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The graph and the chart both depict\represent how changesthe changes in the number

amount of 3D cinemas screens and 3D films since from 2005 to 2011.


Clearly, that interest to in 3D film has been growing throughout the period of observation
and the same pattern in relation to amount of can be applied for 3D screens. Formatted: Highlight
At first, let us investigate changes in amount the number of screens. There was a stable
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slight growth since establishing of 3D screens in the cinema to which approached nearly
2000 of screens at during the first 3 years, Tthen we could observe was a rapid surge from Formatted: Highlight
2000 to 38000 screens in …years. However, as we can see, after 2011 years, the growing
growth hit a plateau almost the same level. Formatted: Highlight
As for the 3D films releasedreleases, there were was a stable growth during the period of
observation in both ripe types of 3D film (live action and animation). Although there were Formatted: Highlight
some differences; the number of 3D animation stayed remained nearly the same from 2005
to 2008, and after 2008 showed a firm growth increased increasing in by 13 times from 2 to
26. Considering the live action films, they appeared at first in 2008 and increased
dramatically by 2012 reached reaching the point of 70 films per year.

task 2

People’s health became to be the is one of the main problems in modern society.
Especially a way how people should maintain their health it [repetition] is stands of on the
top of this controversial and complicated problem. Perhaps too many people count on
medicine and not to rely on their self effort themselves for defend in their struggle for a
strong health. This trend is seems completely wrong to me and in this essay I will explain
way we shouldhow to change \ will give a possible way to change\ solution…etc our attitude
to the health system.

At first, I appreciate all the advantages that we have achieved in medical knowledge sphere
and now we can cure many diseases that could not be threated in the past [incurable
diseases – we have found treatment for the diseases that considered to be incurable in the
past], but we should not start to overuse it [what? Not very clear]. Although we misuse it Formatted: Highlight
every time. [wordy, redundant] Considering why this is all have has happened, I can point
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out that the main reason [wordy – “I may suggest that the reason behind it is is actually our
success in medicine]., Wwe acquaint get familiar with all the inventions through mass Formatted: Highlight
media, even though they [who?] do not announce that all of this these marvelous inventions Formatted: Highlight
has have their own drawbacks. WI we become aware that we can cope with anything
through medicine. [too wordy] Success ---- mass media? Connection?

Now we move to the side of why this conception is wrong.[not clear what the argument is] Formatted: Highlight
At first, we can not overestimate the value of healthy living, as even the simplest exercises
can tackle with many common disorders in our metabolism, thus we can stop disorder that
always led to much more dangerous diseases.preventing them for becoming more serious.
For example, diabetes is in soame cases is caused with by obesity and it is obvious. Formatted: Highlight
Consequently,[consequence of obesity?] Alternatively, if a person starts to have a walk he
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also starts to burn more calories it prevent him with from become becoming overweight.
[one can prevent many health issues by simply leading more active lifestyle] Formatted: Highlight

Moreover, if we consider look at health care fromfrom the economic sideperspective, we


will see that government could save a lot of money if population become is healthy. and
Tthis will give allow authorities a chance to invest into social programmes instead] reduce
spending on healthcare and treatment and invest on in social program. In addition, is well
known that prevention is cheaper that treatment cure. Other reason against misuse of Formatted: Highlight
medicine is our body itself. All processes in our body stayays in some sort of an equilibrium,
and intervention in this balance could lead to harmful consequences for to our well-being.

In conclusion, we can rely on medicine only when we have strong recommendations to do


that\so; however, I strongly believe that maintaining our health is only\solely ourself our own
responsibility and in this essay I explained why I think so.

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