Name Date
In the opening paragraph you will introduce the creature - think about what it looks
like and how it feels about itself.
What happens to the creature so that it gains its own distinguishing feature?
Name Date
The Fairground
This story is set in Victorian times. John and Mary have wealthy but very strict
parents who believe children should spend their time reading and learning and certainly
not playing! A fairground visits their town and John and Mary are longing to go along.
Their parents are strongly set against it. Here is the conversation that takes place
between the children and their parents:
Task
Your task is to write the story of how John and Mary manage to sneak out and visit the
fairground without their parents knowing.
Name Date
The Fairground
Story Setting: Think about what a wealthy Victorian house would look like. Think about
the different rides, sounds and smells of the fairground.
Characters:
Mother:
___________________________________________________________
Father:
____________________________________________________________
John:
_____________________________________________________________
Mary:
_____________________________________________________________
How do the children manage to leave the house secretly? How does the story begin?
What happens at the fairground? What do they see? Who do they meet?
On their return, do their parents catch them? How is the story resolved?
Name Date
The Fairground
The Argument
A group of friends, who are slightly older than you, have asked if you can come to town
on Saturday. Your parents are not keen for you to go. Continue the play script following
on from the box below.
(Emma pleads.)
Emma: But Mum, Ill be fine.
Task
Your task is to continue the argument between Emma and her parents.
Name Date
The Argument
Think about the characters in the play. What are they like?
Mum:
Dad:
Emma:
Name Date
The Argument
(Emma and Mum are in the kitchen.)
Emma: Mum! Anna and Henna are going to town on Saturday. They asked if I could go
too. Is that O.K.?
(Emma pleads.)
Emma: But Mum, Ill be fine.
(Sophie, Sam and Sejal are having a conversation in the playground at school.)
Sophie: (Excitedly) Its only two weeks until my birthday! I cant wait!
Sam: What are you going to do to celebrate?
Sophie: Mum says I can have a party.
Sejal: Fantastic. Who is coming?
Sam: What will we do at the party?
Task
Your task is to write a play script continuing the conversation between the friends,
explaining what will take place at the birthday party.
Name Date
Sophie:
Sam:
Sejal:
Who else will be there? What will they wear? Will they bring presents?
Name Date
Task
Your task is to write a set of exact instructions that a stranger could follow to end up
at your seat at your classroom table. Remember, the stranger does not know anything
about your school.
Name Date
Name Date
How to Play a
Favourite Game
Your school has been asked to make a book of instructions for childrens favourite
games. These might be games you play at home or school. It could be a game you enjoy
playing with your friends. It must not be a game you play on the computer.
Task
Your task is to write a set of exact instructions to explain how to play your favourite
game. Remember, the person who will be reading your instructions will never have
played this game before.
Name Date
Equipment needed:
Name Date
The Inter-School
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Sports Competition
Your school has taken part in an Inter-Schools Sports Competition. Your teacher has
asked you to write a report about the day for the school magazine.
Task
Your task is to write a report to include information about the different schools
taking part, what happened at each event and the outcome of the competition.
Name Date
Name Date
Task
Your task is to write a report for the school governors explaining what had taken place
during the day and how the children reacted to the event.
Name Date
Name Date
School Rules
A new child has joined your class and you have been given the job of
helping them settle in. It would be useful for them to know the school
rules and the reasons for them.
Task
Your task is to write an explanation of the school rules and the reasons for them.
When you are writing think about:
classsroom rules
playground rules
lunchtime rules
Remember to give clear reasons for these rules.
Name Date
School Rules
Introduction welcoming the new pupil to school:
Concluding paragraph:
Name Date
School Rules
8.00 - 9.00 Feeding the seals and checking they are healthy.
3.00 - 4.00 Clearing up after visitors and making final checks on the animals.
Task
Your task is to use the information above to write a clear explanation of a zookeepers
day looking after an animal of your choice.
Name Date
Introduction:
Conclusion:
Name Date
Task
Your task is to write a leaflet to parents to persuade them to allow their children to
join your club. Remember, parents will want to make sure their children are safe and
the activities are of educational value as well as being fun. Make your leaflet as
persuasive as possible.
Name Date
Collect words and phrases to help you persuade parents that this is a good idea.
Name Date
The
Electric
Skateboard
You have been asked to promote a new type of skateboard.
It is powered by an electric motor and has rechargeable
batteries. It is operated from a wireless hand controller.
Task
Your task is to write a persuasive article for a parents magazine explaining the
functions and advantages of the electric skateboard.
You need to make it sound like the best Christmas present any child could ever want!
Name Date
Cost
Why is it fun?
and maintenance?
Collect words and phrases to help you persuade parents to buy this skateboard.
Name Date
Who Am I?
Here is a poem using metaphors about James Bond.
Task
Your task is to write a poem in the same style about either a fictional character or a
celebrity. It could be about a character from a book or film. It could be a celebrity
from sport, the music industry, the film industry or even the Royal family.
Name Date
Who Am I?
Choice of character:
What do they
What is their
look like?
character like?
Name Date
Who Am I?
Heart beats,
Body still,
Legs stretched,
Muscles tense.
Gun fires,
Race begins,
Heart races,
Body pounds.
Someone passes,
Throat is dry,
Legs are moving,
Onward on!
Out in front,
Must keep going,
Finish in sight,
Chest aches.
Throat dry,
One more push,
Almost there,
Opposition closer.
End looms,
Final burst,
Without warning,
It is over!
Task
Your task is to write a poem in the same style about a sporting activity
e.g. a Task
swimming race, a cross-country run, a relay race or another sport of your choice.
Name Date
Sports Day
What takes place
during the event?
How does the
activity begin?
Poem title:
How do you feel at
different stages of the event?
Name Date
Sports Day