Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Good story the story impressive me. I love it. The description about his fathers
action is great. Just smoking and dont say anything. When he have to leave his room.
He describe the room as a old friend. I can feel how sad he is, this part is great. This is
some small mistakes in the article. Like the wrong tense. Another
have to leave the room, then he talks about another thing happened
with his father. Lastly he talks about something before they leave. I