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Introduction Paragraph:
Example Prompt: Online schooling has expanded to include even the primary and secondary level, while some still believe that it cannot provide everything that
traditional instruction can. Analyze the advantages and disadvantages of online schooling.
S: Statement (Transition + Topic To begin with, online schooling has a range of advantages, specifically fostering independence and tech savviness
Sentence) (Pink) among students. Students will be prepared for the growing digital age through their consistent utilization of technology for
school, and will be able to thrive independently as they have to take ownership for their learning and time management.
For instance, online school switches the responsibility of a schedule from the teacher to the student. Teachers in
R: Reason (Tell how it pertains to traditional school are often times making phone calls home to parents, sending out progress reports, and even having one-
prompt/thesis) (Blue) on-one data chats with students to make them aware of their progress. Through online schooling, students have to set
their own deadlines to complete work, and will not have a teacher snarling at them to sign their scholarship warning in red
ink as an alert of their failing grade. Independency is a natural skill that is strengthened with online schooling, since the
E: Evidence (Give an example)
student has to log into the system, upload their work, track their progress once the grades become available online, and
(Yellow)
then seek out further help if needed. Moreover, it must be noted that aside from independence in progress monitoring,
students are simultaneously honing in on their technology skills, since all of the coursework is online. Society deeply values
E: Explanation (Elaborate/explain technology, and while that flourishes, students will definitely need technology skills of some type as they enter adulthood,
the example DEEPLY) (Orange) may that be basic typing skills or navigating online banking. Tech savviness that students acquire through primary and
secondary school will also support them in competing for high-paying jobs that require more advanced technological skills,
S: Sum It Up (Pink) since if they master the basics, theyll be ready for more complex programming. Online schooling is at the advantage to a
student, as it lays the foundation for an independent individual who is ready to take on the digital age full force.
Notes:
Essay Organization
S: Statement (Transition +
Topic Sentence) (Pink)
E: Explanation
(Elaborate/explain the
example DEEPLY) (Orange)
Bringing it full circle, both of these interactions are organic preparations for the real-world work environment, such as peers seen as
S: Sum It Up (Pink)
coworkers, and instructors as bosses. Students are potentially disadvantaged who complete school online do not have the
opportunity to practice these interactions since they are not socializing on a consistent basis.
Notes:
On your own: Revise the body paragraphs for your essay draft. This is the prompt where you practiced writing the introduction.
Essay Organization
Conclusion Paragraph
other hand, students may not be able to engage with Sum up main points addressed
perhaps just thrown into the pool without a buoy, and If time permits, closing line
Notes:
Work Period: Review your draft for organization, and revise as necessary. Use highlighting to cross check organization within your body paragraphs.