Persuasive essay guidance

CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH
TOPIC SENTENCE: Your topic sentence is the sentence that gives the most important
information of the paragraph.
Topic: 2ND registration
Controlling idea: Fairness to pay for 2nd registration
IMPORTANT: The conclusion topic sentence is a different way of telling the topic
sentence.
Why students should/ shouldnt pay for 2nd registration?
For example
IN FAVOR
Topic sentence (THESIS STATEMENT INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH): 2nd registration
fees encourage students to study.
Conclusion sentence: Paying for2nd registration make students to have their studies
as a priority.
AGAINST
OR
Topic sentence (THESIS STATEMENT INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH):: 2nd registration
fees dsiccourage students to continue their education.
Conclusion sentence: Paying for2nd registration reduces the probability of finishing
college education.
It should also have the following characteristics

It fits the size of the assignment

It states a single main point about the topic
It is specific
It is something you can show, explain, or prove.
It is a forceful statement

Here you have some words and phrases that might be useful for writing your topic
sentence.
Enhance, improve, thrive, succeed, priority, ineffective teaching, success
Topic sentence
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Then, you need to support your THESIS STATEMENT with supporting details.
For this, you need to answer the following question.
What are the main benefits/ disadvantages of paying for 2nd registration? (supporting
details)
Here you have an example of a conclusion paragraph.
IN FAVOR

Topic sentence

Paying for 2nd registration makes students to have their studies as a priority. There
should be a punishment or a reminder that students have on their education. It is not fair for
the government and its citizens to make 2nd payments for learners who do not take advantage
of their opportunities. In addition, this money could be invested on the school improvements
that will benefit the community.

What are the main benefits/ disadvantages of paying for 2nd registration?

AGAINST
Paying for2nd registration reduces the probability of finishing college education.
Tuition fees are not affordable for low income students increasing the percentage of college
dropouts. Thus paying for 2nd registration should be banned to increase the number of
graduates. This will improve the quality of societys workforce.

Now write your conclusion paragraph. You need to answer these 2 questions.
Why students should/ shouldnt pay for 2nd registration? (topic sentence)
What are the main benefits/ disadvantages of paying for 2nd registration? (supporting
details)
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