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When transitioning from the five paragraph essay to the college essay,
breaking out of its intro, body paragraph 1, body paragraph 2, body
paragraph 3, conclusion format and its tripartite and rationale-less
thesis are not the only changes you will need to make to your writing
style.
You will also have to learn to bulk up the content of each paragraph. I
dislike giving rules or formulas to students when it comes to college
writing because nearly every rule or formula has both weaknesses and
exceptions. But a general guideline for the paragraphs in your college
essays is that they should be about 1/3 to 1/2 of a page. Any longer,
and chances are good that you have more than one main idea. In which
case, you need to find the other secondary main ideas and give them
their own paragraphs.
However, students are more concerned when they cant get their
paragraphs to be even a third of a page long. They usually think this is
because they simply have nothing more to say, which in argumentative
writing is not usually the case. Usually the inability to get paragraphs
to be long enough is the result of writing paragraphs that are missing
key components.
In the five paragraph essay, each paragraph had a topic sentence and
then a bunch of supportsupport which often consisted of a
hodgepodge of examples sort of thrown at the reader in a kind of
barrage.
In the college essay, you need to contextualize your examples for the
reader. If you are writing a good complex essay, even your topic
sentence will require more explanation than just one sentence.
Below are the five components of a college paragraph. They follow the
order in which they are most commonly found in a paragraph; however,
this is not the only possible or even successful order.
1. Topic Sentence.
Unlike the 5 paragraph essay, the topic sentence here has two main
functions, one of which it shares with the old five paragraph essay
format. First, the topic sentence summarizes the main point of the
paragraph. Think of it as a mini-thesis. What your main thesis does
for the whole paper, the topic sentence does for the paragraph. This is
because not all of the sentences in the paragraph may clearly and
directly support the thesis. But they all have to support the topic
sentence. Secondly, though, it needs to make explicit how the main
point of that paragraph supports or moves forward your main thesis.
2. Explanation and Expansion.
Again, usually, if well written, the ideas in your topic sentence will be
a bit complicated. You ought to need more than one sentence to make
all the finer points of them clear. In a few argumentative
based sentences, you can elaborate, explain, and expand upon your main
point. Sometimes you give background information or support for
argumentative points here. What this cant be is examples.
3. Examples.
Usually students do okay on this. This is something you are familiar
with from high school writing.
4. Analysis.
So what? Why? How? Why should the reader care? What does this
say about the larger society? What does this say to further the
thesis? You need to make clear to the reader what you as a writer get
from the examples. Remember the movie with a friend analogy.
5. Transitions.
Finish the paragraph up with a sentence or two that helps move the
reader into the next point. We will talk more about these later in the
semester.
Depending on how it is that you write, you may use this list in one of
two ways. Some students who are very unsure of writingin general
or without the five paragraph frameworkmay want to use this as a
guide to spur them to think about what to write next as they write the
first draft of a paragraph.
Other students may want to use it as a checklist. Once they have
written the first draft of a paper, they might compare their paragraphs to
the list, noting what is missing and rewriting the paragraphs as
appropriate.
To give you an idea of what a college paragraph looks like, below see
both a more high school-ish and a college level paragraph that use the
same examples and the same topic: