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Haring - Persepolis
Barak Haring
Mr. Bradley
Honors English 9
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26 September, 1 2017 [September, ]
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Well 2 How Do You 3 See It? [Well,]
3
How could the text be read and interpreted differently by Personal pronoun in formal writing
16
going to move to France to start a new life. 17
Incomplete comparison
[happening,]
Most americans 20 see the way she acts to be pretty 18
Unoriginal text: 8 words
ordinary, kind of the way we act which lets us connect with themighty.com/2017/08/how-to-help-…
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the book more. An Iranian could see her as a rude girl with [home,]
those films where the surprised man wraps himself in a [americans → Americans]
Iran, that is something you 24 would never do. There are [book,]
shows marjane 30 walking down stairs 31 with a pot of Personal pronoun in formal writing
23
[everything.]
noodles. Eating them right out of the pot with a fork. 32
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She’s 33 sitting down really 34 enjoying those noodles when Personal pronoun in formal writing
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she’s 35 interrupted by the mother superior. She makes a Possibly miswritten word: break ups
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racist quote saying, “It’s 36 true what they say about Personal pronoun in formal writing
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That triggers her rebellious side 37 and she fires back with, [Austria in → Austria at]
“It’s 38 true what they say about you too. You 39 were all
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this part of the book. Some of the stuff in here might be [really]
35
[she's → she is]
inappropriate to Iranian eye’s 40. Referring back to the first 36
[It's → It is]
piece of evidence. 41
37
[side,]
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the women’s branch came up to her insulting the way she Personal pronoun in formal writing
was dressed 42 and what she was wearing. They pointed out
her shoes classifying them as “Punk” shoes. As well as her
Michael Jackson button telling her that he is a symbol of
decadence. They seen 43 Marjane as if she was disobeying
her religion because in their religion Muhammad was the
40
last prophet. So that button of Michael Jackson was making [eye's → eyes]
41
Sentence fragment
Marjane look like she was praising him. It’s 44 a possibility
Grammarly Grammarly
Report generated on Saturday, Oct 7, 2017, 12:40 PM Page 4 of 4
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[seen → saw]
Works Cited
Satrapi, Marjane. Persepolis. New York : 49 Pantheon 44
[It's → It is]
Books, 2003. Print. 45
[that's → that is]
Satrapi, Marjane. Persepolis 2: The Story Of A Return. 46
[But in → However, in]
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New York : 50 Pantheon Books, 2004. Print. [America,]
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[don't → do not]
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[York : → York:]
50
[York : → York:]