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Feedback about me

Pim
- low confident/self esteem cause you to not even try to accomplish something new.
- it hard at first but if you never try, you will never be successful.
Cherry
- achievement never come for free.
- If you want a big reward, earn it.
Mr. Dan Simond
- Dont be lazy and and copy everything. Be original.
Pea
- I think you are not lazy, bit youre just lack of motivation.
My Brother
- You have to leave your comfort zone in order to explore the whole new world outside.

Feedback Personal Statement


Mr. Dan Simond
- shouldnt ask question
- 2nd paragraph too short, explain more l.
Minnie
- Too short
- Should tell the audience more about your capability
- grammar
Mee
- Name introduction in body 2
- research more

Feedback interview #1
Kim
- no repeat others people word
- Explain more
- Eye contact
Eye
- bad communication

Feedback interview #2
Kim
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Eye
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Mr. Dan Simond
- Bad camera angle
- improve gesture
- answer didnt make sense about obstacle

What to do?
Exercise
- Keep your body strong and make you happier.
Read news
- Keep you up to date and help you gain more knowledge.
Get enough sleep
- Sleep enough help you conserve your body and repair your brain.
Activity
- Might help you to find more about what you want to do in your life.

Goals
- To be more update in world news or local news
- To have more activity

Interview
- To be more update in world news or local news
- To have more activity

Obstacles
- laziness
- sleepiness
- exhaustion

Journal - do, didnt do, how do you feel?


- 04 May 2017:
- I didnt do what I have to do because of too many homework and I have tutoring at 5 PM. I came back at 3.30 PM and suddenly sleep because
of tiredness beat me up. I was a bit disappointed because I had expected to do it as soon as I came back home. Right now, I feel like Im
accomplish nothing. I am anticipate to sleep in 9.30 PM after I finished writing this journal.
- 05 May 2017:
- I have to sleep so early that I did not have time to read news and do what I should do because tomorrow I have to go to Impact Arena in Muang
Thong Thani because they have an exhibition of architecture and art design. It was considered as 2nd largest exhibition in Asia and still
maintain their status. I have to wake up at 6 AM which means that I need to go to bed early because tomorrow I have to use energy to explore
the area.
- 06 May 2017:
- I wake up at 6 and arrived there at 8 AM. After that, I entered to the area where they have a lot of booths that sell a products and necessities for
architects. I was amazed when I saw so many people came into exhibition. There were so many house and building models. Everything went
inside my head as I continued to survey the section area. I felt like I saw a whole new planet and went into the world of creativity. Today, I
achieved 2 things that I have to do which are exercise since I walked often and as I walk, I had done my activities which are taking picture of
design and explore all department. I felt happy today because I made some progress on journal record.
- 07 May 2017:
- I wake up at 11 AM and eat breakfast(burger king) at 11.45 AM. Today I didnt move so much because I cannot resist myself from taking a
break after yesterday exhibition. I ended up lazy all day writing a journal and reads some Thai news online about the effect of taxation on
middle and lower class.
- 08 May 2017:
- I go to school as normal and take class as usual. I felt a bit sleepy due to late sleep last night. I did not do any requirement action that I suppose
to do because I forget to. Right now, I should go to sleep because it is late already and I dont want to waste more time.
- 09 May 2017:
- I did not do anything today due to exhaustion and fell asleep unconsciously after I came back home. The tutoring course start at 5 PM Mon -
Fri. I sleep for 1 hour approximately which is the time that I should be used for completing my schedule. As always, I did not do what I expect
to do.
- 10 May 2017:
- Today is school holiday. I wake up at 11 AM which is very late for normal person. I did not move around so much today so I sat on a couch all
day and playing game. In the evening, I open television and saw a news about the ex president of credit union co-operative government in
Thailand corrupted money and used that money to buy lands and sold it to L&H which somehow Tammakai temple involve in helping
laundering money.
- 11 May 2017:
- I have a flu all day while I study. When I arrive back home, I have to rest and take a medicine. I didnt go to tutoring due to my weak condition
of my body. However, I still have to pack up my suitcase because tomorrow I will be having a family trip so I did not do any activity today. I
also have to sleep early because if I am not getting better tomorrow, trip will not be fun because everyone have to take care of me.
- 12 May 2017:
- I wake up early and be ready for the upcoming trip. It takes up to 3 hour t arrive at Huahin. It get rainy today so we all decide to find go to
Bluport mall in Huahin first for some lunch. When a rain stop finally, we went to our resident and pack down my stuff. I sat on sofa and watch
some news about Korean King that over price in Thailand compare to Singapore and also that channel that sells a product on TV seems to be
taking advantages of people who watch it. They buy a cheap product and resell it with high price proclaim that the price they bought is actually
expensive and gave out special promotion to get visitors attention.
- 13 May 2017:
- I wake up late today and I did not do anything except sleeping and watch movies at my resident. In the end, no progress for the activities.
- 14 May 2017:
- I wake up early to pack my bag and get ready to leave the condo. We arrive at 3.30 PM and I fell asleep as soon as I went back home and did
not achieve any activity today.
- 15 May 2017:
- I wake up at 5.30 AM and be ready for school as normal and no progress on any activity. However, I planned to read some news tomorrow
because it has been too long that I did not read any.
- 16 May 2017:
- I read news yesterday about oil and gold price increase in America after cyber attack. However. I did not do anything else today.
- 17 May 2017:
- Today, I didnt read any news and didnt do any activity.
- 18 May 2017:
- I also didnt do any activity today.
- 19 May 2017:
- I forget to do any activity because I fell asleep after I came back home .
- 20 May 2017:
- The last day of this experiment, I still didnt make any progress. I guess this is the fourth day already that I have accomplish nothing.

Explore/find
Sleep(hr) News Exercise
hobby

04 May 2017: 7.10 hours - - -

05 May 2017: 4.49 hours - - -

06 May 2017: 7.10 hours - Walking/jogging Explore the


area/taking picture
Explore/find
Sleep(hr) News Exercise
hobby

of interior design

Effect of taxation on
07 May 2017: 6.45 hours middle/lower - -
class(Thailand)

08 May 2017: 6.11 hours - - -

09 May 2017: 5.26 hours - - -

Tamakai temple
secretly help
10 May 2017: 8.35 hours Land&House - -
laundering money
(Thailand)

11 May 2017: 7.32 hours - - -

Korean king is now


about to bankrupt
12 May 2017: 8.45 hours due to overprice in - -
Thailand with low
cost.

13 May 2017: 7.08 hours - - -

14 May 2017: 7.28 hours - - -

15 May 2017: 6.10 hours - - -

Gold and oil price


16 May 2017: 5.54 hours increase in America - -
after cyborg attack

17 May 2017: 6.15 hours - - -

18 May 2017: 6.28 hours - - -

19 May 2017: 6.13 hours - - -

20 May 2017: 7.19 hours - - -

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