LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

Milena Ivonova LO1 & LO2 Feedback. 5/6/2018

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

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Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
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LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

The start of some good work Milena, but the ideas document needs more detail, two ideas
are not considered a ‘range’ you need more. Also can you please ensure you use the
audience terminology on the ideas document, Explain the demographics, socio-economic
groups and psychographics of the magazine, for each idea.
Can you please update your production schedule, adding on any new work you have been
producing lately, ensure that you visit this every week and add it on the blog.
The moodboard is OK, but does require more layout inspiration, photograph thumbnails of
what you want to take and analysis of fonts and colour for a higher grade.

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2:
A good start here, the risk assessment and recce are OK, but you need to update them for the other
locations you have used. It isn’t clear on the risk assessment which locations the issues apply to.

The LO2 Part C (legal and ethical), you need to explain how you could avoid the legal and ethical
issues and explain using paragraphs instead of bullet points.

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 15th