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Diana Odajyan
English 102
Professor Batty
Reflection essay
The second essay was probably the most difficult essay I had to write about. The
topic was very sensitive, especially since it is 2017 and you do not want anyone
disagreeing with you. The topic is about sexuality, I think everyone should feel confident
and proud of who they are. I tried to give my opinion about the play called M Butterfly
by David Henry Hwang. I do not think I deserve the grade I received, I put in a lot of
work and spent a lot of time researching and gathering up information but the reasoning
Of why i received the grade I did was pretty clear and made more sense. I have to work
on making my ideas sound a lot more clearer in my essays and watch out for run-ons.
I think what I struggle with the most is making my thesis into a smaller sentences and
making it easier for the reader to understand it and have a clear image of what I think
of a certain topic. There were some points that I could have considered before writing,
for example when I was talking about one of the main characters death, and how he
or why he committed suicide I was only looking at it from one point of view. In my r
revised essay I also included a different side of perspective, which will help the reader
make his or her opinion about the topic and it wont be limited. Overall I have to work
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