1.

I say that the opening is not kinda clear but he starts with I wish to draw your attention
2. He does state where its going to be taking place and why they are having this event, and to
wear formal clothes,
3. The sentences need slight of improvement, when he is explain the event he puts only the date
but not where it is being held at all together.

I would probably change with how he said make sure you wear formal clothes and the sentence when
he said you are welcome to bring your wife if u care to do,I think he shouldve included her in the letter
that she is invited to, Dear Mr .Tom black and Mrs. black to be more polite.

I think the letter is correct with the grammar and spelling.