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Jennifer Cox
Professor Good
RC 2001 - 108
16 June 2018
that, “many researchers have come to the conclusion that the sole purpose of conspiracy theories
is that individuals want to prove that everything is intended and planned with ill will”
(Brotherton 10). Although conspiracy theories are always being questioned and argued between
individuals, this controversy has gathered a much larger audience through technological
better understand what a conspiracy theory is, how it can be defined and how the internet has
impacted these theories. A key example of a largely followed conspiracy theory is the flat Earth
theory.
According to Real, “The flat Earth theory posits that the Earth is not a globe but in fact a
flat disk shape. This Suggests that the Earth land masses lay flat.” This theory originally began
back in ancient civilization before the idea of the Earth possibly being round was even a thought.
Worldwide, historical surveys have shown that the idea of a flat Earth has been a notion shared
by a variety of different cultures. The flat Earth theory was a common belief in ancient Greece,
India, China and a wide variety of other indigenous cultures. This theory was also considered by
many philosophers and scientists including the founder of the atomic theory, Democritus.
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“However, from at least the 6th century BCE, the theory of the flat Earth began to fall out of
favour. By the time we get to Aristotle in the 4th century BCE, the idea of a spherical Earth is
commonplace, at least among the educated classes” (Andrew). Then later, around the first
century BCE, the theory of the Earth being a globe was a controversial truth. Now today, the flat
Earth has become a growing trend and has continued as a minor tradition in thought, much like
After many years under the scientific agreement that the Earth is indeed round, Samuel
Rowbotham, an inventor, conducted The Bedford Level Experiment. This experiment, taking
place in 1838, was conducted on a slow-flowing drainage canal in the village of Welney in the
United Kingdom. The experiment was set up by having a boat sail in a straight line six miles
away from where Rowbotham stood with a telescope. If the experiment was conducted correctly
and that if the Earth was in fact round, then the boat would be positioned thirteen feet below him
at the six mile mark. These findings were then published in a book called Earth Not A Globe:
Parallax. Although published, these findings were never actually cited or proven. Most followers
of the flat Earth theory, have read this book and began following all of his beliefs without
checking sources and seeing were he found his calculations for the Bedford Level Experiment.
After scientists began researching this theory more in the early 1900s, no one could understand
how this experiment could ever prove that the Earth is indeed flat. Therefore, since this can not
be scientifically proven, the notion that the earth is flat still remains just a conspiracy theory.
believes that the Earth is flat instead of a globe shape) have come up with different answers. The
main question is “if the Earth is flat, shouldn't we have fallen off by now?”. As Real explains in
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his youtube video about the flat Earth conspiracy theory, many individuals believe in the concept
of an ice wall. Having an ice wall means that the land masses are surrounded by the antarctic,
keeping all of the ocean water contained and not “falling off the edge of the Earth.” This concept
is very interesting for a number of reasons. Geologically, the Earth’s climate is not able to obtain
temperatures cool enough to abstain a wall of ice around the entire Earth. Also, this does not
make sense when it comes to seasons. Flat-earthers believe that the sun spins around the Earth in
a way that it goes through one rotation each day (sunset one day to sunset the following day).
This then means that seasons change when the sun is closer or further from the Earth. They
believe that when the sun is further away from the Earth then the season becomes winter and
vice versa with summer. “In the flat Earth theory, the tides are not moved by a lunar
involvement. The tide shifts are connected to a magnet that is located at the center of the Earth
and the only reason we stay here is because the sun and the Earth are constantly and infinitely
moving upward” (Real). This theory cannot be proven for the mere fact that there are other
planets in our solar system that then would not receive any solar energy. If the sun only rotated
around Earth instead of the Earth, along with all other planets, orbiting around the sun then
plants such as mars would never receive any sunlight. This then also leads to the idea of gravity.
The biggest issue with this statement is the need of oxygen for living organisms. As the Earth
would move upward, the supply of oxygen in the air would lessen. With less and less air, every
person, animal and even plant would evidently not be able to sustain life. This then becomes
another concept that is not able be scientifically proven when referring to the flat Earth
conspiracy theory.
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The flat Earth theory can also help to define what a conspiracy theory is by understanding
the concept of simplifying science in order to see the bigger picture. When defining a conspiracy
theory, it is stated that a theory usually has a planned power. Most times, this means that
individuals trust that the government has planned major tragedies, much like a coping
mechanism. For many flat Earth followers, the higher power that cannot be trusted is NASA.
Andrews states that: “As far as we can tell, it's pretty likely to be the same reasons anyone
believes in any outlandish conspiracy theory: It’s a novel way of explaining an overwhelmingly
complex world, one that’s partly driven by the human tendency to see things that aren’t there, a
phenomenon known as magical thinking. This then means that with complicated scientific
findings and technology advancing to the point that NASA is able to take simulated pictures,
many individuals believe that they desire a more simplistic explanation of the shape of the Earth.
The shape of the Earth being a complicated and inversely difficult subject to comprehend does
not give enough valid evidence to prove that the Earth is flat. Also with more technological
advancements, NASA has used drones and other camera devices to take picture of the Earth from
space. These photos show a rounded shape, much like a globe, and does not have an indication of
Another way that the flat Earth theory can help to define what a conspiracy theory is is
through various conclusive studies that have been conducted on conspiracy theories in general.
Sustein believes that the reason for some individuals to create conspiracy theories is because
most people lack direct or personal information about the explanation for tragic events. In a
variety of different conspiracy theories, individuals are often tempted to attribute such tragic
events to some actor or believe that a higher power is solely involved. This means that all events
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are said to be planned with an ill will. In the flat Earth theory, this tragic event is brought up
through followers not wanting to believe in the government and NASA. This comes from a fear
of a higher power when NASA itself is just trying to provide people with scientific footage of the
Earth as well as the rest of the universe. This then leads to more questions of NASA and their
photographs. Many flat-Earthers believe that photos of the Earth being round are fake because
captions will have statements such as “enhanced with animation”. This just means that the pixel
quality has been enhanced, not that the photo was originally flat and then tampered in order to
look round.
Another aspect of conspiracy theories is the argument involved in order to have others
believe in the theory. The flat Earth theory shows an example of this during the ABC news
interviews. The questions conducted during these interviews are very detailed but answered very
vaguely. Some of the flat-earthers even respond in such a way that asks another question back to
the interviewer. This is very common with most conspiracy theories. The belief is that if answers
are kept vague or unclear, it becomes easier to defend their point of view. The arguments of
individuals that believe in the flat Earth theory also tend to almost never have evidence to back
up their theories. The main theory that cannot be proven is how they believe that there is no
gravity on Earth. This theory becomes close to impossible to evidently determine but followers
still think that it makes sense logically. These indistinct answers are starting to become more
noticeable with technological advancements. Man recordings are shown that indicate that flat
Earth followers often cannot answer scientific questions. One question that was asked to both
flat-earthers and individuals that believe that the Earth is round in multiple interviews by ABC
News was “why do you have followers?” The flat-Earthers’ response was simply because they
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are right. The other individuals responded with scientific and photographic evidence to prove
that they were indeed the ones that followed the correct theory. Scientific and technological
advancements have made it easier to see perspective interviews in order to truly see what
conspiracy theorists know and believe about the conspiracy theory that they follow.
With other technological advancements, conspiracy theories have also become more
popular because of the fact that information is now easily available to everyone. “This has
created a decline in professional publishers and has made it easier for anyone to post their beliefs
and claim that they are scientifically proven and cited” (Wood 32). The flat Earth theory is a key
example of a conspiracy theory being influenced by the internet. An increase in this accessibility
to information means that anyone can do a simple google search and find multiple articles that
seem to be factual that intend to back up ideas that still remain conspiracy theories. Also with an
increase in available information, flat Earth societies and flat Earth conventions have brought
like-minded people together. These conventions are welcomed by both people that believe that
the Earth is flat and people that believe that the Earth is round and are designed to see each
others opposing opinions. In a video published by ABC News, flat-Earthers are interviewed and
scientifically questioned. Most responses ended in “my senses tell me that the Earth has to be
flat” and “although there are details to be worked out, the basic concept is sound”. Scientists then
reply with scientific evidence of why the Earth cannot be surrounded by an ice wall, that gravity
does exist and that the sun is in fact the center of the solar system. With more ways to receive
Discussing the flat Earth theory as an example of a largely followed conspiracy theory
can help to better understand what a conspiracy theory is along with seeing the detrimental
impact that technological advancements have had on these theories through easier access to
information and forming multiple like-minded conspiracy groups. Showing this example can also
help to define the term of what a conspiracy theory is. Each individual process of defining what a
conspiracy theory is can help to determine what is factual and what remains an unproven
conspiracy. This concept remains a conspiracy because scientific evidence has yet to prove that
Works Cited
Andrew, Elise. “Flat Wrong: The Misunderstood History Of Flat Earth Theories.” IFLScience,
IFLScience, 20 Mar. 2018,
www.iflscience.com/editors-blog/flat-wrong-misunderstood-history-flat-earth-theories/.
Conspiracy
“Inside a Flat Earth Convention, Where Nearly Everyone Believes That Earth Isn't Round .”
Real, Matt. The Flat Earth Theory Explained. BuzzFeed, 27 Mar. 2018,
www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO-ndBqZORk.
Wood, Michael. “Has the Internet Been Good for Conspiracy Theorizing?” The British
Jennifer,
Overall, good work with this researched argument essay. There are some areas for improvement,
but I think this essay could very well be revised, so certainly consider that option and
communicate with me as needed.
Your introductory paragraph effectively sets up the topic and establishes an argumentative tone
that is appropriate for the essay. Nicely done.
One significant area for improvement relates to MLA conventions, which you need to review.
See my comments in the margin. Click HERE for info on MLA formatting.
On a related note, one significant area for improvement is the way that you are integrating
quotations. See this handout for help with this issue: Integrating Quotes . The most important
point, aside from punctuating correctly around quotations and parenthetical citations, is that you
never, ever want a quotation standing alone (aka “floating”) with a period immediately before
the quotation and then a period immediately following it as well.
Here is the MLA format for in text citations: “Quote” (Wilson 13). You do not have to include
the page # if it is unavailable. You do not have to include the author’s last name in parentheses if
you mention it before the quotation. If there is no author, then include the first word or two from
the bibliographical citation, like this: “Quote” (Institute of Health 13). If you do not need an
in-text citation, then you punctuate like this, with the period inside the quote marks: “Quote.”
I also think that you bring up several points on which you should probably elaborate much more
thoroughly. This is probably the most significant area for improvement in a possible revision.
Any revision also needs to provide a Works Cited page.
Overall, this essay meets the expectations for the assignment, stays focused on your
argumentative position, and develops insights through substantial, organized evidence. There are,
however, some areas of the paper that ought to be strengthened, so be sure to see my marginal
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comments, and, of course, feel free to speak with me about the revising the paper if you want to
make substantial changes to get the paper and your grade where you want them to be. AS IS
GRADE: 78