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MARKSHEET TEMPLATE 102085 2H 2017

Student Name: Emily Willett Student Number Marker 37/50


Assessment Standards for 102085 Aboriginal & Culturally Responsive Pedagogies - Assignment 1
Total grade = sum of all 0-24.5 / 50 25 32 / 50 32.5 37 / 50 37.5 42 / 50 42.5 50 / 50
criteria
Criteria FAIL PASS CREDIT DISTINCTION HIGH DISTINCTION
Provides detailed linkages Provides no example or Provides a response which shows Demonstrates a logical Demonstrates a logical and Demonstrates a sophisticated
and understanding to the relevant application of how some level of understanding about response which shows a well- structured response response which shows a high
relevant Aboriginal policy policy informs schooling Aboriginal Education policy and how it high level of which shows a high level of level of understanding about
documents, and practices. relates to their chosen option. understanding about understanding about Aboriginal Education policy and
government reports Aboriginal Education policy Aboriginal Education policy how it relates to their chosen
throughout the paper. Makes no specific reference Provides an argument about how and how it relates to their and how it relates to their option.
(POLICY) to the required policy policy may be used to effect chosen option. chosen option.
documents and how they institutional change. Provides insightful, positive and
may relate to their chosen Provides positive Provides insightful and constructive inferences on how
option. inferences on how policy positive inferences on how policy may be used to effect real
may be used to effect real policy may be used to effect institutional change.
institutional change. real institutional change.
8

(10marks) 1-4.5 5-6 6-7 7.5-8.5 9.0-10.0


Demonstrates a critical Exhibits limited levels of Exhibits basic levels of higher order Exhibits levels of higher Exhibits professional levels of Exhibits expert levels of both
and informed engagement higher order critical thinking critical thinking and/or analysis. order critical thinking both higher order critical higher order critical thinking and
and understanding of the and/or analysis. and/or analysis. thinking and analysis. analysis. This paper is worthy of
current literature (Set text and/or Much of the writing is possible publication.
and journal articles) Provides a basic descriptive descriptive/recount. The bulk of the Provides relevant Provides a range key relevant Provides extensive, relevant,
related to the recount of documents/ paper does not move into an examples of recent recent literature/research comprehensive coverage of
profession/professional findings which dominate the argument which is providing an literature/research which which supports their recent literature/research which
learning. (RESEARCH) writing. Provides little or no analysis of the chosen topic. supports their argument. argument. supports their argument.
critique.
Demonstrates both and/or Provides some examples of recent Uses the weekly readings, Uses the weekly readings, Uses the weekly readings,
knowledge and Provides a paper which is literature/research which supports journals & set text to journals & set text to provide journals & set text to consistently
understanding required to constructed using skilful their argument. (sometimes not most provide a clear framework a well-structured framework provide a well-structured
meet the specific needs of quotes or paraphrasing with recent/relevant- which supports most of which supports many of their framework that supports the
Aboriginal and Torres Strait limited personal their argument/s. argument/s. paper.
Islander learners engagement with the topic. Uses the set text and its various 11
and/or authors in a limited way with limited
Makes limited links to engagement to the weekly readings
specific needs of Aboriginal and/or recent journal articles.
and Torres Strait Islander
learners.
(15 Marks) <7.5 7.5-9.5 9.75-11.25 11.25-12.5 12.5-15
Makes professional Provides limited unstructured Provides basic directions to the Provides some directions Provides clear directions to the Provides clear directions to the
judgements that directions to the audience how audience how to encourage to the audience how to audience how to cultivate audience how to through a
demonstrate how you will to encourage opportunities for opportunities for secondary students cultivate opportunities for opportunities for secondary variety of carefully shaped
meet your requirements secondary students to develop to develop understanding of and secondary students to students to develop opportunities for secondary
of 1.4 and 2.4 at understanding of and respect respect for Aboriginal and Torres develop understanding of understanding of and respect students to develop
graduate level. for Aboriginal and Torres Strait Strait Islander histories, cultures and and respect for Aboriginal for Aboriginal and Torres Strait understanding of and respect for
Islander histories, cultures and languages in their curriculum area. and Torres Strait Islander Islander histories, cultures and Aboriginal and Torres Strait
Demonstrates an languages in their curriculum (not always supported with rel. histories, cultures and languages in their curriculum Islander histories, cultures and
understanding of the area. (examples not supported referencing) languages in their area. languages in their curriculum
demands of the with referencing/ research) curriculum area. area.
profession/professional Provides the reader with an Provides the reader with an
learning and the specific Provides the reader with argument which states how they will Provides the reader with argument which states how Provides the reader with a clear,
needs of Aboriginal and statements about how they will meet the challenges set out in weeks an argument which states they will meet the challenges convincing argument which
Torres Strait Islander meet the challenges set out in 1- 7 for the profession. (may be how they will meet the set out in weeks 1-7 for the states how they will meet the
learners. (APPLICATION) weeks 1-7 for the profession. vague) challenges set out in profession. challenges set out in weeks 1-7
(may be vague/unsupported/ weeks 1-7 for the for the profession.
Demonstrates not referenced correctly) Provides some directions and/or profession. Provides clear, directions and
professional possibilities of where key Aboriginal possibilities of where key Provides clear, insightful
understanding which Provides limited or no links to community engagement and school Provides directions and Aboriginal community directions and possibilities of
fosters strong and key sites or organisations. supports are found and how these possibilities of where key engagement and school where key Aboriginal community
systematic practices that might be used to support effective Aboriginal community supports are found and how engagement and school supports
encourage school and classroom planning engagement and school these support effective school are found and how these support
schools/teachers to processes. supports are found and and classroom planning effective school and classroom
engage with local how these might be used processes. planning processes.
Aboriginal community to support effective school
supports as part of and classroom planning
effective school and processes.
classroom planning 11
processes
(15 Marks) <7.5 7.5-9.5 9.75-11.25 11.25-12.5 12.5-15
Presents work Work lacks structure; little Generally clear; Well-structured and coherent Clear and concise structure; Well-structured paper or
professionally, with clear evidence paper has been edited; paper/presentation has text; effective grammatical strengthened by relevant innovative presentation; explicitly
academic writing and terminology inappropriate; introduction, body and conclusion; expression; adheres to research; grammar and syntax identifies the key issues; cohesive,
within the word limit and frequent spelling/ typographic developed with students voice; word/time length; uses mostly correct; cohesive text grammatically correct structure;
uses APA referencing style errors. sentences coherent and appropriate terminology; minor within word/time length; very few typographic or spelling
correctly, including grammatically correct; within typographic and /or spelling discriminating use of appropriate errors. (No terminology errors)
competently integrating (Significant terminology errors- word/time length; some errors. ( 3-4 minor terminology vocabulary; few typographic or
evidence. no consistency more than 8) typographic and /or spelling errors) spelling errors. Consistently accurate APA
errors. (5-7 terminology errors) ( 1-2 minor terminology errors) referencing; highly competent
Uses accurately and Poor paraphrasing; over Mostly accurate APA integration of evidence,
consistently, appropriate reliance on quotes; no or Generally accurate APA referencing; submitted to Consistently accurate APA submitted to Turnitin; original
terms and terminology, inaccurate reference list and referencing; submitted to Turnitin; low percentage for referencing; competent work with insignificant matches.
professional literacy when poor in-text referencing; not Turnitin; originality report originality report. Analysis well integration of evidence, low
referring to Aboriginal and submitted to Turnitin with a detects some insignificant developed with students voice percentage for Turnitin; original
Torres Strait Islander high level of matches. matches/ poor referencing. Some and supported by literature work with insignificant matches.
Peoples for the profession appropriate use of evidence but and research. Turnitin; original
of teaching. needs to be better integrated. work with minor matches.
7
Professionalism
(10Marks) 1-4.5 5-6 6-7 7.5-8.5 9.0-10.0
Your paper provides some clear directions to the reader of how you, through a variety of opportunities will provide learning
opportunities for secondary students to develop understanding of and respect for Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander histories,
cultures and languages in their curriculum area.

Your paper provides the reader with a convincing argument which states how they you meet the challenges set out in the
teaching of Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students. You need to make it your KLA specific to demonstrate how you will
enact cultural competence to cultural responsiveness.

You have a strong sense of how policy and practice are interconnected. This paper shows a high level of understanding about
Aboriginal Education policy and how it relates to their chosen option. Moreover, you provide some insightful, positive and
constructive inferences on how policy may be used to effect real institutional change.

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