Essay Outline

Women with some Education and lock Education

I. Introduction

My education

1. It took me seven years to come back to school

2. Having some education is good for women because they can

improve their lives in some ways as economical, psychological, and social.

II. Body

1. Being well educated could be helpful on womens lives on

economical way

a. Women can be independent

b. Pay for education

c. Support family

2. Psychological is another way that women with education can be

successful in life

a. Face better the problems in life

3. Social way

a. Women can serve to the society

b. Help another women and families

III. Conclusion

We can easily see from these examples the differences that education
makes on women.
 The good and bad side of using facebook

I. Thesis statement : Facebook is a social network, and it is used by some people around the
world. Indonesia is the 3th country after USA and England for the most face book user. It has
some good and bad side that many people should consider.
II. Topic sentence : there are good sides of using facebook.
A. Main supporting detail : communication media and entertainment.
1. Supporting detail : chatting
2. Supporting detail : having communication with old friend with some facility
served.
3. Supporting detail : sharing pictures, experiences.
B. Main supporting detail : facebook for business.
1. Supporting detail : facebook as promotion media.
2. Supporting detail : connect with buyers and other business man.
C. Main supporting detail : facebook is used for invitation of an event and meeting
1. Supporting detail : by create a forum, some people can share an event and invite
other people to join.
2. Supporting detail : some people use facebook for meeting and use it for discussion
about their planing the next destination or about an event.
Concluding sentence: they are some good sides of facebook for people. It can help their job
and it main function is to communicate with other people around the world.
III. Topic sentence : there are some bad sides of using facebook.
A. Main supporting sentence : some people use facebook for deception.
Supporting detail : shally case.
B. Main supporting sentence : kidnapping.
Supporting sentence : some case of students who kidnapped by new friend by flirt
via facebook.
Concluding sentence : Many bad sides are appearing when using facebook
especially for the unwise people. Many crime facts are happen and many people should
consider of it.
 Concluding sentence : the use of facebook is depends on the users. It can be
useful if it used for the positive purpose such as business, studies, and entertainment and it
can be useless if it used without any responsibilities.

FLOOD IN JAKARTA

I. Introduction

General Statement : As the rainy season comes, special district of Jakarta faces
serious problem such as flood.

Thesis Statement : There are three main aspects associated with the cause of
flood in Jakarta: global, regional, and local.

II. Body

A. Global Aspect : Global warming partly to support for heavy rainfall events

1. Warmer air can hold more moisture.

2. Extreme amounts of rain/increasing frequently and intensity

of heavy rainfall.

3. Global warming changes climate conditions.

B. Regional Aspect : Deforestation region because of development of farms

plantations and housing has reduced rain water absorption.

1. Discouraging flood prone area.

2. Protecting natural system such as wetland that help buffer

against floods.

C. Local Aspect : Deforestation region because of human presence and

subsequent activities near river has also contributed the
problem, the city ground surfaces are primarily covered by
hard material.

III. Conclusion
To conclude, to accommodate the levels of rainwater needs integrated drainage system
and an increase in the size of water channels also program to dredge sediment from the
citys rivers, canals and lake.