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by Freelance Writing
News writing style is just as important for sports reporting as it is for general
news, business stories or any other journalistic work.
The advantage of sports writing is that you are allowed a little it more leeway
in your choice of words. In crime or business writing, you are restricted in
your use of adjectives and adverbs and are encouraged to focus more on
nouns and verbs. Sports writing, however, allows you to go to town in
describing plays, the atmosphere, fans and other colorful aspects of a sporting
event.
However, you also have sports articles written without quotes. When rookies
learn how to write like a journalist, especially in sport, they are likely to come
across the structure that we will show you here.
We will adapt the NBA game between Boston Celtics and Cleveland Cavaliers
on April 1 as our example article.
1. Intro
The most important news aspect of a sports game is the score. Who won?
How did they win and what effect did the victory have? Also important is
whether we are writing from a Boston perspective or Cleveland. In this case,
we will go with Cleveland.
Cleveland Cavaliers lost 98-96 to the Boston Celtics after Delonte Wests
sank two free throws in the final seconds, dropping three and a half games
behind the Pistons for the best record in the Eastern Conference.
2. More info
The above is enough for those who have a passing interest in the sport.
However, NBA fans would want more information and you could give it to
them in one or two paragraphs.
The Cavaliers were without star player LeBron James, suffering from a knee
injury, while the Celtics were minus Paul Pierce. Gerald Green led the way for
Celtics with 25 points while Kendrick Perkins had 12 points and nine
rebounds.
The Cavaliers, for whom Larry Hughes scored 24 with Sasha Pavlovic scoring
17, have already qualified for the play-offs while Boston are out of the
running.
3. Quote
This is where you can provide a quote from the coach or a key player from
both teams. You can precede each saying with a lead-in paragraph or go
straight into the quote.
Celtic forward Al Jefferson, said: They were missing their best player and
we were missing our best play. We just stuck in there.
Cavs coach Mike Brown said James absence was a key factor in their loss.
We miss LeBron. We miss LeBron every time he doesnt play. Hes our guy,
said Brown.
4. The rest
Once you got the main information and key quotes out of the way, you can go
on to describe the game. Even better would be to describe just one or two
plays and include more quotes.
The thinking behind sports articles is that people would have watched the
game on TV anyway and would not want boring game description. Therefore,
quotes from the people who matter, such as athletes and coaches, would offer
better reading value.
There are many types of sports news writing that is offered around the world
everyday. We have merely showed you its simplest form. Certainly, it is a
rewarding form of news writing for journalists who love their sport. And the
structure they use allow them to adapt their skills to any type of journalism
writing.
sports Writing
Sports journalism is a form of writing that reports on sporting topics and games. While the
sports department within some newspapers has been mockingly called the toy department,
because sports journalists do not concern themselves with the 'serious' topics covered by
the news desk, sports coverage has grown in importance as sport has grown
in wealth, power and influence.
Source:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sports_journalism
There are lots of different kinds of stories you can write on the sports beat, but probably the
most basic is the short game story. A short game story, usually 500 words or less, follows a
straightforward format that can be applied to any game you cover. Heres the format:
The Lede
The lede of your story should include the final score and some details about what made the
game interesting. Generally this means focusing on the efforts of an individual player.
Lets say a teams star athlete is injured and a previously unheralded player comes into the
game as a substitute. Not much is expected of this rookie but he defies expectations and
plays a great game, leading the team to victory.
Example:
Second-string quarterback Jay Lindman, who had never played a down for Jefferson High
School, came off the bench after star QB Fred Torville was injured Friday night and threw
three touchdown passes to lead the Gladiators to a 21-14 victory over the McKinley High
School Centurions.
Or maybe the game is a close, seesaw battle between two evenly matched opponents, and
is won in the final seconds by an especially dramatic play.
Example:
Second-string quarterback Jay Lindman threw the game-winning touchdown with just 12
seconds left to lead the Jefferson High School Gladiators to a 21-14 victory over the
McKinley High School Centurions Friday night.
Notice that in both examples we focus on the efforts of an individual athlete. Sports is all
about the human drama of competition, and focusing on a single person gives the game
story a human interest angle that readers will enjoy.
The body of your story should basically elaborate on the lede. If your lede was about the
benchwarmer becoming the games star, then the body should go into more detail about
that. Often a simple chronological account works best.
Example:
Torvilles ankle was sprained when he was sacked in the first quarter. Lindman came into
the game with low expectations but threw his first touchdown pass in the second quarter
with a high, floating ball that receiver Mike Ganson snagged in the end zone.
In the third quarter, Lindman was forced to scramble out of the pocket to avoid the rush but
managed to fire a bullet to receiver Desean Washington, who made a diving catch at the
goal line.
The Wrap Up
The wrap up or ending of your story usually centers on quotes from the coach and players
gleaned from post-game interviews or press conferences.Getting great quotes for sports
stories can sometimes be tough coaches and athletes often speak in clichs but a
snappy quote can really be the icing on the cake of your game story.
Example:
I knew Lindman could play but I didnt know he could play like that, said Gladiators coach
Jeff Michaelson. That was one heck of a game by a young guy who showed a lot of heart.
Washington said Lindman exuded confidence even in the huddle before his very first snap.
He just said, Lets do this to win, Washington said. And he went out there and did it. That
boy can throw the ball.
Quarterback Pete Faust threw thre touchdown passes to lead the Jefferson High School
Eagles to a 21-7 victory over crosstown rival McKinley High.
The rest of the story follows from there, with an account of the big plays and playmakers,
and after-game quotes from coaches and players. Because they often focus on high school
and small-college teams, straight-lede game stories tend to be fairly tightly written.
Straight-lede game stories are still used for coverage of high school and some college
sports. But they're used less nowadays for pro sports. Why? Because pro sports are seen
on TV and most fans of a particular team know the score of a game long before they read
about it.
The Feature-Lede Game Story Feature-lede game stories are common for pro sports.
Readers usually already know the score of pro games as soon as they're done, so when
they pick up a sports section they want stories they offer a different angle on what
happened and why.
It had rained all that day in the city of brotherly love, so when the Philadelphia Eagles took
the field the ground was already a soggy mess - much like the game that would follow.
So it was somehow fitting that the Eagles would lose 31-7 to the Dallas Cowboys in a
contest that was one of the worst of quarterback Donovan McNabb's career. McNabb threw
two interceptions and fumbled the ball three times.
The story starts out with some description, and doesn't get to the final score until the second
paragraph. Again, that's fine: readers will already know the score. It's the writer's job to give
them something more.
Delayed-lede game stories tend to be a bit more in-depth that straight-lede stories, and as a
result are often longer.
Profiles The sports world is full of colorful characters, so it's no surprise that personality
profiles are a staple of sportswriting. Whether it's a charismatic coach or a young athlete on
the rise, some of the best profiles anywhere are found in sports sections.
Norman Dale surveys the court as his players practice layups. A pained look crosses the
face of the coach of the McKinley High School basketball team as one player after another
misses the basket.
"Again!" he shouts. "Again! You don't stop! You don't quit! York work 'till you get it right!" And
so they continue, until they start to get it right. Coach Dale wouldn't have it any other way.
Season Preview and Wrap-up Stories Season previews and wrap-ups are fixtures of the
sportswriter's repertoire. These are done any time a team and a coach are preparing for the
coming season, or when the season has just ended, either in glory or infamy.
Obviously the focus here isn't a specific game or even individual, but a broad look at the
season - how the coach and players expect things to go, or how they feel once that season
is done.
Coach Jenna Johnson has high hopes for the Pennwood High School women's basketball
team this year. After all, the Lions were city champions last year, led by the play of Juanita
Ramirez, who returns to the team this year as a senior. "We expect great things from her,"
Coach Johnson says.
Columns A column is where the sportswriter gets to vent his or her opinions, and the best
sports columnists do just that, fearlessly. Often that means being very tough on coaches,
players or teams who don't meet expectations, particularly at the pro level, where all
concerned are being paid huge salaries to do just one thing - win.
But sports columnists also focus on those they admire, whether it's an inspirational coach
who leads a team of underdogs to a great season, or a mostly unheralded player who may
be short on natural talent but makes up for it with hard work and unselfish play.
Lamont Wilson certainly isn't the tallest player on the McKinley High School basketball
team. At 5-foot-9, he's hard to spot in the sea of mid 6-footers on the court. But Wilson is
the model of an unselfish team player, the kind of athlete who makes those around him
shine. "I just do whatever I can to help the team," the ever-modest Wilson says.
"AM I TO BE BLAMED?"
They're chasing me, they're chasing, no they must not catch me, I have enough
moneynow, yes enough for my starving mother and brothers.Please let me go, let
me go home before you imprisoned me. Very well, officers? take meto your
headquarters. Good morning captain! no captain, you are mistaken, I was once
agood girl, just like the rest of you here. Just like any of your daughters. But time
was,when I was reared in slums. But we lived honestly, we lived honestly in life. My,
father,mother, brothers, sisters and I. But then, poverty enters the portals of our
home. Myfather became jobless, my mother got ill. The small savings that my
mother had kept for our expenses were spent. All for our daily needs and her
needed medicine.One night, my father went out, telling us that he would come back
in a few minutes with plenty of foods and money, but that was the last time I saw
him. He went with another woman. If only I could lay my hands on his neck I would
wring it without pain until he breaths no more. If you were in my place, you'll do it,
won't you Captain? What? youwon't still believe in me?. Come and I'll show you a
dilapidated shanty by a railroad.Mother, mother I'm home, mother? mother?!. There
Captain, see my dead mother.Captain? there are tears in your eyes? now pack this
stolen money and return it to theowner. What good would this do to my mother
now? she's already gone! Do you hear me? she's already gone. Am I to be blamed
for the things I have done?
"JUVENILE DELINQUENT"
I may have the looks of Audrey Hepburn, the calmly voice of Nathalie Cole. But
that'snot what you can see in me. Here's a young girl who needs counsel to
enlighten her wayand guidance to strenghten her life into contentment.Honorable
judge, friends and teachers...is this the girl whom you commented a
juveniledelinquent?.
I Demand Death!
My hands are wet with blood. They are crimsoned with the blood of a man I have
justkilled.I have come here today to confess. I have committed murder, deliberate,
premeditatedmurder. I have killed a man in cold blood. That man is my master.I am
here not to ask for pity but for justice. Simple, elementary justice. I am a tenant
My father was a tenant before me and so was his father before him. This misery is
myinheritance and perhaps this will be my legacy to my children.I have labored on a
patch of land not mine. But I have learned to love that land, for it isthe only thing
that lies between me and complete destitution.It is the only world that I have
learned to cherish. And somewhere on that land I havemanaged to build what is
now the dilapidated nipa shack that has been home to me.I have but a few world
possessions, mostly rags. My debts are heavy. They are sum totalof my ignorance
and the inspired arithmetic of my master, which I do not understand.I labor like a
slave and out of the fruits of that labor I get but a mere pittance for a share.And I
have to stretch that mere pittance to keep myself and my family alive.My poverty
has reduced me to the bare necessities of life. And the constant fear of rejection
from the land has made me totally subservient to my master. You tell me thatunder
the constitution, I am a free man-free to do what I believe is just, free to do what
Ithink is right, and free to worship God according to the dictate of my conscience.
But I donot understand the meaning of all these for I have never known freedom. I
have alwaysobeyed the wishes of my master out of fear. I have always regarded
myself as no better than a slave to the man who owns the land on which I live. I do
not ask you to forgiveme nor to mitigate my crime. I have taken the law into my
own hands, and I must pay for it in atonement.But kill this system. Kill this system
and you kill despotism. Kill this system and you killslavery. Kill this despotism and
you set the human soul to liberty and freedom. Kill thisslavery and you release the
human spirit into happiness and contentment. For the causeof human liberty, of
human happiness and contentment, thousands and even millionshave died and will
continue to die.Mine is only one life. Take me if you must but let it be a sacrifice to
the cause whichcountless others have been given before and will be given again
and again, until theoppressive economic system has completely perished, until the
sons of toil have been
The lists below show the first and last idiom on each page:
list B13 : born with silver spoon in your mouth all brawn no brain
list B15 : bricks and mortar/bricks and clicks pass the buck
list G5 : give the shirt off one's back go against the tide
list L7 : live beyond your means (a) load off your mind
list S2 : (by the) same token scales fall from your eyes
list S7 : ships that pass in the night short end of the stick
list S9 : shut the stable door when horse ... simplicity itself
list T2 : take the law into your own hands take the rough with the
smooth
list T14 : turkeys voting for Christmas (in the) twinkling of an eye
list T15 : twist someone's arm put two and two together
list W6 : (know) which way wind blows wise after the event