In the story Slip or Trip a woman name Queenie says to be a murder in

this story,but it is the other way around. She is more likely to be the real alibi to
this story than anybody else.
To start it all off is that she invited her friends. Nobody would invite their
own friends if they were going to kill her husband. Her friends would of called the
cops if they saw her kill her husband. Even if they were not there yet they were
then they were behind her and not by a lot.
Not to mention that he was drunk during the death of himself. This means
that he was dizzy when he was drunk as said in TIL why alcohol makes you
dizzy. When you are dizzy you try to find a center of balance. This may make
you spin around or fall which could of happen to arthur. He could have spin on
top of the stairs and fell putting him in the position he is in.
Additionally is that the food was cooking. Some people think that it shows
that she is guilty or may be it is because Arthur or Queenie was making a sorry
gift to each other and when Arthur smelled it or making it he went down stairs to
see it and that is when he died.
To wrapped this up queenie is innocent and not guilty like the others might
say about her. For calling her friend .them being drunk and the cooking behind
that is further proof that she is innocent.
Advanced Proficient Partially Proficient

Introduction Lead is a grabber or offers
*Lead/grabber background information,
*Claim/Thesis along with a clear claim
Includes all necessary titles
and names, referenced
correctly
Includes a lead
Claim is clear and answers the
prompt
References titles and authors of
literature in question; or
necessary background
information
Claim just repeats the prompt, no
clear claim, or does not answer
the prompt
Does not include titles
Includes reasons or evidence in
the claim, pronouns, I think
statements

Body More than 3 specific
*Reasons reasons support the claim
*Evidence (text Specific, compelling text
support, evidence for each reason
details) includes a mix of cited
(quoted) and paraphrased
*Justification text
Provides justification for how
the reasons and text
evidence support the claim
and elaborates beyond the
obvious
Maintains clear order, logic
and high-level transition
words between reasons
3 specific reasons support the
claim
Specific text evidence is
provided for each reason
Provides justification for how
the reasons and text evidence
support the claim
Maintains order, logic and/or
transition words between
reasons
Less than 3 specific reasons
support the claim
Specific text evidence not
provided for each reason
Little or no justification for how the
reasons and text evidence support
the claim
Maintains little or no order, logic or
transition words between reasons

Style and Advanced, precise Vocabulary appropriate for General word choice; occasional
Fluency vocabulary appropriate for audience and purpose errors in word usage
 audience and purpose
Lots of descriptive
language: active verbs,
figurative language,
imagery, effective
adjectives
Fluent variety of sentence
beginnings, structures,
length
Legible, neat, and error-free
Conclusion Ties the claim to a larger
idea: self, the world, other
literature
Some descriptive language:
active verbs, figurative
language, imagery, adjectives
Some variety of sentence
beginnings, structures, and
length
Mostly legible, neat, and error-
free
Ties the claim to a larger idea
but is clumsy or forced.
Mostly common or dead verbs (is,
did, go), imprecise or colorless
verbs or adjectives, common
phrases
Little variety of sentence
beginnings, structure, or length;
contains run-on or incomplete
sentences
Sloppy or full of errors
Repeats the claim statement or
the supports
No conclusion