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Matthew Nadeau
Kailey Quist
Rourke Stark
Carol Sieverts
English 1010
6 October 2017
Rhetorical Analysis
Written by Catalina Amuedo-Dorantes and Thitima Puttitanun, DACA and the Surge in
article. Both authors are professors of economics at their respective universities; Dorantes at San
Diego State University, and Puttitanun at Kasetsart University, Bangkok. Both authors are
competent professionals who have together published multiple scholarly works on the topic of
current migration issues as analysed by demographers, economists, and sociologists all over the
nations (IOM history). It is the migration arm of the United Nations, and is highly respected
with a great deal of worldwide influence. IOM specializes in assisting migrants throughout the
The article was written to explore the idea that DACA was causing a flow of
unaccompanied alien children. The thesis is implicit in the first few paragraphs, and made clear
in the conclusion: DACA was not the direct cause of the influx of illegal youth. They explain
that although there is an increase in unaccompanied minors being apprehended at the US-Mexico
border, it is due to other key factors. The authors argue that politicians have correlated the
implementation of DACA with the increase in minors crossing the border, and through their
Ethos is clear in each of the citations the article provides, and, as is fitting for an
academic paper, has every citation necessary. The authors use several scholarly works to help
maintain their reliability. They also cite the US Customs Border Protection and other
The intended audience for this article is primarily academic. However, the paper contains
many facts pertinent to the general public. It employs pathos by maintaining a professional tone,
and appealing to its target audience by logical well cited argumentation. The article is purely
factual, and lacks any explicit appeal to emotion, failing to use pathos in that regard. But because
the article is an argumentative research piece, an appeal to emotion isnt necessary to advance
the thesis.
The article maintains excellent logos all throughout. The authors begin by establishing a
foundation for their argument, and addressing the purpose of their article by establishing their
thesis. Each subsequent point reinforces the the thesis, formulating a well thought out and
convincing argument.
The main source of the authors evidence is from the US Customs and Border Protection
(CBP) via a freedom of information act (Amuedo-Dorantes). Using CBP apprehension statistics,
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Dorantes and Puttitanun develop a method to determine if DACA had any role in the increase in
minors illegally entering the United States. In addition, the authors cite several credible books
and research journals to support their argument and lay its foundation. In this way, the article
The article is well written and has no obvious technical errors. However, it does contain
several awkwardly phrased sentences, making it more difficult to read. The article contains large
blocks of text and complicated graphs in addition to the mathematical formula Amuedo-Dorantes
The document is orderly and has progressive movement; the authors start with the
necessary background information and move through the evidence systematically to their
conclusions. The article is separated by bolded headings that help organization. It also contains
several graphs, the majority of which are clear and easy to understand. Overall, the article serves
its role well as an academic paper, but to the average reader is intimidating.
DACA and the Surge in Unaccompanied Minors at the US-Mexico Border is a reliable
article written by professionals in their field. It establishes a clear thesis, and exhibits ethos
through clear, thorough citations. Considering the intended audience, it also maintains good
pathos by being written in a professional manner. Logos is clear through its clear organization
and logical argumentation. Although well written, it can be confusing at times, and contains
helpful graphs. The article makes its case clear: DACA is not to blame for the crisis at the
border.
Works Cited
Amuedo-Dorantes, Catalina and Thitima Puttitanun. "DACA and the Surge in Unaccompanied
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Minors at the US-Mexico Border." International Migration, vol. 54, no. 4, Aug. 2016,
www.iom.int/international-migration-journal.