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Olivia Bowman
World Literature 1
7 March 2016
#1 Original Poem:
Waves
# 2 Poetic Devices:
#4-- calm and bomb, Line #5 and #7-- boom and gloom, Line #6 and #8--
pours and yours, Line #9 and #11-- blue and knew, Line #10 and #12-- sun
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and someone, Line #13 and #15-- seen and between, Line #14 and #16-- play
and betray
4. Extended Metaphor: Throughout the poem, the metaphor relates waves of the ocean
Waves
The poem Waves, that I have created is so much more than just about the ocean that I
have always loved. It is about emotions and people. Purposely, the poem is written to be an
extended metaphor. The waves of the ocean, represents the emotions of people. Like the ocean,
emotions are not always smooth. Every human has their ups and downs. The waves, are
what sets the theme of the poem and really what it will be about. In the first stanza, the harsh
winds show a relationship between the things that cause waves, to the things, words that people
say, that cause emotions to vary. Some emotions and thoughts build up in the human brain and
cause a person to fall. This was left up for interpretation for the reader to decide what someone
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can fall into. However, because of this they are no longer a bomb waiting to explode, which
In the second stanza, when emotions crash and boom things get more stirred up and
eventually lead to strong rain or tears and crying. Within an ocean storm, the skies grow dark
and become gloom. With emotions, this is usually when depression can start to begin due to
this. When things fade and are no longer yours, is when the mind is full of thoughts and
emotions causing it to be hard to identify what is real and what is not which is why some
The next stanza talks about how the ocean is the first to see when the sun comes up and
the last to see when the moon goes down. At some points, emotions and thoughts can keep you
awake at night causing people to see the sun set and then rise. It also reiterates that things are
no longer yours by saying they hold all our secrets, so this shows that things that are true can
Finally, in the last two stanzas the waves can hide or be seen same as emotions. Some
people hide their thoughts while others share them. The tide pulls closer signifies thoughts
drawing more and more into a persons mind causing them to get lost in between what is real
and not. The sea represents the mind and how it is the deciding factor to determine what is real
or not, which can lead to thoughts and emotions changing and being betrayed.
Other poetic devices that are in the poem include alliteration which adds an emphasis to
the words turning and twisting in the second line. Which allows readers minds to turn and twist
along with the poem itself. This also occurs with the use of anaphora. Mentioning the waves of
the ocean, draws the reader back into the metaphor. The use of crash and boom in line five, an
onomatopoeia, brings the sound into words allowing a picture to be thought off.
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Rhyme is also a big part of this poem. Specifically, three different types of rhymes which
include internal, perfect, as well as end. They all add to the poem by creating some consistency
to expect. When it comes down to the poem itself, being an extended metaphor is really what
creates the tone. The poem shows how emotions can get out of hand and cause many other
thoughts. Eventually, a person must overcome difficult emotions and relax and breathe. That is