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Gabriela Burneo-Khan
Professor Massey
ENC 1101
31 November 2017
reported on and inexcusably neglected, at times. The cases that the public are most familiar with
when it comes to domestic violence, involve athletes and celebrities reported on news outlets or
shows like Dr. Phil and Oprah. Within these shows and news reports, the one fact ensured
throughout coverage at some point in time is that domestic violence is a serious social issue that
happens unceasingly every day. I chose this topic because of the constant repercussions, danger,
and impacts it has or had on victims lives. I feel very strongly towards the men and women who
are victims of abusive relationships, where their partner/spouse has imprisoned them with this
despicable reality of a life, but do not know how to escape it. To reiterate, domestic violence as
already pointed out is abuse that comes in different forms, in which abusers take full control over
their partner and try to weaken them. Allowing this to happen within society is harmful to the
wellbeing of so many and is a huge problem that must be properly made aware, recognized, and
addressed. Consequently, that is why I feel strongly for this topic and want to advocate for these
victims; to help them find a voice and build the courage he/she needs to change the situation they
are in.
I. Topic Sentence: It is known that domestic violence is abuse that can be very
B. This study shows that women are more at risk from violence at home than in
the street, and this has serious repercussions for womens health. (Lee 21)
C. Most victims of domestic violence are women, but men may also be
II. Topic Sentence: A lot of times, victims will stay in their abusive relationships for
dread of what would happen if they tried leaving, so they keep enduring the
C. Domestic Violence can take many forms, but the pattern or cycle of violence
is usually the same. The cycle of violence has three components: (1) tension
building, (2) explosion or acute battering and abuse, and (3) reconciliation,
III. Topic Sentence: Help needs to be ensured and available in keeping victims safe
and away from the toxicity of domestic violence as well as knowing what steps to
take in order to receive the appropriate guidance, but most importantly having
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strict reform and policies is necessary in order to ensure victims well-being and to
A. Though rampant in the U.S., many Americans including the general public
and state actors such as law enforcement (LE) see DV as a family matter to
Khavinson 17)
Conclusion: To conclude, domestic violence is a severe social issue that needs to be shed
light on and brought awareness to be able to overcome and slowly, but surely decrease the
percentages of victims that deal with this. Domestic violence is abuse and takes on different
forms of abuse. Victims of abuse usually do not come forward or seek for help which is why
family, friends, health care physicians, therapists, etc. need to be informed of the signs and
symptoms of someone who is being abused to be able to provide him or her with the appropriate
care and aid they need. If more people are knowledgeable on domestic violence, then as a
community people can work together to make sure this is noticed and consequently prevented.
There are an array of solutions and steps that can be taken for victims of domestic violence so
there is hope always that people or loved ones for victims will come forward in bringing them to
a safe environment and if they have children for their children as well. Furthermore, hotlines,
organizations, safe houses or shelters are available to those in need and looking for relief or an
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escape which is reassuring to know because many times to victims there is no way out, but there
always is a light at the end of the tunnel and support will be there for those in need who are