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The organization of The organization is The organization is The organization is The essay shows
ideas supports the appropriate and the generally formulaic or little evidence of
ORGANIZATION writers focus. Ideas sequencing of ideas appropriate and the inappropriate. The organization or
Introduction/body/conclusion are grouped in a is logical. Varied ideas are clearly response may lack a sequencing. 5
Sequence of ideas logical manner. transitions are used. sequenced, but may clear introduction or Transitions are not
Grouping of ideas Effective and varied be repetitive. conclusion. used. The response
Effective transitions transitions are used. Transitions are used Transitions are rare. is incomplete or too
brief.
Awareness of purpose
The writer utilizes The language and The language and The language and The language and
carefully crafted tone of the essay tone are appropriate. tone are uneven. tone are
STYLE phrases to create a enhance the Word choice is Word choice is inappropriate.
Sentence variety sustained tone and persuasive purpose. adequate, but may simple, ordinary, or Word choice is 5
Word choice an authoritative Word choice is be simple or repetitive. There is incorrect or
Audience awareness voice. Word choice appropriate. ordinary. Some minimal variation in confusing. The
Personal voice reflects an advanced Sentences are varied. sentence variety is sentence length and response is
vocabulary. evident. structure. incomplete or too
brief.
The writer The writer The writer The writer The writer lacks
demonstrates full demonstrates demonstrates demonstrates understanding of the
CONVENTIONS command of the knowledge of the sufficient control of minimal control of conventions of
Sentence formation conventions of conventions of the conventions of the conventions of written English. 5
Subject-verb agreement written English written English. written English. written English. Errors are pervasive.
Standard word forms language. No errors Errors are minor and Errors may interfere Errors are frequent The response is
Punctuation, spelling, and are evident. do not interfere with with meaning, but and interfere with incomplete or too
capitalization meaning. are not distracting. meaning. brief.
TOTAL POINTS: 20
Student: Katia Mulon