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Spring 2017

WRITE TO LEARN,
LEARN TO WRITE
WRITING INTENSIVE CURRICULUM PROGRAM NEWSLETTER

Index
Writing in Unexpected Places: The Welcome to the fifth issue of Write to Learn, Learn
Nature of Teaching Mathematical to Write, the Writing Intensive Curriculum (WIC)
Proof Program newsletter. This issue features discussion
Reva Kasman on the teaching of writing in the disciplines at
Salem State University, ranging from what writing
20x20: Using Pecha Kucha to Teach is and looks like in mathematics to what instructors
Genre should know about digital texts when teaching
Scott Nowka reading and writing in the 21st century. The
newsletter also describes the latest WIC-writing
Tanya K. Rodrigue, PhD
Navigating a Digital Text and Its center endeavor–the course-embedded tutor pilot
Features program, an initiative that may have potential to provide good support for W-II
Matthew Burton and W-III instructors in the future.

Spotlight on Faculty: Rebecca In “Writing in Unexpected Places: The Nature of Teaching Mathematical Proof,”
Mirick, PhD Reva Kasman, PhD and associate professor of mathematics, debunks the myth
Matthew Burton that writing is only important in English. She describes the central role of writing
in mathematics and provides us with a close look at what happens in MAT 234 –
the math department’s W-II course.

The WIC program will host a Associate professor of English Scott Nowka, PhD, in “20x20: Using Pecha Kucha
two-day intensive professional to Teach Genre,” discusses an exciting and challenging writing assignment that
development seminar June 6 asks students to compose in a unique slide presentation genre called pecha
kucha. This assignment, which can be used across the curriculum in a variety
and June 7 from 9 am-3 pm. All
of courses, is an effective way to help students develop the knowledge they
faculty interested in learning need to write effectively in various writing situations. Nowka also notes other
about best practices in the pedagogical potential for this assignment.
teaching of writing are welcome.
Preference will be given to W-II In “Navigating a Digital Text and Its Features,” Matthew Burton, English MA
student and WIC graduate assistant, discusses how the digital age has changed
and W-III instructors. Faculty
the pedagogical terrain. He argues that instructors who have an understanding
will receive a $360 stipend for of the characteristics of a digital text are better prepared to develop or enhance
participation. reading and writing pedagogies that are suited for 21st century students.

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Welcome continued
The Spotlight on Faculty section features Rebecca Mirick, PhD, an assistant professor in social work. Mirick discusses
writing in her discipline as well as how her writing experiences have influenced her pedagogy. Mirick, who is a participant in
the course embedded tutor pilot program, also talks about her initial observations of the new initiative.

I hope you enjoy reading this issue. Please be sure to check out the new WIC blog: it can be accessed via the General
Education folder in Polaris.

Sincerely,
Tanya K. Rodrigue, PhD
WIC Coordinator and Assistant Professor of English

The WIC Program is actively seeking article submissions for upcoming newsletter issues on various topics related
to writing pedagogy. Some possible topics are: an effective or challenging student writing activity or assignment;
the process of designing a W-designated course; the benefits and challenges of teaching a W-designated course;
the function and purpose of writing in a field or discipline; and the role of writing in careers related to a discipline.
Articles should be approximately 750-1200 words. Please send ideas, drafts or polished articles to Tanya Rodrigue
at trodrigue@salemstate.edu. All submissions will be considered, yet given space limitations, not everyone will be
asked to further develop their work.

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Writing in Unexpected Places: The Nature of Teaching
Mathematical Proof
By Reva Kasman, PhD
Associate Professor of Mathematics
“But I became a math major It might be helpful here to explain what is not good
so that I didn’t have to write!” mathematical writing. A long list of equations with
nothing else on the page is unlikely to be enlightening or
Hearing some version of this comprehensive to a reader, even if a mathematician could
protest is not uncommon ostensibly follow the algebraic progression of equations.
around the mathematics In contrast, good mathematical writing might start with
department. It’s just one of the presentation of an equation that no one has been able
many misconceptions about to solve before, and then incorporate algebraic work into
a subject which people an insightful narrative which explains why the solution has
Reva Kasman, PhD
think is only about numbers. previously been so elusive, and how the equation can now
Discovering that mathematics involves writing can be a be solved.
jarring experience for students who chose math because it
was, in their minds, “the opposite of English.” INTRODUCING STUDENTS TO PROOFS
When mathematicians notice what seems to be a
In fact, an integral part of mathematics is communicating consistent pattern, they might make a conjecture claiming
ideas to someone who doesn’t live inside your head. The that the pattern will always occur. To become a theorem,
ability to do this well is not usually instinctive, even for that conjecture needs to be supported by a logical
those who have a facility with the more calculational argument, or proof. Once proven, theorems are considered
aspects of mathematics. Historically, math majors were incontrovertible facts. In MAT 234, we primarily focus on
expected to learn how to write in the discipline by osmosis. the writing of such proofs.
The belief was that if they saw enough good proofs (formal
mathematical arguments) modeled by their instructors and Most students enter college mathematics without ever
textbooks, students would automatically begin to write having written or read a proof before. Those who have
polished and valid proofs on their own. Unsurprisingly, this some familiarity with proofs usually learned what are
rarely happened. So colleges began to develop courses commonly called “two-column proofs” in geometry.
that focused exclusively on teaching these techniques, Unfortunately, it is rare that students gain the sense that
and about 10 years ago the mathematics department at they are trying to communicate a logical argument to
Salem State University created MAT 234, Introduction to another person with a two-column proof.
Mathematical Proof, a W-II designated course which sets
the foundation for nearly all our upper-level classes. Moreover, a typical high school math assignment often
involves submitting a numbered list of answers to a teacher
THE NATURE OF MATHEMATICAL WRITING who has access to the correct ones. But in professional
So what exactly does mathematical writing entail? The mathematical writing, the author can’t expect the reader
answer to this question varies depending on the audience to have familiarity with the problem or to anticipate the
and the context, but at the core of most mathematical solution. In fact, the work is usually being read specifically
writing is a problem that needs to be solved or a topic that because someone wants to learn something new or
needs to be explained. The author’s job is to introduce understand something complicated. So it is helpful to share
the reader to the problem or situation, and then provide this perspective with students when they are first learning
illuminating steps, strategy, and narrative to guide the how to write proofs and why there is value in writing them.
reader toward a solution or better understanding of the
topic.

CONTINUED

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WHAT DOES YOUR AUDIENCE NEED? A TOOLKIT OF PROOFS
While a professor might be grading their work, students Proving theorems is not “one size fits all.” In MAT 234
in MAT 234 are encouraged to write proofs that would students acquire an assortment of tools for approaching
be understandable to their peers in the class. This means the task. Many mathematical conjectures come in the form
having students consider what a reader like them would of “if-then” statements, and there are several techniques
need in order to follow their arguments. It also establishes for proving one. For example, in a direct proof you assume
a realistic purpose for coherently providing details which the “if” part of the statement (mathematicians call this the
students might omit if they perceive their instructor as the “hypothesis”) and write a deductive argument to reach the
only audience member. “then” part (the “conclusion”). When that isn’t feasible, you
might try a contrapositive proof in which you assume the
That might sound straightforward, but there is a tendency opposite of the conclusion and deduce the opposite of the
for students to work very hard to figure something out and hypothesis. (The contrapositive of the election statement
then in retrospect believe it was obvious. It is also common is “If your taxes are not raised, then my opponent did not
for students to reach an answer without articulating the win!” ) In a proof by contradiction, you simultaneously
process even to themselves, and then be genuinely unsure assume the hypothesis and the opposite of the conclusion,
of how they got it. Becoming conscious of and willing to and then try to derive something impossible as a result.
record ideas that they are using intuitively are essential With these and other methods, students can formally write
stages for students developing the writing skills needed to arguments for a wide range of mathematical theorems.
share mathematical work. Furthermore, it is these process
steps that ultimately become the building blocks for the PUTTING IT ALL TOGETHER
formal argument in the written proof. While each aspect of logic and proof-writing may be taught
in isolation, these skills are only useful if students can
THE ROLE OF MATHEMATICAL LOGIC independently choose which to apply when faced with a
There is another reason to push beyond students’ honestly- new situation. In MAT 234 I give students a proof portfolio
held beliefs that they “just know” something is true but assignment in which they are presented with ten unfamiliar
can’t explain it. Experienced mathematicians know how and randomly ordered mathematical conjectures at the
often conjectures can appear to be “obvious” on their start of the semester. As the course unfolds, students
surface when they are actually false! It is only when figure out which theorems they have the ability to prove
attempting to write out a careful proof that the hidden and submit rough drafts for feedback. By the end of the
subtleties are revealed and the argument falls apart. semester, everyone has a polished compilation of ten
proven theorems, typeset in accordance with professional
This is where mathematical writing involves more than mathematical standards. In my experience, students have
just weaving prose around numbers and equations. taken great pride in the completion of an initially very
Knowing how to show that something is true – and just daunting assignment.
as importantly, recognizing when it is false – requires an
understanding of mathematical logic. Although writing in a mathematics course might not be
what students thought they signed up for, it is ultimately
In mathematical logic, statements are either true or false. an empowering experience. In the process of learning to
But this is not always a simple matter. For instance, most present their ideas in writing, students deepen their own
students can tell that the statement “Boston is a city in understanding of the mathematics itself. By considering
Massachusetts” is true. But consider an election candidate what a reader will need, they are forced to grapple with
who claims, “If my opponent wins the election, your taxes the complexities of a topic and self-monitor the truth of
will be raised! ” Is this statement false if the candidate wins what they are claiming. As a result, they develop increased
but taxes are still raised? Students need to be comfortable confidence in their ability to persuasively share their
with this kind of logical analysis if they are to write knowledge and have a greater ownership of what they
mathematically valid arguments. have written. Ultimately, students acquire the essential
skills for communicating not only in mathematics, but well
beyond the discipline.

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20x20: Using Pecha Kucha to Teach Genre
By Scott Nowka, PhD, Associate Professor of English
One of the goals of a audience? These are all questions that students need to
composition course is to explore in their Process Paper—an essay that documents
create flexible writers, how they developed (and revised) their pecha kucha
students capable of presentation over several weeks. The essay is worth three
addressing writing times as much as the presentation itself.
assignments in any discipline
during their undergraduate The final product of this assignment as far as the students
career. To do this well, are concerned is the pecha kucha presentation, and I
students need to learn to have seen masterful, compelling, well-organized pecha
Scott Nowak, PhD
recognize and to write well kuchas on topics as disparate as the career of playwright
in a variety of genres. Now students easily grasp the Lin-Manuel Miranda and the merits of the music of Puff
notion of genre—they can tell a Western from a horror Daddy. But as the instructor, I know that there are several
movie—but teaching them to appreciate the ways in which products: a process journal, a storyboard, and the Process
the constraints of a genre shape the message we wish Paper. In crafting their pecha kuchas, students consistently
to communicate can be challenging. Teaching them to ask themselves questions about how to best convey
be flexible writers, capable of recognizing and satisfying their information to their audience, or how to shape their
the requirements of a particular genre can be even more message to fit the constraints of the genre. They learn
difficult. In my composition classroom, I tackle both of
these pedagogical aims by asking students to compose in SCOTT’S PECHA KUCHA ASSIGNMENT
a new genre, one that they have never written in and with • Introduce pecha kucha genre
which they are wholly unfamiliar: the presentation genre of • Work with students to analyze pecha kucha
pecha kucha. presentations
• Ask students to read about design principles in
Pecha kucha (pronounced pecháku-chá) is a Japanese Reynold Garr’s Presentation Zen
phrase meaning “chit-chat,” but the genre is much more • Support students in choosing a topic
clearly defined than that phrase would suggest. Created • Introduce storyboarding and ask students to create
by expatriate architects Astrid Klein and Mark Dytham a storyboard
in Tokyo, pecha kucha is an approach to traditional • Introduce process paper and assign students to
PowerPoint slideshows that emphasizes audience keep a process journal
engagement. The presenter has two rules to follow: she • Ask students to present their pecha kucha
may use 20 slides in the presentation, and each slide presentations to their peers
will advance automatically after 20 seconds. The result: • Students use a rubric that considers content, use of
a focused, clearly-organized presentation in which images, and delivery to evaluate their peers
the images reinforce the words, all of which is done in
precisely six minutes and forty seconds.
Pedagogical Affordances of Pecha Kucha
If this sounds challenging, it is. More than a few of my The pecha kucha genre has the potential to teach
students have paled at the prospect of giving a timed oral students:
presentation. What I stress in this assignment, however, • Rhetorical principles • Design principles
is the process of composing the pecha kucha, not the • Rhetorical awareness • Presentation/delivery
presentation. While I do provide minor credit (5%) at the • Visual, alphabetic, skills
end of the unit to encourage students to stand up and and aural Rhetorical • The writing process
share what they have crafted, the real emphasis of this Strategies • Understanding
assignment is learning how to write in this genre. How do • Audience awareness constraints as
you choose a powerful image to reinforce your words? How • Genre awareness productive for invention
can you organize your words into twenty-second units? • Multimodal writing and creativity
How do you keep your presentation interesting for your • Multimodal awareness

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to go beyond what they mastered in high school: filling
out rote writing assignments such as oversimplified lab
reports, formulaic book reports, or five-paragraph themes.
By attempting to satisfy the requirements of a wholly novel
kind of presentation, students learn to be reflective about
what they need to do to satisfy the needs of their audience
and the requirements of the form. These are lessons that
can then be translated and applied to any writing situation
that students may encounter in the future, and allow them
do so more consciously and more successfully.

To learn more about pecha kucha and view some


presentations, visit pechakucha.org.

Navigating a Digital Text and Its Features


By Matthew Burton, English MA Student and WIC Graduate Assistant
Time’s tide inevitably reading from an individual act to a social act.
brings about a sea change
in dominant media forms. Further, Hammond explains that the small size of digital
Simply put, the age of print files allows an endless number of texts to exist and to be
is folding under a new digital available without taking up any physical space. The speed
model, requiring instructors of transmission for a digital text enables us to have access
to reexamine the way we to more texts in a more convenient way than ever before.
approach teaching reading These texts are available through two-way traffic, meaning
and writing in the classroom. every digital user can both send and receive information.
Matthew Burton
The first step in rethinking This effectively creates a lack of hierarchy, wherein
pedagogical practices is gaining an understanding of what the publishing industry is subverted and texts no longer
digital texts are and do, and how they are different from require an established authority to be deemed worthy. As
print texts. This knowledge will enable teachers to begin a result of the moving “nonhierarchical, flat structure” of
adjusting their instruction to more readily meet the needs digital texts, Hammond states “…the internet is effectively
of students in the 21st century. centerless”2 and thus a text’s origin is unclear.

In Literature in the Digital Age, Adam Hammond draws on Digital texts, Hammond claims, are also comprised of
Adriaan van der Weel to describe the salient features of converging modalities. A modality, according to Hammond,
a digital text. The first characteristic of a digital text is is “a type of information that can be communicated through
textual instability. While traditional print texts are “static, a medium,” and a medium is a “specific communication
unalterable, and permanent,” digital texts are “forever technology for recording and disseminating messages”. 3
alterable”.1 For example, a print edition of Jane Eyre will A digital text conveys information using a combination
remain the same regardless of the date it is accessed, of the written word, images, video, and audio, and it is
whereas a digital text might have entire “pages” altered produced using various technologies that work to circulate
or removed on a whim. A digital text is also characterized the text in different ways. The multimodal nature of
by ease and lost cost: it is far easier to reproduce a digital digital texts demands that a digital reader is competent
text than a material one. In addition, digital texts can easily in employing interpretive strategies for meaning-making
be shared and spread among people, which transforms and comprehension that may be foreign to them. The final

1
Adam Hammond, Literature in the Digital Age, (New York, Cambridge, 2016)
2
Hammond, 12
3
Hammond, 12

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property of a digital text concerns access through content.
it would be best to understand what exactly makes it
Digital texts subvert traditional structures of textual
different, and use this to our advantage.
organization and allow a reader to “search the book’s
content directly,” looking for certain sentences or phrases,
Below, I provide basic pedagogical guidelines for
for example. 4 This functions in opposition to traditional
supporting students working with digital texts.
structures, like the library, which often forces books into
• Digital texts often incorporate a variety of modalities.
questionable categories for the sake of an easy search.
Students must learn interpretive strategies not only for
each individual modality, but strategies for interpreting
As much as we might bemoan the digital age for the
these modalities in relation to one another.
ruptures it has caused in our romantic selves, we must
• Digital texts present a lack of hierarchy and authority.
view this historical moment not as the death of literacy,
Despite the wonderful political implications, students
but as a shift in what it means to be literate. The first step
need to be taught how to determine which sources are
in the process is understanding the features mentioned
appropriate for their purposes.
above. Many of these are not drastic departures but
• The digital age presents a variety of new ways to sift
subtle shifts or mere reproductions of what came before.
through a source’s content by searching for keywords.
Hammond would remind us that anxiety over shifting media
This has potential to expedite the research process
is no new experience. Plato resented the shift from oral to
when tools are used effectively.
written language citing that “it would not be people who
• Sources are now accessed with greater ease and
would be wise, but the books.”5 As the written age shifts
speed than ever before. Students need to be reminded
to the digital age we would be wise to remember just how
to stay diligent in citing their sources, despite the
often Plato was wrong. Rather than to resist the change,
deeply impersonal nature to which they are now
acquired.

Spotlight on Faculty
By Matthew Burton, English MA student and WIC graduate assistant
Rebecca Mirick has been an assistant professor of social
work at Salem State University for three years and teaches
several courses such as Human Behavior, Social Work
Research Methods and Field Education Seminar. She
received her PhD from the Simmons College’s School
of Social work in 2011 and is a research consultant
and suicide prevention specialist at the Riverside
Trauma Center. Rebecca has also delivered a number
of presentations across the U.S. on subjects related to
social work and suicide prevention. I had the pleasure of
interviewing her about writing instruction both within her
discipline and in general.

Mirick is one of three faculty participants in the course


embedded tutor pilot program, led by Tanya Rodrigue,
coordinator of the Writing Intensive Curriculum (WIC)
program, and Rebecca Martini, coordinator of the Mary
G. Walsh Writing Center. The pilot program, which spans
the Spring 2017 semester, provides classroom specific
writing support for students in W-designated classes. The Rebecca Mirick
program pairs a tutor with a specific faculty member and
a course. The tutor provides writing support in his/her
4
Hammond 13
5
Hammond, 24

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assigned class, working closely with the faculty member MB: What was your most effective writing assignment?
and with students to improve their writing and achieve W
course learning objectives. The goal of this pilot program RM: I think that using peer review regularly in class has
is to determine if such a program would be conducive to been the most effective assignment for students. They
supporting faculty and students in W courses at Salem describe numerous benefits to peer review, including
State. The results of this study will be available next getting to see others’ writing styles and ideas, learning
academic year. more about the expectations of the assignment, feeling
more confident about their own writing, and less anxious
MB: Why is it so important that students know how to to turn in the final draft. I now do much more peer review
write effectively in social work? in my writing class than I used to do, and am thinking about
how I can incorporate it into my other, non-writing classes
RM: I think writing is an important skill for all students, as well.
but for social work students, there are some additional
reasons that writing well is a critical skill. Social work is MB: How have your own experiences with learning and
a professional degree, and many of our students graduate writing in the discipline influenced the way you teach?
and go out to work in positions as professional social
workers. They might be working in child welfare services, RM: I always tell students that no matter how long you’ve
with older adults or in programs supporting kids. Social been writing or how strong a writer you are, your writing
work writing can be medical documentation, such as notes will be stronger with revisions. In particular, getting a
documenting a visit, or it can be legal documentation. peer—even one not in social work—to read your writing
When a child welfare worker writes up a recommendation and comment on it can be a really effective way to improve
for a judge about where a child can safely live, it is your writing. I have learned this over time about my own
important that the recommendation is written clearly, writing and I make sure to talk to students about how I
and the critical points are easily understood. If the judge engage in these same writing practices that I am asking
doesn’t understand the recommendation, that can impact them to engage in.
custody and safety decisions about the child. Another issue
is that when social work writing is not done well, it is hard MB: Can you tell us a little about your experiences within
for social workers and their ideas to be taken seriously by the course embedded tutor pilot program thus far?
the reader. We lose respect from other professionals for
ourselves and our ideas if we do not write emails or letters RM: It has been fantastic to have a course embedded tutor
to colleagues professionally, or our recommendations and for my W-II class. The tutor is knowledgeable about the
assessments are written with errors and typos. assignments and my expectations, so can be much more
helpful for students. The tutor comes to class and hears me
MB: What do you think students have the toughest with in describe the assignment to students. In addition, the tutor
learning how to write within the discipline of social work? gets to listen to me answer student questions—probably
questions the tutor might also have about the assignment.
RM: In social work writing, we are always trying to write Accessibility to writing support can be a challenge for
from a strengths-based perspective. But we also want to some of our students, particularly those who work part-
make sure we are accurately describing what is going on time or full-time or have other family responsibilities in
with a family--writing from a strengths-based perspective addition to school responsibilities. The tutor has time
doesn’t mean that we ignore problems that are going on. available in the social work building before and after class,
Instead, it means that we think about how we describe so meeting with him is much easier for these students
what is going on and make sure that the strengths of the who may have very little flexibility in their schedules—it
individual and the family are clear. This can be really hard opens up writing support services to more students, which
to do and is a skill that often takes students some practice is wonderful! From a personal perspective, it’s great that
to master. the students tend to first use the writing tutor for support,
then come to me with remaining questions—this makes
teaching a Writing II class a bit less time consuming for me,
which is always a benefit.

MB: Thank you for your time.

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