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The Open Door Web Site: At the beginning of the This article was EXACTLY
History : The Second 20th Century, nearing the was I needed for a
Industrial Revolution : The start of the Industrial comparative article about the
Industrial Revolution and Revolution. Armies fought way previous wars were
Warfare fought compared to those
on foot or on horse, with
Shirley Burchill after the industrial
swords, lances or muzzle- revolutions. I can use this
loading muskets. However information to show a
with the outbreak of the correlation between
Great War in 1914, the advancing technology and
musket had been replaced the death tolls in the world
by the brand new repeating wars as well.
rifle. This new rifle had a
much faster rate of fire I could also write about how
than the musket as well as with the navy growing the
an accurate range of up to increase of naval warfare
lead to more industrialization
500 metres compared to
of producing these massive
the musket which was steel ships.
highly inaccurate. The old,
massive, slow bronze Same thing as stated above
cannon had been replaced but with aircraft and war
by cast steel guns. Which vehicles in general (tanks,
were used in Navy ships trucks etc.)
which allowed for much
larger and heavily armored I can also use the photos that
ships than ever before. are included as they are
With the new techniques of excellent visuals of the
changes of weaponry and
producing steel that arose
technology.
in the industrial revolution,
these ships could be made
out of this fortified steel
instead of wooden beams.
Airplanes had their first
industrial use in World War
one as well, they could be
used for simple scouting
missions or even bombing
missions. This gave armies
another leg up on the
competition in the first
World War and this also
carried onto the second as
well.
The impact of the Industrial In World War II, the This essay is a more factual
Revolution on Warfare laboratory touched almost piece than the previous
Walter S. Zapotoczny every aspect of the war source and it has factual
PDF File. operations and profoundly information about World War
influenced tactics and II and its industrial growth.
strategy. British, American,
and Canadian universities, With this paper
and in immense number of I can address the
industries, as well as the specific technological
research departments of all advances of world war
the armed services in all the II and how they
Allied countries. Worked at affected the war and
top speed to perfect old even how we live our
weapons, to invent new ones. lives today
The most important of the Zapotoczny is
new scientific developments a well published
of World War II were radar, historian and I can
the proximity fuse, electronic possibly use this
fire control equipment, anti- when addressing his
submarine devices, research when I put it
incendiaries, and rockets. in my project
This excludes the Atomic Putting in the
Bomb as that was a massive information about how
scientific feat as well as an the rise of industry in
industrial feat. All of these the wars lead to the
developments lead to the pissing contest that
mass productions of more was the cold war
reliable and sturdy military
technology that could
withstand battle. This article
also addresses the American
Civil War and the
technological advancements
from that war until World War
one. Another point brought
up is the fact that with all of
this industrialization, it lead to
an arms race that would
make the nations involved
competitive towards each
other in a way unlike any
before it. This sort of arms
race lead to the beginning of
the cold war which is a result
of this mass industrialization
of the military and arms.
The Industrialisation of war: Of land based deaths, the This website/ article has a lot
lessons from World War I evidence points to artillery by of statistics from the first
http://www.sgr.org.uk/resourc far the leading cause, world war and has more
es/industrialisation-war- followed by machine guns. As information on the
lessons-world-war-i WWI began, nations had their progression of industry in
best scientists and engineers warfare.
working to create a military This article is
advantage through from a government
innovation. Development of website from the UK
lethal gas, in the case of WWI so it is an official
was chlorine gas, was source
developed in April of 1915. This source is
Technological advancements the one that has the
increased the death tolls stats of the death tolls
compared to any other war of WWI.
before it.
Artillery 6
Miliion (5m military
and 1m Civilian
Machine guns
3 Million (2m Military
and 1m Civilian)
Submarines &
Rifles (.5 Million)

BBC- History- World Wars: What made World War One This website
The Western Front and the so different was the long-term hits on the facts of
Birth of Total War impact of the industrial warfare before world
Revolution, with its war 1 and how it
accompanying political and changed in just the
social changes. This was the few years building up
first mass global war of the to the war. I feel I can
industrialised age, a use this to start off my
demonstration of the paper with this
prodigious strength, information to give my
resilience and killing power of paper a good hook at
modern states. Between the start comparing
1871 and 1914 further how wars were fought
institutional, technological in the years before
and scientific developments WWI and During
made differences to the WWI.
conduct of warfare that could With this
not be tested without a major article being from
war. With full mobilization in BBC it is an outlook
effect for WWI, all of these on how the war and
new industries and industry was seen in
technological advancements the European nations
could make their first during WWI and the
appearances on the following years.
battlefield.
"U.S. Economy in World War I." The most important federal This source shows me an
EHnet. N.p., n.d. Web. 14 Mar. agency, at least in terms of unbelievable number of
2017. the scope of its mission, was statistics from WWI and how
the War Industries Board. the economy changed as
The Board was established in industry for war increased.
July of 1917 . Its purpose This is going to help me tie in
was no less than to assure the economic side of industry
the full mobilization of the so much better.
nations resources for the I can address
purpose of winning the war. how the economy of
The real choice for the the United States
economic effect of the war changed during WWI
appeared to be between two and how it affected
options: raising taxes, or the nations economy
borrowing from the public. post-war and for WW-
Economists from the time II
said that raising taxes was I can bring up
the way to go. In October of the War Revenue Act
1917 Congress founded the and how it affects the
War Revenue Act, this act Economy during
increased the personal and Wartime.
corporate tax rates and
established more taxes on
the public such as the luxury
tax.

"BBC - History - World Wars: The dominant weapon of This shows the stunning fact
The Art of War." BBC News. World War One was artillery, of how effective/deadly
BBC, n.d. Web. 14 Mar. 2017. which accounted for about 70 artillery was in WWI. It
percent of all casualties. It accounted for 70% of all
could fire a shell weighing deaths on the battlefield. I
half a ton upwards of 15 km mean it could shoot a 1000
(10 Miles), almost invariably pound shell over 10 miles,
at targets that had been that is insane to me.
identified hours or days in Speaking that little over 50
advance. With the years before that we were
construction of the Howitzer using calvary runs in the
artillery cannon in the start of American Civil War as
WWI, the battlefield changed effective strategies.
forever. These cannons were I can also
an improvement of the address the facts
previous cannons who had about the howitzer
an effective range of less cannon specifically
than a mile. These Howitzer and how its advances
cannons could shoot a 15in made it the best
projectile weighing half a ton weapon around for
up to 10 miles away many years to come
accurately. The However and how a variation of
these cannons had a severe it is even used in
downfall, they were very todays military
immobile and could not be I can also
used in battle very close to address the fact about
the frontlines due to the the nations ability to
possibility of being overran. produce their
The industrial revolution weapons in an almost
dramatically increased the unlimited capacity,
killing power of weapons, and boosting industry and
afforded means to produce the economy.
them in unlimited quantities.

David Weinberger / January What economic value did I absolutely love this article, I
26 2012/ 8. "World War II: tanks, planes and other war can use both sides of the
Economic Stimulant or machines provide, other than economic spectrum of war for
Depressant?" The Daily Signal. their purpose to win the war? this. He talks about the
N.p., 27 Jan. 2012. Web. 14 Put another way, building positive of war and industry
Mar. 2017. fleets of battleships and and how it affects the
proceeding to blow them all economy. Then he addresses
up in the ocean increases the cons of going into war
GNP, but is that really a wise economically.
use of economic resources?
Does it raise living standards
or improve anyones day-to-
day life? Rationing in the
united states allowed the
allocation of resources to be
much easier for the war
effort. Resources were freed
up and redeployed to both
fronts of the war. Inflation
rates in the states also
decreased due to this rise in
economy and allocation of
resources. This national
production movement
allowed the economy to
expand exponentially.

NPR. "Ike's Warning Of Military Another concern, Bowman This speech from Ike about
Expansion, 50 Years Later." says, was the possib the military industrial complex
NPR. NPR, 17 Jan. 2011. Web. ility that as the military and and how we needed to gain
14 Mar. 2017. the arms industry gained control before it spun out of
power, they would be a threat control. And this was written
to democracy, with civilians in 1961 after Korea and both
losing control of the military- World Wars so he had seen it
industrial complex. While this all and saw it coming.
has been used as a rallying However no one listened and
cry for opponents of military now the complex runs our
expansion, many see it as an nation.
inevitable effect of the over I can bring up
industrialization of the the facts about how
military. Ike was more the reliance of our
concerned with the building military to always
of hospitals and schools than need the newest and
the further excess funding of best gear makes it
our military when not at war. where the war
Another concern was that as machine is constantly
you give the arms industry evolving.
and military money and The
power, they might pose as a technology race
threat to democracy, as this mentioned in the
is one of the starting signs of article is a good
a military coup. Americas example of the cold
new reliance on sophisticated war and how it can be
weapons technology also used as a great
helped bring a technology example of
race with the soviets industrialization in two
nations that were
striving to have the
best military
technology of the
time.

"Interview on Industrial In this interview I interviewed I can address


History." Personal interview. 6 Dr. Mark Wilson, a History how Dr. Wilsons
Apr. 2017. professor from UNC Charlotte background and many
whos focus of history is years of study in
Industrial History. He has industrial history
written a book on my exact makes him a very
topic actually. My interview reliable and
with him however was more trustworthy source.
focused for my multi-genre I can use Dr.
project towards my audience. Wilsons opinions to
I asked Dr. Wilson how well make my points in my
he believed that industrial argument to the
history is addressed in high textbook companies
school history textbooks and even possibly
today. He believes that it is bring him in to
covered well enough to give a address them direct (if
starting base knowledge for it was a real
students interested to take presentation)
further higher skilled classes
at college. While I personally
do not agree with that
statement, Dr. Wilson also
gave insight on many
questions I asked about the
economic effect of military
industrialization in the early
20th century. Overall this
interview is a very useful
piece of information for my
multi -genre project and a
very reliable source as well.

Morris, Dalton How well In this survey I asked 25 This survey


were the effects of industry Freshman students from my addresses many
on warfare in the 20th century floor on lynch hall. All of these students from different
covered in your high school students are from different majors and
history textbooks? Survey 6 majors and backgrounds so I backgrounds, so I get
April, 2017 feel that I get the full scope of a wide scope of a
my audiences target group. survey group.
Not just history majors. With
this grouping of students I
can properly address my
target audience and hit at
their emotions by showing
them what their target
audience thinks that the topic
was covered. The results of
this survey was the following
Good
Coverage : 8 students
or 32%
So-So
coverage : 5 students
or 20%
Little to no
coverage: 12 students
or 48%

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