Leia Harlow Resume

by Leia Harlow

Submission date: 31-Aug-2017 07:15PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 841843882
File name: Resume_f inal_360.pdf (135.97K)
Word count: 252
Character count: 1469
 Great start Leia, you've persuaded me that
you can be a PhM. :) See below for more
details.

Perfect
skills for
the job!
Bullet s--f ix
Keep
working to
express
them
Whit e Space
concisely. Try adding specificity
about what you did on
social media.

Bullet s--f ix more specificity will help--e.g., using X

software or something else?
Leia Harlow Resume
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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Text Comment. Great start Leia, you've persuaded me that you can be a PhM. :) See below
f or more details.

Text Comment. Perf ect skills f or the job! Keep working to express them concisely.

QM Bullets--f ix
Remember to use consistent syntax and grammar at the start of a set of bullet points.

Text Comment. T ry adding specif icity about what you did on social media.

QM White Space
White space is used to set sections apart. Avoid cramming headings and paragraphs together
and f ollow this common rule f or headings:
two white lines bef ore a heading, one white line af ter the heading. When creating columns
(which are vertical), separate them with vertical white space.

QM Bullets--f ix
Remember to use consistent syntax and grammar at the start of a set of bullet points.

Text Comment. more specif icity will help--e.g., using X sof tware or something else?
RUBRIC: IFIXIT RESUME RUBRIC

CRIT ERION 1 Advanced

Form and Organization

ABSENT OR BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or
BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
ef f ectively

CRIT ERION 2 Prof icient

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT OR BELOW Job description's details may not be addressed; evidence of qualif ications is lacking
BASIC or irrelevant

DEVELOPING Generalizations attempt to address the job's description; evidence of qualif ications
isn't yet adequate

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details address the job's description directly; evidence of qualif ications
is adequate

ADVANCED Specif ic details address the job's description directly and aptly; evidence of
qualif ications is plentif ul and convincing

CRIT ERION 3 Prof icient

Appearance

ABSENT OR BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the resume.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Prof icient

Readability

ABSENT OR BELOW Bullet Point clauses/phrases are hard to understand and structured inconsistently;
BASIC errors impede readability throughout.
DEVELOPING Bullet Point clauses/phrases may be hard to understand or structured inconsistently;
errors impede readability at times

PROFICIENT Bullet Point clauses/phrases are usually ef f ective and structured consistently; a f ew
errors

ADVANCED Bullet Point clauses/phrases are ef f ective and structured consistently; nearly error
f ree
Leia Harlow Resume
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