Peer Review: Research Outline/Draft 1

Reviewer: Angel Roque

Reviewee: Sofiane

Directions:
Look at the content of your peers outline/draft. Make marginal comments and a summative
comment for the author of the paper which you are reviewing. Carefully consider the authors
implementation of the P.I.E elements in each of their slices. Also consider how and why they
need to be changed. BE CLEAR about what you are saying and why you are saying it.

Keep in mind the following (but also include things you think should be added):

Does each P.I.E element do what it is supposed to in each of the slices?

Does each slice have only one flavor? (is the slice talking about more than one
thing?)

Is each slice placed logically within the paper?

Did you understand the content of the slice as it was presented? Tell the author
what you did understand and didnt.

Are the slices understandable for an outsider? Explain what the author can do to
make it more understandable.

Did you understand the content of the paper as a whole? (Is this an effective
research paper? Explain)

Write detailed and helpful comments that will help your peer consider how to
better shape their slices to make a well formed research paper.

Prompt

1. Extended Response: In an academic voice, discuss the most/least important skill (particular
ability or expertise) or idea (understanding or awareness) that can be gained from this course by an
outsider student considering the readings which have been completed.

You may discuss:

 Why one reading is more important than another based on the ideas presented in those
readings.

A particular unit within the course.

A critique on a major assignment within the course.

Other (See me for approval)

Format and Requirements

1300-1700 words, 12pt Times New Roman, single spaced, 1 inch margins.

Proper title and MLA header.

Correct comma use and sentence boundary awareness.

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Use MLA format (8 edition) for in-text citations.
A works cited page is required.

You must use Detached Impersonal Style for the entire paper.

Quotes may be no longer than 3 lines.

Summative Comments:
I really liked your outline because of how thourough you were with all the
information and the explainations that you gave on it. You explained each article
that you used in your outline very well based on what I remember of them. And
what I didnt I was able to remember with the summary of it you gave. Your
explainaitons of what the articles say can be a bit repetative but its also good
because you dont want to be vague.