Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Wesley Lynde
UWRT 1102-026
Professor Douglas
February 9, 2017
During the time that America was involved in the Vietnam War, there were many social
issues that were called into question, one of them being the legal voting age. At the time, you
were not allowed to vote for the president or any representatives unless you were twenty-one
years of age or older but the age for young men to register to be drafted into the military was set
at eighteen. Many people argued that if you are legally old enough to serve your country in war
than you ought to be able to vote, and eventually the voting age was lowered. Today, and for
roughly the past forty years, a similar debate has been spoken about; how old should you be to be
able to buy and drink alcoholic beverages? In a 2012 article written by Tom Price for CQ
Researcher titled, Alcohol Abuse: Can underage drinking be curbed?, the social issues
surrounding alcohol consumption by minors are explored in an effort to find the most effective
methods to stop underage drinking. My second article is a scientific paper about an experiment
conducted in New Zealand (where the legal drinking age is eighteen) looking at the effects of
alcohol, age, and the number of passengers on fatal driving injury. Reviewed and accepted by the
scientific community, the authors predicted that drinking by teenagers had a greater effect on
fatal car crashes and even made legal implications on policy. While on two different matters
within the same subject, these articles had some similarities but brought diverse and useful
information. Since the legal drinking age in the United States is twenty-one, many people
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question if it should be lowered to eighteen since that is the age you are considered an adult.
The American people have always loved their alcohol, making it one of the larger money
making industries in the country, but that of course comes with consequences for alcohol
abusers. While abuse has declined in recent years for the people as a whole, one group continues
to show a steady amount of underage and binge drinkers: college students. It is well known and
well documented that college students the heaviest drinkers, even drinking more that non
students that are in the same age group (Price 501). In his rather lengthy article filled to the brim
with facts and figures as well as commentary from leading experts on the subject, Tom Price
tries to get to the bottom of what causes underage people to abuse alcohol and find that most
productive ways of preventing it from happening. These include lowering the legal drinking age,
making alcohol more difficult to obtain, and nixing it from campuses all together. For the
readers purposes, the section about lowering the drinking age contained loads of solid, useful
information. In one passage Price quotes the National Youth Rights Association Vice President
stating, What does it say about us as a country that were willing to send our young people
overseas to fight and defend our freedom, but when they get home we target them as not
responsible enough to enjoy a drink with friends and family? (505). In addition to
thought-provoking writing, the author incorporates vivid illustrations, charts, and graphs that are
easy to understand and makes the content of the article even more comprehendible, such as graph
comparing teen drinking in America, where the drinking age is twenty-one, to Europe where the
legal age in eighteen in all countries (Price 508). This article does a fantastic job at providing
thoughts from both sides of each argument, making the audience think about issues in different
lights, including an entire page dedicated to a pro-con debate between two well-credentialed men
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on the question if raising the tax on alcohol would reduce abuse (Price 517). It is honestly
difficult to find any legitimate weaknesses within this exceptionally written, well-referenced and
well-thought-out publication.
No matter what the age of the person drinking, driving drunk is by far the most dangerous
and deadliest thing a person can do. In a paper titled The influence of alcohol, age and number of
passengers on the night-time risk of driver fatal injury in New Zealand, three scientists examine
how different age groups drinking and driving correlate with fatal car injuries. It is important to
understand that the legal drinking age in New Zealand is eighteen years old. Shorter in length,
the reader gets a large variety of numbers, charts and graphs having to do with things like Blood
Alcohol Content (BAC) levels, the age groups of the samples, and the number of passengers that
the driver had in the vehicle. In the conclusion section of the paper, the researchers were able to
state with confidence that, A teenager with a BAC of 30 mg/dl carrying two or more passengers
has a risk that is thirty-four times the risk of a sober driver aged thirty and over driving with one
passenger. (Keall 60). The passage then goes on to question if the age limit for drinking in New
Zealand is appropriate. With that being said, it must be noted that the sample size that the study
was able to obtain for the teenage age group was probably too scarce to allow for an extremely
accurate risk curve, but shortly after the author points out that a better risk curve for younger
drivers can be found in similar studies (Keall 58). Therefore, with limited information pertaining
to the line of inquiry in question, this article has to be deemed less useful for research.
Author Tom Price of the Alcohol Abuse article did an absolutely wonderful job of
conveying the issues surrounding underage drinking and binge drinking, as well as exploring
several real, practical solutions that have the potential to make a positive effect on the issue.
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Using ethos and logos appeals, the author was able to provide many real and logical insights into
the issue. Price went above and beyond by providing everything from real news stories, data
from scientific studies, a fairly extensive history of alcohol in America, and colorful pictures and
images that connect to what the audience is reading. But perhaps the most important and relevant
reason that this article is superior is that fact that it remains neutral by giving the reader both
sides of the story and forces them to think about what they are reading. Among the many cultural
issues covered, one involves a group of college presidents calling for the legal drinking age to be
lowered to eighteen as it is in Europe and other places around the world, citing that fact that
young people should not be uneducated about safe drinking practices and instead be taught
earlier how to drink safely and not to excess. While the scientific study does not specifically
mention anything about Americans, it is relevant because of the fact that the legal drinking age is
lower and can be looked to as a data source for the United States in making a decision on the
issue.
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Works Cited
Keall, Michael D., William J. Frith, and Tui L. Patterson. The Influence of Alcohol, Age, and
Number of Passengers on the Night-time Risk of Driver Fatal Injury in New Zealand.
ScienceDirect. Accident Analysis & Prevention, Jan. 2004. Web. 31 Jan. 2017.
McCartt, A. T., Hellinga, L. A., & Kirley, B. B. (April 01, 2010). The effects of minimum legal
drinking age 21 laws on alcohol-related driving in the United States. Journal of Safety
Price, Tom. "Alcohol Abuse: Can Underage Drinking Be Curbed?" (2012): 501-23. CQ