Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Professor J. Ruyle
COLWRIT 109C
April 12, 2017
When I was in high school in China, my grandmother one day told me during our lunch
that one of my cousin at my age, 16, married a 40-year-old man who owns a truck and a small
farm because her parents need money desperately to bail her older brother out of jail. My cousin
might be an uncommon case in my hometown; however, it turns out that around 40% of girls in
Sub-Saharan Africa are married before the age of 18 (UN 2017). When my friends and I were
reading schoolbooks, millions of girls in Sub-Sahara Africa were suffering from the early
marriage; when I was nervous about what I should wear for my prom, millions of girls in Sub-
Saharan Africa are fighting for food for their babies and receive nothing often. There is a
question that nagged at me since I realized that child marriage is a harmful practice which
needed to be eliminated immediately: if my friends and I could go to school and have autonomy
A large body of research shows that it is quite difficult to end child marriage, yet it does
not mean that it is impossible. UN agencies, NGOs, and government institutions are accelerating
their efforts to change the lives of girls in Sub-Sahara Africa, from improving awareness of
women rights over public to implementing laws for protecting girls against child marriage. More
and more people have realized that child marriage is blocking girls from accessing education,
earning political empowerment, and enjoy healthy marriage. In order to tackle this harmful
practice, we should end poverty, engage male leaders, and strengthen law enforcement with
Considerable evidence has proved that poverty is the core driver of pushing girls into
child marriage. When food becomes a scarce resource to live, marring a girl off is the fastest way
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to mitigate the burden of feeding the whole family. Countless girls are sold to the men of
different ages mostly of old men who become their husband if they pay sizeable dowry such as
cattle or cash to girls parents or males who dominate the family. Here are a few heartbreaking
stories about child marriage caused by poverty. Pontinanta J, a girl from South Sudan married at
the age of 13 because her family are so poor and viewed her as an economic burden. Aguet N., a
girl also form South Sudan married to a 75-year-old man at age 15 after her uncles accepted 80
cows from groom family. She tried to stop this marriage, but they threatened her that they will
not take care of her siblings if she kept resisting this marriage (Human Rights Watch, 2017).
Poverty lead millions of girls in Sub-Sahara Africa to child brides. An inevitable fact is
that more young girls are forced to the inappropriate marriage, more severe poverty the whole
family will suffer. Girls Not Brides, an influential organization dedicated to combatting child
marriage emphasized that with little access to education and economic opportunity, they and
their families are more likely to live in poverty (Girls Not Brides, 2017). Actually, it is possible
that girls would stay with family longer before turning to the legal marriage age if their stand of
living improved. This is supported by a study conducted by the Population Council which found
that offering families in Tanzania and Ethiopia economics incentives, such as livestock, to keep
their daughters unmarried and in school led to girls at age of 15 to 17 being significantly less
likely to be married compared to those in community not participating in the program (Human
Rights Watch, 2017). As we can see, escaping poverty could effectively prevent girls from being
However, becoming rich does not promise child marriage will be eradicated
simultaneously. Local peoples attitude toward child marriage has not changed, they still regard it
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April 12, 2017
as a part of culture which should be inherited for generations. Efforts to change attitudes are
actually fundamental for all reforms, including eliminating harmful practice. Based on this
essence, engaging families and communities to join this reform is critical to the whole
movement, especially for the males who are the leaders of families and communities. Generally,
the father decides girls marriage; therefore, it is time to thoroughly transform fathers attitude.
An effective strategy is to create an organization which could unite all fathers, brothers and boys
to protect human rights of girls. Nepal shows a good example Dalit social Development
center, an organization that helps men who want to support gender equality and womens rights.
The men work together to support each other in difficult decisions, and to convince their peers
that gender equality is better for everyone (CARE, 2014). This organization incorporated many
others civil social groups such as CARE to implement innovative strategies in preventing
adolescence girls from child marriage in Nepal. A man called Bagadur in this organization did
not comply with the custom of making marry decision for his son but talk to him about what he
wanted for his own marriage. This is an example that could be used in Sub-Saharan Africa. If
fathers, brothers, and future husbands all could keep in mind that child marriage actually causes
damaging consequences to their life rather than bringing imaginary benefit, they might consider
time is that girls could be source of income if they get education as boys do. In other words, not
only girls are not the burden of family, but on the contrast they could help family defeat poverty.
California, is about measuring the impact of deworming project on school enrollment length of
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April 12, 2017
kids in Kenya. The study found that females who had gone to school for extra 0.35 years gained
20% higher market earnings, which indicates that girls who obtain more education could earn
more when they enter the job market. (Miguel 2013). Will fathers value their daughters if they
Aside from family and community effort, laws and policies are underpinning in
terminating child brides, fortunately, a large number of counties and regional-based conventions
in Sub-Saharan Africa have set the legal minimum age of marriage to 18. Two influential
organizations in Sub-Sahara Africa recently have implemented a policy that no person under the
age of 18 should marry (Odala, 2013). And 32 African counties have set the minimum age of
Nevertheless, if we just rely on this policy and settle down forever, the rooted practice
actually will be not changed. In some rural area, laws conflict with the customary laws, and laws
are mostly not enforced effectively. Violators generally have not received sanctions due to the
complexity of laws and the leak of laws. The fact of matter people should consider is that when
people have nothing to lose, they would like to take risk and violate the law with ignoring any
consequence. Therefore, only peoples empty stomach was satisfied with food, they would have
energy to think about abidance of law. In short, laws are useless when peoples basic needs are
not fulfilled. This also could explain the exact reason of ineffective monitoring of law and
impunity, which is that officials are busy of grasping briberies and lost their faith to serving girls
my question that girls in Sub-Saharan Africa like me and every other girl in the world should and
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April 12, 2017
could have the opportunity to not to be hampered by harmful marriage to create their future by
themselves. This cannot succeed without cooperation from different sectors. First, governments
should use resources wisely and genuinely on addressing poverty--this is the foundation of the
whole process. Second, governments, UN, and NGOs should mobilize fathers or leaders of
family and community to this march to end child marriage. As girls potential should be unlocked
by their family, fathers potential must be unleashed as well. Once their attitude towards girls
changed, the situation will be improved undoubtedly. Last but not least, effective monitoring on
law enforcement is the backbone of what we have been longing for a long time. Fortunately, my
cousin lives in harmony with her husband, and in fact her husband is not only a responsible
husband, but is also an experienced farmer. Like a sophisticated farmer would not just lay down
after sowing seeds, he knows he cannot just pray for luck of rain and the quality of seed to obtain
a harvest. Instead, he is determined to ensure every step is taken to achieve his goal. Same as
growing crops, we should make sure that every step of eliminating child marriage is applied
solidly.
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Professor J. Ruyle
COLWRIT 109C
April 12, 2017
Work Cited
Ending Child Marriage in Africa. Human Rights Watch. N.p., 20 Dec.2015. Web. 11 Apr
2017.
Change Starts with Me. CARE. N.p., 9 July. 2014. Web. 11. Apr 2017.
Nisha Varia. Ending Child Marriage. Human Rights Watch. N.p., Web. 11 Apr 2017.
Violet Odala. How Important is Minimum Age of Marriage Legislation to End Child Marriage
#YouthStats: Girls and Young Women. United Nations. N.p., Web. 12 Apr 2017.