901 West Illinois Street

Urbana, IL 61801
217-333-0302
admissions@illinois.edu
Fax: 217-244-4614

March 15, 2018

Ms. Carolina Ramirez
2437 Sale PL.
Huntington Park, CA 90255

Dear Ms. Ramirez:

After reviewing your application, I am pleased to announce that you have been accepted to the
University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign!

You have exceeded our requirements with all the work that you have done.
Your G.P.A is an exceptional 3.9 which you have completed by taking rigorous courses. You
have completed all four years of English and have done an exceptional job in it. In addition, you
have have taken high levels of math that were not required but you did an excellent job on them.
To add on your work, you took 2 years of the Japanese language which is not really seen by
students your age. In all you have completed all of your A-G requirements. SAT scores are very
important in our school in our school and you exceeded our standards.

One other thing the university looks for in potential students are, extracurricular activities and
how involved the student is in their community. It appears that you are very much involved in
your community in many ways which reflect in your personality. You have completed more than
200 hours of community service at various locations and 120 hours of internship, all which are
very impressive. In completing your community service hours, it shows how mature of a person
you are and globally competent you have become over the years. Your involvement in clubs and
extracurricular activities is excellent. We noticed you were part of the National Honor Society,
this is remarkable. In addition, you were also part of student class council. To us, this signifies
your involvement in your graduating class and the importance it is to you. Your extracurricular
activity is also really great. You were part of Short Flags all four years of high school and held
the position of being captain your last year. In your personal statement, you discussed the
importance of the team and how you were able to grow as a person while being part of Short
Flags. As we got further into your application, we noticed your leadership skills you've gotten
while being part of Short Flags and the determination you to achieve things.

Based on your financial aid information, we have decided that your tuition fee is to be 25,250
(since you are an out-of- state resident) for your undergraduate year and a full paid dorm for your

first two years at our university. We offer exceptional studies and courses that will help you
succeed in criminology, psychology, and anthropology in the best way possible. The University
901 West Illinois Street
Urbana, IL 61801
217-333-0302
admissions@illinois.edu
Fax: 217-244-4614
of Illinois invites you to our campus to get a better feeling of being in the school which will
hopefully motivate you to choose the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign will be your
choice of university in which you will create your future.

Further information regarding full application and tuition will be sent through mail in the next
few days. We are excited to see you on campus, thank you.

Sincerely,

Admissions Office