10/60 points Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced No opinion Support one opinion Clearly Support one Clearly support one supported The author has selected opinion opinion The author does not and supported either the The author has selected The author has selected support an opinion or Pro (by arguing in favor and supported either the and supported either the goes back and forth of the topic) or the Con Pro (by arguing in favor Pro (by arguing in favor (by arguing against the of the topic) or the Con of the topic) or the Con between pro and con. topic) but the argument (by arguing against the (by arguing against the is not clear or the topic) and attempts to topic) consistently argument and attempts maintain the argument throughout the essay. to maintain the throughout the essay argument throughout the essay
Reasons & Evidence Research, Facts, & Quotes
30 points out of 60 Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced Too Brief Too Brief Develop the topic Develop the topic The author needs to Either the author has through research through research add commentary no commentary after The author attempts to The author attempts to quotes, or the author prove the thesis prove the thesis did not include enough statement by using statement by using direct quotes. research, facts, and research, facts, and quotes, and uses fact- quotes, and consistently based statements to uses fact-based support reasonable statements to support opinions. reasonable, well-crafted opinions. Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced No Direct Quotes Used some quotes Use well-chosen Use well-chosen The author failed to and facts quotes and facts quotes and facts include direct quotes The author attempts to The author uses direct The author uses direct or did not find use quotes and facts quotes from research. quotes from research. supporting facts. from research but they These quotes help to These quotes are do not strongly prove the thesis appropriate and statement. These quotes necessary to prove the support the argument. are fact-based. thesis statement. These quotes are fact-based. Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced No Quotes, and Too Many Quotes - Long quotes with Support quotes with Evidence Too Similar and yet, No Synthesis some support using commentary and The author lacks The author uses commentary and reasoning quotes or the author quotes and the quotes reasoning The author uses short, needs to address support the argument The author uses long relevant quotes and different viewpoints but the author left the quotes, and attempts to clearly explains how the for synthesis. reader to guess why explain how the quote quote helps to prove the helps to prove the thesis. thesis. The author does the quote is relevant The author does not not leave it up to the or did not explain the leave it up to the reader reader to guess why the reasoning for using quote is relevant, and to guess why the quote is this quote. relevant, and does does explain her or his explain her or his reasoning for using this reasoning for using this quote. quote.
Consider the Audience Opposing Viewpoints
10 points out of 60 Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced Does Not Identify Identifies Opposing Acknowledge Opposing Acknowledge Opposing Opposing Viewpoint Viewpoint Viewpoints Viewpoints The author has not The author identifies an The author considers the The author considers the identified an opposing viewpoint but fact that reasonable and fact that reasonable and opposing viewpoint does not explain how it intelligent people may intelligent people may or does not explain is reasonable or disagree with the thesis disagree with the thesis statement. The author statement The author how it is reasonable dismisses the attempts to state at least clearly states at least one or dismisses the counterargument. one opposing viewpoint opposing viewpoint that counterargument. that reasonable people reasonable people might might use to counter the use to counter the thesis. thesis. Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced Opposing Opposing Viewpoints Counter opposing Counter opposing Viewpoints The author attempts to viewpoints viewpoints The author does not respond to that opposing The author attempts to The author successfully respond to respond to viewpoint, but fails to respond to that opposing responds to that opposing opposing viewpoints address the following: viewpoint, by doing at least viewpoint, by doing at least explaining why one of the following: one of the following: that viewpoint is explaining why explaining why invalid or that viewpoint is that viewpoint is irrelevant invalid or invalid or acknowledging irrelevant irrelevant that viewpoint is acknowledging acknowledging valid, but that viewpoint is that viewpoint is persuading the valid, but valid, but reader that the persuading the persuading the author's facts are reader that the reader that the more relevant author's facts are author's facts are re-direct the reader more relevant more relevant by explaining how re-direct the reader re-direct the reader the counter- by explaining how by explaining how argument can the counter- the counter- actually help prove argument can argument can the main argument actually help prove actually help prove the main argument the main argument Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced Maintain credibility Maintain credibility Maintain credibility Maintain credibility The authors The author attempts to The author attempts to The author keeps a vocabulary is far below keep a respectful tone keep a respectful tone respectful tone throughout grade level or facts and throughout the essay but throughout the essay. The the essay. The author opinions are not fully the vocabulary is below author differentiates facts clearly differentiates facts and accurately grade level or facts and from opinions. The author from opinions. . The author described. opinions are not fully and uses grade level uses vocabulary and accurately described. vocabulary and reasoning. reasoning above grade The author uses and level. The author uses and presents facts correctly and presents facts correctly and accurately. accurately.
A Call to Action Conclusion and Purpose
10 points out of 60 Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced No Conclusion No Synthesis or A Logical A Logical The author does not Conclusion Conclusion Conclusion conclude on the The author concludes, The author The author thesis statement. but does not synthesize successfully proves successfully proves the argument and the the thesis and the thesis and counterargument, attempts a includes a clear leaving the discussion conclusion which conclusion which unclosed. closes the closes the discussion. discussion. Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced No Call to Action A Call to Action A Persuasive Call A Persuasive Call The author does not The author provides to Action to Action provides some action some action for the The author provides The author provides for the reader to reader to take, but lacks some action for the a clear action for the take. persuasive tone. reader to take, and reader to take, and has a strong, has a strong, persuasive tone. persuasive tone. Below Basic Basic Proficient Advanced No Final A Final Statement A Strong Final A Strong Final Statement The essay ends with a statement statement The essay ends final statement but it The essay ends with The essay ends with without a strong lacks support or is not a strong final a strong final conclusion. persuasive. statement that is statement that is relevant or relevant and persuasive. persuasive.