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Anne Coustalin
ETEC 512
December 4, 2016
Lesson Plan Critique 1
Introduction
since I created the original lesson plan (OLP), I have engaged in considerable academic and
professional development, and I have developed new tools with which to reflect upon my
practice. I have chosen to critique the OLP using key learnings from Constructivism, Information
Processing theory, and Situated Learning theory. I have also applied those same learning
This lesson is part of a grade 6 biology unit on the Diversity of Life. This was the third
lesson in our exploration of animal adaptations. The purpose of the lesson was to solidify the
concept of structural adaptations and introduce the concept of behavioural adaptations. By the
end of the lesson, students were expected to be able to differentiate behavioural adaptations
from structural adaptations and identify human structural and behavioural adaptations.
Information Processing Theory is the best represented learning theory in the OLP. This is
due in large part to the fact that the template used appears to be structured using IP stage
theory. The OLP features several activities associated with each of the levels of IP stage theory
as outlined by Atkinson and Shriffin (1968): sensory, short term memory (STM) and long term
memory (LTM). That being said, there are also several areas where student learning would
benefit from the thoughtful addition of activities, particularly around the sensory and LTM
stages. In revising this lesson, I have added a sensory stage activity at the outset. The activity,
(examining the behaviour of local crows right outside our school) will activate student attention
and make the learning more relevant. As Lutz and Huitt (2003) explain, attention is impacted by
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(among other things) the meaningfulness of new stimuli to the learner. This notion of meaningful
In both the OLP and RLP, the amount of new vocabulary students encounter is limited,
which is appropriate since students in this age group can only focus their attention on
approximately six unrelated stimuli or pieces of information at a given time (Dempster, 1981). I
believe the OLP offers insufficient opportunities to promote automacity around new vocabulary,
however, so I have added a vocabulary review activity. Ideally, increased automacity around
scientific vocabulary will allow students to focus memory resources on new information and
science concepts in a more efficient manner (Schraw, G. & McCrudden, M., 2013).
The IP stage that is the least well represented in the OLP is Long Term Memory. In order
to offer further opportunities for elaboration, I have expanded and redesigned the final activity of
the lesson and added an additional major project (to be commenced in a future lesson). Both of
these activities are rooted in objects of study that students are already familiar with (human
beings and a local animal that they can observe regularly). This not only makes learning more
meaningful, it also promotes elaboration by having students integrate new and existing
knowledge.
While the OLP had various exotic animals from around the world as objects of study, the
RLP instead emphasizes students existing knowledge: focusing on animals that students have
likely had multiple experiences with and have already built considerable knowledge constructs
around. This allows for a rigorous testing of the validity of new conceptual structures (in this
case, the concept of adaptations) and, consequently, deeper learning. Further, while the OLP
student organizer was largely concerned with figurative knowledge (only asking students to
identify adaptations and classify them as behavioural or structural); the RLP promotes operative
exploration of the purpose for the adaptation and an understanding of why the environment
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would favour that adaptation. In this way, the RLP gives students the satisfaction of making
sense of the phenomena they witness, providing opportunities for self-generated reinforcement
(Von Glasersfeld, 2008). It also gives them a construct against which to test phenomena evident
in other organisms.
While the OLP did provide some opportunities for collaboration and social negotiation of
meaning, these have been increased in the RLP. This is important because, as Von
Glasersfeld explains: learning awakens a variety of internal development processes that are
able to operate only when the child is interacting with people in his environment and in
cooperation with his peers (p. 35). Both the OLP and RLP are careful to structure activities
such that students are able to negotiate meaning and build knowledge with their peers before
being asked to present learning individually. As Smith, Disessa and Roschelle (1994) explain,
errors are characteristic of initial phases of learning because students existing knowledge is
inadequate and supports only partial understandings (p. 123). The approach evident
throughout the RLP promotes safety and reduces anxiety, leading to a more effective learning
environment.
The OLP offered no opportunities for student self-reflection or metacognition. The RLP
attempts to address this shortfall by having students: identify their own key learnings in their
journals; present an outline of how they developed their research questions and conducted their
research for the human adaptations task, and self-assess their work and write a reflection to
accompany their final assignment. As Von Glasersfeld (2008) explains, a students ability to
carry out activities is only part of their competence. The other part is to monitor the activities.
The final assignment associated with this lesson is intended to deepen the learning
opportunity and provide an opportunity for assessment. This is particularly appropriate from the
constructivist perspective because it allows the instructor to look at both the learning activity and
the childs ability to reflect upon or discuss that activity. As Cunningham suggests, assessment
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emerges naturally from task performance if instructors offer authentic tasks of some substance
(1992).
was evident in the OLP, which consisted almost entirely of activities that lacked authenticity and
situational relevance to students. In the RLP, authentic tasks and action are emphasized
throughout and a context of authentic scientific inquiry is created. The process of learning is
emphasized and made visible and opportunities for social interaction and collaboration abound.
While the OLP used exotic animals from around the world as the object of study, the RLP
focuses only on local animals. This makes learning more relevant to the students and also
increases authenticity by allowing for direct study and primary research (which better mimics the
work of a scientist). The main lesson activity involves a scientific investigation into human
beings through the lens of adaptations. In this task, the plan is purposefully de-emphasized.
The activity provides several scaffolds and tools that students may use if they wish, but it does
not prescribe how the learning must occur. This is important because, as Suchman explains, it
is more important to study how people use their circumstances to achieve intelligent action than
it is to abstract action from its circumstances and reconstruct it as a rational plan (1987). The
resulting learning artifact is reflective of that understanding: it explores both the product of the
investigation and the procedure used to investigate. This addresses Collins (1987) critique of
schools that: too little attention is paid to the processes that experts engage in to use or acquire
knowledge in carrying out complex or realistic tasks (p. 2). The approach to situated learning in
the classroom evidenced in the RLP satisfies the imperative of promoting situational
enculturation by making learning mimic the authentic environment of the discipline of study. It
also, however, promotes the imperative (as outlined by A Brown et al., 1993) of enculturating
students into the culture of education, thus promoting the development of lifelong intentional
learners.
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One of the main tenets of Situated Learning is that cognition is social in nature (Putnam
and Borko, 2000). While the OLP had provided opportunities for students to work with a partner
and in groups, the RLP further increases this emphasis. After all, as Browns, Collins and Duguid
point out, it is only within groups that the social interaction and conversation that is essential to
learning can occur (1989). As students engage in collaboration through talking and writing,
those very acts provide a context for shared understanding and a scaffold for reciprocal
interactions. They also serve to make the learning visible (Slaouti, 2007).
Conclusion
Despite my efforts to create a pedagogically sound learning opportunity with the OLP, it is
apparent that several important elements were absent in the original design. By critiquing and
revising the OLP through the lenses of Constructivism, Information Processing theory, and
Situated Learning theory, I have been able to design a learning opportunity that is much more
representative of effective pedagogy, and one that I would be proud to present to my students.
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