ELT 4B Class: Bolortuya B.

Abortion is a crime. Isnt it?

Once you gave a birth, bring up your child is parents duty. Having a baby is great
but it seems to me that parents forget about how important that they raise up their
children. The study shows that 80% woman decided to have an abortion before they
give birth. The main reason for this parents have lack awareness of family planning.
Consequently, irresponsible parents are booming. Other contributing factor is including
poverty. Furthermore, most of them get an abortion due to poverty and unwilling
pregnancy. Moreover, there are much more cases which affect childrens body and
conscience. For example: In Songino Khairkhan district, 18 th khoroo, 7year-old boy
beaten by their parents. Their neighbor woman heard the scream of child for2-3 hours
and decided to check. When she told them, their parents said: We have a right that we
can kill our child. Give a birth is citizens right but not kill. Human life is the matchless
thing. Thus, we need to distinguish this issue that we have faced.

One way to eradicate the problem would be interrupt the free available to the
illegal abortion and not enough ensure them information about family planning through
internet or social sites and TV. In this way, they can build sustainable family instead of
they are no longer to abort them alongside their children will make a great family
planning for his/her great future.

According to the MNS, total unregistered unemployed workers of 57.6% is youth

whose aged 16-34 is the root of poverty. Lot of parents faced with problem which is
financial issues. In our society, there are so much problem. For instance: to bring up
and ensure food supply, clothes and to get educate them. One possible way to solve
this problem would be government should implement the policy of unemployment and
poverty. For ex, control for the price of basic needs, increase the salary and provide
part-time job with youths. Because youths are becoming parents. The effect of
implementing would be having permanent income. Therefore, It allow children to afford
education and other issues. Furthermore, parents are no longer to depress them
because of financial issues.
 Another possible way to solve this problem would be government should reenact
about the violence. For example: Every citizen must assert to the police which he/she
heard or knew about the violence. If they wouldnt notify about it, government ought to
charge every residents. It would be quite easy to eliminate it and this act will be
impossible to beat their children.

In addition, If you couldnt raise, our society is possible to adopt. In recent

years, Since infertility is increasing a lot, they are willing to adopt children. Especially,
they are willing to adopt new born baby. So that, others who want to adopt their children
from poor households in order to provide childrens right. Consequently, their future will
be sustainable.

.All in all, Its impossible to choose their parents for children. If they would be able
to choose, they will never choose parents who decided to have an abortion, use alcohol,
and violence them. In our society, abortion wasnt reenacted on law. However, it seems
likely that the serious problem and one of the hidden crime.

Cause Solutions Expected results

lack awareness of family interrupt the illegal abortion they can build sustainable
planning family instead of they are no
longer to abort them
alongside their children will
make a great family
planning for his/her great
future.

Poverty and unemployment Government should Parents are no longer to

implement the policy of depress them because of
unemployment and poverty. financial issues.

affect childrens body and Reenact about the violence This act will be impossible
conscience for them to beat their
children