Analysing the Topic

Step:

1. Write down the topic sentence (ex: circumcision)

2. Make a question phrase (ex: how circumcision works to prevent a male from genital
diseases?)
3. Write another questions following the first questions (ex: how circumcision works to
prevent a male from HIV? )
4. Extract and writes for all the keywords (ex: circumcision, HIV, genital diseases)
5. Write the synonyms and related terms of your keywords (ex: genital diseases=sexual
transmitted diseases)
6. Use mind map or another methods to make it easier for organizing.

Step to find an articles:

1. Open an online database to find an articles using your keywords that you wrote it first.
And then fill the search column by your keywords to make it easily to found.
2. After you find some articles, open and save it.

3. Read perfectly to find the core-paragraph then make a paraphrase about it.
Organizing an Idea

Circumcision

for Male

to prevent from
avoiding for Ca.
sexual infectious easier to clean
Prostate
diseases

HIV, HPV, Syphilis

Original Paragraph and Paraphrase

Number Original Paragraph Paraphrase

A decade has passed since publication of
Cameron and colleagues prospective study
that showed a greater than eight-fold
increased risk of HIV-1 infection for
uncircumcised men. Today, many
observers of the AIDS pandemic are
puzzled by the glaring discrepancies in
HIV seroprevalence between different
countries and regions, despite the presence
of what seem to be similar risk factors. For
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example, the November, 1998 UN
AIDS/WHO report on the AIDS Epidemic
concludes,”It is not fully understood why
HIV infection rates take off in some
countries while remaining stable in
neighbouring countries over many years”
Long time ago a shocking-news was
posted from Cameron and friends
about how hazardous the effects of
uncircumcised-men from HIV-1
sickness. The AIDS supervisors so
disoriented with the striking
diversities about HIV customs at
many areas in this world, in spite an
attendance that looking in the same
elements. For instance about the
statement from WHO that they said an
HIV problem was “still-growing”, it
was so unpredictable than another
countries.

(http://www.thelancet.com/journals/lancet/
article/PIIS0140-6736(99)03421-
2/fulltext?_eventId=login)
Herpes simplex virus type 2 (HSV-2) and
human papillomavirus (HPV) infections
and syphilis are common sexually
transmitted infections. HSV-2 infection
and syphilis are two of the main causes of
genital ulceration and have been associated
with an increased risk of human
immunodeficiency virus (HIV) infection in
observational studies. The prevalence of
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HPV is significantly increased in
developing nations. HPV infection can
cause genital warts, and high-risk HPV
genotypes are associated with penile and
anal cancer, as well as with cervical cancer
in female partners.

http://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJ
Moa0802556#t=article
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