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2016 12
Part I Writing
Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a state-owned
business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a choice between the
two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.

Title A Challenging Career Choice


Introduction Bkgrd: Chinese dream to work in a state-owned
business/young people in comfort vs challenging
zone.
Thesis: I prefer a challenging career choice to work in
joint ventures after graduation.
Body TS: I choose a joint venture over a state-owned
business
Because it might challenge, and at the same time
benefit youth like me for 3 reasons.
Spt: 1. Dynamic environment (high efficiency,
flexibility)
2. platform for all my talents, innovative ideas
3. market-driven, profit driven, more competitive
and better sense of success
Conclusion Re thesis: Joint ventures are more suitable for new
college graduates for they are more efficient, flexible
and competitive. We can make full use of talents and
potentials to realize our career and even life dreams.

Sig: (only when the young generation are brave


enough to make challenging career choices can the
society keep a more healthy mechanism and
sustainable development.)

1:
Challenge Yourself
To work in a state-owned business has long been the dream of thousands of
Chinese, but I prefer to challenge myself by working in a joint venture upon
graduation, if there is a chance

First, I do incline to find a job in joint ventures because they often represent
more flexibility, great innovation and high efficiency. Working in such a dynamic
environment can always make me feel ambitious. Second, it provides a chance
for me to exert my talents and pursue my dream to work in joint ventures. We all
know joint ventures are market-oriented and profit-oriented, which means I can
always take my potentials to full play and fulfill my very aspiration for a
successful career.
In a word, working in joint ventures would be my first choice upon graduation as
they are more flexible, innovative and efficient. It ensures me to use my talents to
fulfill my dream of a successful career.
2:

Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the c
areer choice
which is truly a tough choice. Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue.
Some hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a stated
-
owned business, which will guarantee my life after retirement, but others take th
e attitude that a joint venture outweighs any other jobs as it may provide higher i
ncome for employees.

As to myself, I prefer the latter view. A joint venture, especially a high-


salary joint venture, exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of peopl
e, with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to make sure my reti
rement pension is good enough, high-
salary is exactly what I need just now. In my view, our career choices largely dep
end on where we want to stay for the rest of life. For me, metropolis is the place
where I can grasp loads of opportunities and achieve my personal dreams. As I h
old the view that live in the moment, not the future, and also in order to finance
myself in some aspects such as the transportation, the house-renting, or social
activities, a joint venture can satisfy my needs for the consumption I mentioned a
bove.

All in all, the essential difference between a stated-owned business and


a joint venture lies in what suits you most. In my case, a joint venture is always
the first and only consideration of my choice of career.

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