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This book of ‘Independent Writing Narrative Information Text
Activities’ covers the genres for the My Best Day! My Pet
6 to 7 year old age group. It has Stimulus 4 Stimulus 25
been written to the UK National Planning notes 5 Planning notes 26
Strategy Primary Framework for Final Written Work 6 Final Written Work 27
Literacy.
Charlie the Chick A Wild Animal
It contains at least two independent Stimulus 7 Stimulus 28
writing activities for each genre type Planning notes 8 Planning notes 29
and is an ideal vehicle for assessing Final Written Work 9 Final Written Work 30
pupil progress in writing when used
with the different Levels found in the Cinderella
Writing Assessment Guidelines,
which accompany the Primary
Stimulus
Planning notes
10
11
Non-Chronological
Framework for Literacy. (The Final Written Work 12 Reports
appropriate levels for this age group My Town
have been reproduced under licence Stimulus 31
at the beginning of this book.)
Instructions Planning notes
Final Written Work
32
33
The author has also used this How to Grow Seeds
approach successfully with children Stimulus 13 My School Day
to embed the features of each genre. Planning notes 14 Stimulus 34
This was achieved by re-visiting a Final Written Work 15 Planning notes 35
previously studied genre later in the Final Written Work 36
term, so that the children practised it How to Wash Up
once again. This ensured that the Stimulus 16
Planning notes 17
Poetry
features of that particular type of
writing remained firmly embedded in Final Written Work 18
the children’s memory. Thus when I Wish…
the children were tested or came to Stimulus 37
write in that particular genre at a later
date it was not just a distant memory.
Explanations Planning notes 38
Life – Cycle of a Frog Final Written Work 39
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Pupil name Class/Group Date
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AF5 – vary sentences AF6 – write with AF3 – organise and AF4 – construct AF1 – write AF2 – produce texts AF7 – select AF8 – use correct spelling Handwriting and
for clarity, purpose and technical accuracy of present whole texts paragraphs and use imaginative, which are appropriate appropriate and presentation
effect syntax and punctuation effectively, sequencing cohesion within and interesting and to task, reader and effective vocabulary
in phrases, clauses and and structuring between paragraphs thoughtful texts purpose
sentences information, ideas and
events
Level In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of writing: In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of writing: In some forms of
writing: writing: writing: writing: writing: writing: writing:
2 some basic sequencing usually correct spelling of:
some variation in clause structure mostly of ideas or material, e.g. ideas in sections mostly relevant ideas some basic purpose simple, often
o high frequency grammatical letters generally
sentence openings, grammatically correct time-related words or grouped by content, and content, established, e.g. speech-like correctly shaped but
function words
e.g. not always phrases, line breaks, some linking by sometimes repetitive main features of vocabulary conveys inconsistencies in
starting with name or sentence demarcation headings, numbers simple pronouns or sparse story, report relevant meanings o common single-morpheme orientation, size and
pronoun with capital letters and use of upper/lower
content/lexical words
full stops usually openings and/or some apt word some appropriate some adventurous case letters
mainly simple accurate closings sometimes choices create features of the given word choices, e.g. likely errors:
sentences with and signalled interest form used opportune use of clear letter formation,
used to connect some accurate use of new vocabulary o inflected endings, e.g. past with ascenders and
clauses question and brief comments, some attempts to tense, plurals, adverbs descenders
exclamation marks, questions about adopt appropriate distinguished,
past and present and commas in lists events or actions style o phonetic attempts at vowel
digraphs generally upper and
tense generally suggest viewpoint lower case letters not
consistent mixed within words
Level In some writing, In some writing, usually In some writing, usually In some writing, In some writing, In some writing, In some writing, In some writing, usually with In some writing, usually
usually with support: with support: with support: usually with support: usually with support: usually with support: usually with support: support: with support:
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reliance on simple mostly grammatically some formulaic phrases simple connections basic information some indication of mostly simple usually correct spelling of most letters correctly
phrases and clauses accurate clauses indicate start/end of between ideas, and ideas conveyed basic purpose, vocabulary simple high-frequency words formed and orientated
text, e.g. once upon a events, e.g. through appropriate particular form or
some sentence-like some awareness of time, one day, the end repeated nouns, word choice, e.g. awareness of reader, communicates phonetically plausible spaces between words
structures formed by use of full stops and meaning through attempts at words with
chaining clauses capital letters, e.g. events/ideas sometimes
pronouns relate to relate to topic e.g. story, label,
repetition of key digraphs and double letters upper and lower case
main idea message sometimes
together, e.g. series beginning/end of in appropriate order, some descriptive words
of ideas joined by sentence e.g. actions listed in language, e.g. sufficient number of distinguished
recognisable words for writing
repeated use of ‘and’ time sequence, items colour, size, simple
to be readable, including, e.g. use of ICT, e.g. use
numbered emotion keyboard to type own
use of letter names to
approximate syllables and name
words
BL
IE
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 1 Secure 1 High 1 Low 2 Secure 2 High 2
AF5 – vary sentences AF6 – write with AF3 – organise and AF4 – construct AF1 – write imaginative, AF2 – produce texts AF7 – select AF8 – use correct spelling Handwriting and
for clarity, purpose technical accuracy of present whole texts paragraphs and use interesting and which are appropriate and presentation
and effect syntax and effectively, cohesion within and thoughtful texts appropriate to task, effective
punctuation in sequencing and between paragraphs reader and purpose vocabulary
phrases, clauses and structuring
sentences information, ideas
and events
Level In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing In most writing
3 · reliance mainly on · straightforward · some attempt to · some internal structure · some appropriate · purpose · simple, generally · correct spelling of · legible style, shows
simply structured sentences usually organise ideas with within sections of text ideas and content established at a appropriate some common accurate and
sentences, variation demarcated related points e.g. one-sentence included general level vocabulary used, grammatical function consistent letter
with support, e.g. accurately with full placed next to paragraphs or ideas · some attempt to · main features of limited in range words formation, sometimes
some complex stops, capital letters, each other loosely organised elaborate on basic selected form · some words common content/lexical joined
sentences question and · openings and · within information or events, sometimes selected for words with more than
· and, but, so are the exclamation marks closings usually paragraphs/sections, e.g. nouns expanded signalled to the effect or one morpheme, including
most common · some, limited, use of signalled some links between by simple adjectives reader occasion compound words
connectives, speech punctuation · some attempt to sentences, e.g. use of · attempt to adopt · some attempts at · likely errors
subordination · comma splicing sequence ideas or pronouns or of viewpoint, though often appropriate style, some inflected endings,
occasionally evident, particularly material logically adverbials not maintained or with attention to e.g. past tense,
· some limited in narrative · movement between inconsistent, e.g. reader comparatives, adverbs
variation in use of paragraphs/sections attitude expressed, but some phonetically
tense and verb sometimes abrupt or with little elaboration plausible attempts at
forms, not always disjointed content/lexical words
secure
Level In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of writing In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of In some forms of writing In some forms of
2 writing writing writing · ideas in sections writing writing writing · usually correct spelling of writing
· some variation in · clause structure · some basic grouped by content, · mostly relevant ideas · some basic · simple, often high frequency · letters generally
sentence openings, mostly grammatically sequencing of some linking by simple and content, purpose speech-like grammatical function correctly shaped but
e.g. not always correct ideas or material, pronouns sometimes repetitive established, e.g. vocabulary words inconsistencies in
starting with name or · sentence e.g. time-related or sparse main features of conveys relevant common single orientation, size and
pronoun demarcation with words or phrases, · some apt word choices story, report meanings morpheme use of upper/lower
· mainly simple capital letters and full line breaks, create interest · some appropriate · some content/lexical words case letters
sentences with and stops usually headings, numbers features of the adventurous · likely errors · clear letter formation,
· brief comments,
used to connect accurate · openings and/or questions about events given form used word choices, inflected endings, e.g. with ascenders and
clauses · some accurate use closings or actions suggest · some attempts to e.g. opportune past tense, plurals, descenders
· past and present of question and sometimes viewpoint adopt appropriate use of new adverbs distinguished,
tense generally exclamation marks, signalled style vocabulary phonetic attempts at generally upper and
consistent and commas in lists vowel digraphs lower case letters not
mixed within words
BL
IE
Key: BL Below level IE Insufficient evidence
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 2 Secure 2 High 2 Low 3 Secure 3 High 3
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My Best Day!
Year 2
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Narrative Stimulus
Task
Your task is to write about your best day. (You could write about
a day on holiday, a birthday, a special event in school or at home.)
It could be any day you choose.
Name Date
My Best Day!
What day did you choose?
I chose
Name Date
My Best Day!
Narrative Stimulus
One day Charlie the Chick decided to have an adventure. When his
mother was not looking and his brothers and sisters were asleep,
he set off out of the farmyard gate.
His mother counted her chicks, “One, two, three, four, five, six.
Oh, but where is Charlie? Where has he gone?” cried poor Mother
Hen.
She hurried out of the farmyard. Soon she met Mrs Horse.
“Have you seen my Charlie?”
“No, sorry Mother Hen, I haven’t seen your Charlie,” said Mrs
Horse.
Name Date
Name Date
Narrative Stimulus
Cinderella
Look at the pictures carefully.
1 2
3 4
5 6
Task
Name Date
Cinderella
Look carefully at each picture. Write words to help you tell the
Text in each box.
story
1 2
3 4
5 6
Name Date
Cinderella
Instructions Stimulus
Task
Name Date
Instructions: Think about what you do and the order you do it in.
Name Date
Instructions:
Instructions Stimulus
How to Wash Up
Your class has been cooking. There are lots of dirty plates and bowls.
Task
Name Date
How to Wash Up
List what you will need:
Instructions: Think about what you do and the order you do it in.
Name Date
How to Wash Up
List what you need:
Instructions:
Explanations Stimulus
Life-Cycle of a Frog
Some children have been looking at frogs in their garden pond.
Look at the pictures of what they have seen.
1 The frog lays spawn (eggs). 2 Tadpoles grow inside
the eggs.
Task
Name Date
Life-Cycle of a Frog
Look carefully at each picture. Write words to help you tell the
story in each box.
1 2
3 4
5 6
Name Date
Life-Cycle of a Frog
Explanations Stimulus
Task
Your task is to write how apples get from the tree to your
shopping basket.
Name Date
Name Date
My Pet
Dipesh’s class has decided to make a book about their
pets. Here is some information writing from the book.
Task
Name Date
My Pet
My Pet
Other
What it eats
interesting facts
Name Date
My Pet
Task
Your task is to find out about a different wild animal and make
notes about it. You might like to include a drawing. Then write an
information text about your chosen animal.
Name Date
A Wild Animal
Title:
Quick Sketch:
Notes:
Name Date
A Wild Animal
Drawing:
My Town
Tom lives in Springpool. Here is a report Tom wrote about
his home town.
There are shops which sell ice cream and gifts. There is an ice-
skating rink and a bowling alley. There is a fairground and a
large park with a boating lake.
Task
Name Date
My Town
Buildings
Where it is
Name of Town
Places to go Things to do
Name Date
My Town
My School Day
A new pupil is to join your class. Your teacher has asked you
to write a report about your school day.
Task
Your task is to write a report to help the new pupil settle in.
Don’t forget to write about play time, dinner time, lesson time
and school assembly time.
Name Date
My School Day
My School Day
Name Date
My School Day
Poetry Stimulus
I Wish…
I wish I could
Climb
Like a cheeky, hairy monkey
High into the branches of the tall, tall tree.
I wish I could
Run
Task
Your task is to finish the second verse of the poem using the
first verse as a pattern to help you. Then write two more verses
of your own.
Name Date
I Wish…
cheeky hairy
Climb
tall, tall tree
monkey
Run
Name Date
I Wish…
Poetry Stimulus
Spring is Here!
Spring is here!
Small green shoots appear
Days grow longer
Trees covered in pink fluffy blossom
The hedgehog wakens from his deep winter
sleep
The sun warms the earth
Spring is here!
Task
Name Date
A Season Poem
Trees Flowers
Name of Season
Animals
Weather
Name Date
A Season Poem