Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence, while others say they should be free

to make noise without limitation.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Everybody has the right to a little bit of peace and quiet, but does that mean we should impose silence
upon others? This essay will argue that it is only reasonable to criminalize noisiness, as it is a form of Commented [W1]: Rhetorical question paragraphing the
question.
anti-social behavior that should not be tolerated. The following paragraphs will explore two of the
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foremost arguments relating to this contentious issue.
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One argument that is often raised during a discussion of this issue is that we should all be free to express
ourselves, and that includes being loud. Some people argue that we all have a right to pursue our own Commented [W4]: State first viewpoint.
happiness with the boundaries of reason, and so we should be allowed to make noise without worrying
about legal consequences. However, it is clear that to maintain a harmonious society, people need to act Commented [W5]: Explain.
in consideration of others, and should therefore impose laws to ensure this happens. Japan is one of the Commented [W6]: Reason why I disagree.
most peaceful and pleasant countries on earth, and people there would never consider talking loudly on
the phone or listening to TV shows without headphones while riding public transport. Commented [W7]: Example to support my position.

The counterpoint to the right of free expression is the right to freedom from unnecessary disturbance. Commented [W8]: Second viewpoint.
Excessive noise is irritating, and people should not have to worry about it while at home, at work, or in
public. It seems clear that people should be able to live their lives without being subjected to Commented [W9]: Explain.
unreasonable levels of noise, and that therefore there should be a legal assurance for this. For example, Commented [W10]: Reason why I agree.
people with noisy neighbors should be allowed to prosecute those neighbors for disturbing the peace. Commented [W11]: Example.

In conclusion, people disagree over whether we should strive to ensure the freedom to express
ourselves wherever and whenever we want, and the right to a certain level of calm in our lives. Commented [W12]: Summary of the argument.
However, it is reasonable to suggest that there should be laws in place to ensure our right to a quiet and
peaceful life, and to deter others from engaging in anti-social behavior. Commented [W13]: Reaffirming my own position.