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Evidence not Pass Learner is Learner is Evidence and General Comments
Unit 2 provided Achieved working at a working at the i.e. Observation, video, essay etc
higher level highest level
R S G E If evidence is missing, note requirements.
You have uploaded a research plan and I can see that you have planned out what primary and secondary research you want to carry out.
Your reasons why could have been more detailed. Your survey asked several questions, but you asked a lot of men. Was this a good way
to get what you needed from your survey? Next time you create a survey, think harder about the type of questions you ask. You will get
much better results. You chose make up as your community, which was a good choice, but did you get the results you wanted? Maybe
think about a more in-depth question when carrying out research in the future. You could have asked something along the lines of: What
positive or negative influence is Kylie Jenner or Rihanna having on the make- up industry today? You have spent some time analysing the
results from both your primary and secondary research. Your conclusion and evaluation could have been more detailed but I am satisfied
you have completed all criteria required. Well done Lauren. Take some confidence from your pass and re-affirm your own ability. You are a
very capable student and you obviously know a lot about make-up!