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BIRDS EYE VIEW DETAILS

Background information

In general, there are two wage structure, a seniority-based salary and

merit system

Merit system is more and more introduced by many companies.

INTRODUCTION
Thesis statement

What are the consequences of merit system for workers and companies?
Why is this important?
By progressing of globalization, merit system is widely spread around the
world and this thesis are deeply related to most people's live.
Topic sentence:
Under merit system, It is difficult to fairly evaluate workers results.

What evidence will you use?

ARGUMENT ONE
I give a few examples of inequality.

On the example, I consider the result.

Topic sentence:
Under merit system, workers and companies come to choose the work to
easily get results in short period.

ARGUMENT TWO What evidence will you use?

I apply merit system to various work.

I consider the result.

Topic sentence:
Merit system can give workers big incentive.

What evidence will you use?

COUNTERARGUMENT
I refer to a date book and suggest concrete numbers.

I refer to books that suggest concrete opinion of workers.

Restate thesis statement:

CONCLUSION (to be
When introducing merit system, deep thinking is needed.
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completed later) Summary main points:

Under merit system, workers and companies become short-sighted because no
one want to take jobs to get result in long period. Then, these jobs are obsolete
and as result, this system may cause bad influence.