Ms. Nicoll History 2017 
 
 
Name: jjj​Josh lipman  Date: 10/18/17

Essay Outline for ​7th Grade 

Part 2: Complete Sentences 
 

Both trade over land and

water between China and
Thesis other civilizations during the
Statemen Mongol and Ming Dynasties
t
were important because they
led to the exchange of ideas,
technology, and goods.
Main Statement:  Mongol/Ming- ideas
Ming- Trade with Portugal
Point 1: 
brought jesuit into China.
Body
Mongol- Open to other
Paragrap Point 2: 
religions
h 1:
Ming- Architecture all
Point 3: 
_________ over- Land/Maritime
___?
Along with these
exchanged ideas came
Transition:  sharing of technological
and scientific
advancements
Main Statement:  technology/science
Bad epidemics hit
Traded for medicine and
Body Point 1: 
herbs to cure diseases-
Paragrap Ming- sea expeditions
h 2:
Paper making- Mongols-
Point 2: 
_________ Land trade
___?
Ming- Cannons from
Point 3: 
portugal
Transition:  In addition to ideas and

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technologies many basic

goods were traveled
between the east and west.
Main Statement:  goods
Mongols were Nomads
Point 1:  They relied on trade to get
goods
Ming did not want goods
from other places besides
Body
Point 2:  spain and portugal(silver).
Paragrap
So they mostly traded for
h 3:
money.
_________ Ming showed off chinese
___? products to the world
Point 3:  through sea trade, so that
they would want more of
their goods.
As is evident trade had a
Transition:  great impact on Mongol
and Ming dynasties.

Both trade over land and

water between China
and other civilizations
during the Mongol and
Thesis Restatement:  Ming Dynasties were
important because they
led to the exchange of
ideas, technology, and
Conclusio
goods.
n What you said in  Trade lead to sharing of
Paragrap Body 1:  Ideas
h
Trade lead to
What you said in  technological
Body 2:  advancements in Mongol
and Ming dynasties
many goods were
What you said in 
Body 3: 
exchanged in the Mongol
and Ming dynasties
Summary:  The support of trade in the

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Ming and Mongol

dynasties contributed
greatly to the ideas,
technology, and goods of
China
 

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