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Tajma Cameron
Conceptualization
field of science where you must effectively communicate the results of your research. A key
component of the scientific process involves communicating findings. When teaching students
the scientific approach to academic writing we are educating students on the necessary skills to
define a problem, analyze and interpret data while drawing critical connections (Hesselbach et
al., 2012). Creating a research thesis is an essential element in academic writing regardless of the
academic discipline. Effective academic writing will demonstrate students’ ability to present a
clear and defined approach to reporting research findings and specifically the ability to develop a
focused thesis statement. The thesis statement is one of the most important elements of a
research paper. The crucial nature of effective academic writing in science is highlighted in the
Maryland State Common Core Standards for English Language Arts in Science and Technical
Subjects. These standards stress the importance of citing specific textual evidence in order to
support analyses of science and technical texts while attending to the precise details of
The approach by many school systems to focus more on creative writing has affected
many students’ abilities to effectively write high quality research papers. In the two Honors
Biology courses participating in the SLO students have never constructed a thesis statement.
These students have written reports in the past but due to their general nature they have yet to
experience creating a research thesis. In the school in which the SLO project will take place,
teachers are not required to assign research papers. However, the Department Chair of Science
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has made this a requirement in all of his Honors level Biology courses. The teacher has created
SLOs that will be in alignment with Common Core Standards and are as follows:
Students will develop a thesis statement that is focused, a scholarly proposal, and
researchable
Students will develop a research question that is well-focused and limited, raises an issue,
Students will effectively use the Council of Science Editors (CSE) to cite from peer
reviewed scientific journals, .gov or United States military databases, and scientific
Students will effectively be able to identify reliable, credible, and relevant information
sources
When deciding on SLO goals for the Honors Biology courses the Department Chair decided
to focus mostly on the development of thesis statements and designing research questions. He
believes that thesis statements are the most critical component of a research paper because it
My SLO group will consist of two Honors Biology courses. These two classes are comprised
of African American, Hispanic, and Caucasian students. The total number of students
participating in the SLO is 42. The pre-assessment that will be used to gather the baseline data is
two worksheets that ask students to judge a series of statements to determine their suitability as
thesis statements. If deemed “poor”, students must rewrite the thesis statements to make them
acceptable. The second pre-assessment tool is a worksheet on using research questions. Students
will have to determine if the research questions provided are well-focused and limited, raise an
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issue, and/or invites research. There are a total of nine thesis statement questions and ten writing
research questions. The goals will be measured by scoring a series of thesis statement and
research question worksheets with a range of 0-19. The project will take place over the course of
eight weeks, from January 15th to March 16th, 2018. Students will be assessed based on the
following rubric: 0-4 No Proficiency, 5-9 Low Proficiency, 10-14 Proficient, and 15-19 Highly
Proficient. The project will take place over the course of eight weeks, from January 15 to March
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16 , 2018.
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The two growth targets for this SLO project are as follows:
75% of the students in both Honors Biology courses will be able to demonstrate at least
Students scoring a 5-9 on the pre-assessment will improve their final score by at least 2
points.
Literature Review
As Elton (2010) stated,
“Student writing in an academic discipline is, if taught at all, taught either in an academic
writing unit, which rarely if ever can go beyond the generic, or within a disciplinary
department, where there is rarely the appropriate expertise in academic writing” (p. 151).
In order to be successful in academic writing students must possess the skills that will
allow them to effectively communicate in a written format (Elton, 2010). DeFazio, Hook, Jones,
and Tennant (2010) stated, "Effective writing is a skill in which its foundation is rooted in the
cognitive domain". This involves not only learning but comprehension, application, and
synthesis of new information and knowledge (Defazio, Hook, Jones & Tennant, 2010). The
importance of effective student academic writing goes beyond secondary education. As Coffin et
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al (2003) stated, “Student academic writing is at the heart of teaching and learning in higher
education” (p. 1). Therefore, it is imperative that teachers develop an effective approach to teach
students the critical skills needed to create high quality academic writing.
A research thesis differs from a non-research report in that you must gather information
and evidence from credible and valid sources to support your argument. With a research thesis,
students will form their own ideas about a specific topic. The thesis acts as the focus for the
information gathered for your research paper. Essentially, a research thesis will offer the reader
your proposed answer to your research question. A good working thesis should limit the subject
to a narrow focus with one issue and express your position in full. A good research question is
researchable, well-focused and limited, and raises an issue that is worthy of further examination.
This is why understanding how to create a clear and concise thesis with strong supporting
elements to bolster the claim makes it easier to identify. Mauch and Park (2003) states that the
thesis and research question serve as the action plan for carrying out the research. The plan for
observation in conjunction with supporting arguments is the basis on which a thesis is created
(Mauch & Park, 2003). The thesis statement must clearly advance an argument. Evans, Gruba,
and Zobel (2011) states that the role of the thesis statement in a research paper is to point the
reader forward to a conclusion through evidence and arguments. Castelló and Donahue (2012)
believe that academic research paper writing is a two part complex process. Firstly, students
must be equipped with the critical thinking skills that will allow them to act as a researcher when
developing their research study (Castelló & Donahue, 2012). Secondly, students must be able to
Coffin et al (2003) believe that when teaching students academic writing, educators
should consider using a range of diverse teaching strategies. The strategies should include
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practical activities that will help students to develop their writing abilities (Coffin et al., 2003).
One activity includes the use of scaffolding. Coffin et al (2003) states that a key aspect of the
scaffolding activity used in teaching students’ academic writing involves raising the students’
awareness of the conventions within which they are expected to write (p. 12). Students should
then be assisted with adding to these conventions to their “linguistic and rhetorical repertoires”
(p. 12). Andon, Cogo, and Wingate (2011) states that the teaching of writing must be embedded
into the curriculum. This can be achieved through the use of modeling and guided practice.
Coffin et al (2003) states that modeling and providing guided practice in teaching academic
writing will assist students in writing about challenging texts. The guided practice will allow
students to internalize the strategies and then have the ability to perform the task independently.
Block and Pressley (2002) are in agreement with scholars that states when teaching
students academic writing educators must teach cognitive and meta-cognitive processes
regardless of the discipline. These processes include modeling, scaffolding, guided practice, and
independent practice. An important aspect that all teachers must keep in mind with respect to
teaching academic writing is using an approach that will address the needs of diverse learners.
This includes students with a limited amount of experience in academic writing as well as
students whose primary language is not English (Coffin et al., 2003). Regardless of the academic
discipline the tools used to teach academic writing must cross cultural and learning boundaries.
Procedures
The SLO will consist of various instructional strategies for two of my Honors biology
classes over the course of eight weeks. The 42 students in both classes will take a pre-assessment
on the first week of the SLO which consist of two worksheets which included creating effective
thesis statements and research questions. All students have a Writing Research Paper text that
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was purchased at the beginning of the spring 2018 semester. This book offers a guide to the
thesis writing and creation of research question process as well as the CSE citations. Students
were also provided with examples of poorly written and strong thesis and research statements.
They were then asked to evaluate the thesis statement and research question worksheets based on
the criteria provided from their books and the sample worksheet. For the thesis statement
worksheet, students were also asked to write examples of hypotheses to compare to thesis
statements. Students were engaged in the process through weekly activities and a participatory
approach where students had to verbalize their answers for the teachers and peers. After the pre-
assessments are scored, the 42 students will be placed into four groups:
No Proficiency: 0-4
Proficient: 10-14
The instructional strategies used for the completion of the SLO are designed in a way that
will maximize the learning objectives. Since students are tasked with creating a comprehensive
research paper that is thesis-driven and representative of scholarly academic writing, the
Process scaffolding of writing thesis statements and research questions (First Week of SLO)
As this is a complex assignment, it will be broken down into smaller components to help
students master each step. The two worksheets consist of writing thesis statements and
research questions. After providing students with multiple examples of the correct way to
create thesis statements and research questions they are provided with forms to practice
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their writing. Students will submit their sample thesis and research questions for
assessment with feedback. The students will use the feedback to revise their writings and
then rewrite them before their final submission. Students have until February 2nd, 2018 to
Guided Practice of identifying scholarly thesis statements and research questions (Third Week of
SLO)
Teacher and students will read scholarly thesis statements and research questions
together. The teacher will then model how to identify if the thesis statements are focused,
a scholarly proposal, and researchable and if research questions are well-focused and
Independent Practice of identifying scholarly thesis statements and research questions (Fourth
Week of SLO)
Students will read sample paragraphs and identify the thesis statements and research
questions. This will be done on a worksheet and collected for homework. The answers
For scaffolding, the thesis statement and research question worksheets use questions from
different disciplines. This will give students a realistic representation of thesis statements and
research questions from different academic disciplines. It also shows students the proper criteria
for thesis statements and research questions. For the guided practice activity, sample thesis
statements and research questions will come from the mandatory required Writing Research
Papers book. Students must bring this book with them to each class until it is no longer
necessary. Students must also take notes in their notebooks. After this instructional strategy
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students will write their first draft of a thesis statement and research question. After reading their
first drafts the papers will be returned with feedback. Finally, after the independent practice
students will revise and rewrite their works. The summative assessment will then be compared to
the pre-assessment worksheet to identify if any progress has been made since the beginning of
the SLO.
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