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2015
Directed Writing is the first question asks in Paper One. You are required to write a short essay
about 200 – 300 words with the help of a stimulus. Many students think that this section is
difficult to score. However, the assumption is wrong. For intermediate and weak students, this is
among the sections that they should concentrate on.
In this section, students are required to write based on various topics such as reports, letter, talk,
dialogue and etc.
However, based on the analysis made for the last eight years only five topics were used for
directed writing.
Topic Year
Speech/Talk 2002,2007,2011,
Formal letter 2003, 2013
Report 2004, 2009,2014
Informal letter 2005,2006,2010, 2012
Article 2008
YEAR TOPICS
2002 A talk on road safety
2006 An informal letter to a friend why she/he would make a good head prefect
2008 Write an article about The Best Group Leader in the leadership camp
2009 A report
2014 Report
Item Mark
Format 3
Contents 12
Language 20
Students should realize that these marks are given based on these criteria.
1. Format – Students should use appropriate format based on the needs of the questions.
2. Contents – students must use all contents points given and it must be in sentence form.
3. Language –less grammar mistakes ensure higher marks. In general, the marks allocation
are as below:
1 Text type@Format
2 Tenses
3 Number of contents - However, students need to decide whether the question
gives clue or contents?
4 Number of elaborations
Sample 1
As the President of the Environmental Club, you have been asked by your teacher to give a
speech to all students in your school on how they can help to reduce environmental problems.
In your speech, include the following notes:
HOW TO REDUCE
ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS
Text type/Format:
Speech Format: (3 Marks)
1m: Greeting
1m: Purpose of speech
1m: Closing
DW Question Tenses:
Present Tense
Contents: 12 Marks
1. Reduce energy usage
2. Do not waste electricity
3. Use product that have timer
4. Use energy saving appliances
5. Reduce air pollution
6. Avoid open burning
7. Use unleaded petrol
8. Practice car pooling
9. Reduce waste
10. Use environmental friendly product
11. Use recycled material
12. Use washable items
You are the Secreary of the Environment Club in your housing area. You have
been asked by other residents to write a letter to the municipal council in your area
complaining about a housing project near your resident. In the letter, you are asked
to mention on the effects of deforestation and its possible solutions.
Below are some notes on the effects of deforestation and possible solutions.
Effects:
Soil erosion
Land slide
Loss of flora and fauna
Polluted rivers
Flash floods
Lack of oxygen
Greenhouse effect
Solutions:
Forest conservation
Replanting
Awareness campaign
Constant monitoring
Imposed higher penalty
Text type/Format:
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1m:………………………….
1m:………………………….
DW Question Tenses:
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Contents:_______ Marks
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
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8.
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10.
11.
12.
There are a few matters in your school which could be improved. The school’s Perfects’ Board
has has a meeting. The perfects have decided to write a formal letter to the Principal. As the
secretary to the board, you have been asked to write the report.
Do remember to:
give your letter a title
use all the points given
provide two relevant details/examples for each of the four points
write in paragraphs
Format: (3 Marks)
Text type: 1m:……………………………
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1m:……………………………
Tenses: Notes:
DW Question
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Contents:_______ Marks
1.
2.
3.
4.
Eloborations:______ Marks
1 A
B
2 A
B
3 A
A
4 A
B
You are the Organising Secretary of the Police Cadet in your school. The cadets have taken part in a
jungle training camp. You have been asked to write a report to your Principle telling him/her about the
trip.
Below are some information about the camp that you can include in the report.
Format: (3 Marks)
Text type: 1m:……………………………
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1m:……………………………
Tenses: Notes:
DW Question
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For weak students, it is very important for them to secure the contents first before continuing thinking
about writing relevant information or details to the contents given.
Sample 1
As the President of the Environmental Club, you have been asked by your teacher to give
a speech to all students in your school on how they can help to reduce environmental
problems.
In your speech, include the following notes:
HOW TO REDUCE
ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS
One of the strategies that could be used is to write a simple sentence for each of the content points.
A simple sentence, is also called an independent clause, and it expresses a complete thought. In the
following simple sentences, subjects are in yellow, and verbs are in green.
The three examples above are all simple sentences. Note that sentence B contains a compound subject,
and sentence C contains a compound verb. Simple sentences, therefore, contain a subject and verb and
express a complete thought, but they can also contain a compound subjects or verbs
No Content Sentence
1. Reduce energy usage We need to reduce our energy usage.
2. Do not waste electricity We should not waste electricity.
3. Use product that have timer We can use product that have timer.
4. Use energy saving appliances We also could use energy saving appliances.
5. Reduce air pollution To reduce air pollution people should avoid open burning
6. Avoid open burning or use unleaded petrol.
7. Use unleaded petrol To reduce pollution, we also can practice car pooling.
8. Practice car pooling
9. Reduce waste Others steps to reduce environmental problem is by
10. Use environmental friendly product reducing our waste.
11. Use recycled material People should use environmental friendly product, recycle
12. Use washable items material and washable item.
Note:
For this type of answer, the candidate would score 12 marks for CONTENTS but only 2 for
LANGUAGE.
Noted that, a subject and modal are used to complete the sentence.
Such as:
Reduce energy usage. There are many ways for us to reduce energy √ 1m
usage.
Do not waste electricity Do not waste electricity. X 0
Use product that have Secondly, use product that have timer. √ 1m
timer
Use energy saving Use an energy saving appliances. √ 1m
appliances
No Content Sentence
1. Reduce energy usage There are various ways to reduce our energy usage
2. Do not waste electricity such as not to waste electricity, use product that have
3. Use product that have timer timer and also to use energy saving appliances.
4. Use energy saving appliances
5. Reduce air pollution We must reduce air pollution by avoiding open
6. Avoid open burning burning, use unleaded petrol and practice car
7. Use unleaded petrol pooling.
8. Practice car pooling
9. Reduce waste To reduce waste people should use environmental
10. Use environmental friendly product friendly product, use recycle material and washable
11. Use recycled material item.
12. Use washable items
Note:
a. Noted that comas(,) and conjunction: and, are used to complete the sentence.
b. For this type of answer, the candidate would score 12 marks for CONTENTS but only 2 for
LANGUAGE.
c. To gain better mark for LANGUAGE it is wiser for the students to use variety of sentences. One
good example is the usage of compound sentence
Exercise 1
Below are some notes on the effects of deforestation and possible solutions.
Effects:
Soil erosion
Land slide
Loss of flora and fauna
Polluted rivers
Flash floods
Lack of oxygen
Greenhouse effect
Solutions:
Forest conservation
Replanting
Awareness campaign
Constant monitoring
Imposed higher penalty
Effects:
Example:
Soil erosion
The first effect is deforestation is soil erosion.
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Loss of flora and fauna
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Polluted rivers
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Flash floods
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Lack of oxygen
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Greenhouse effect
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Solutions:
Forest conservation
One of the ways that we could practice to resolve deforestation is through forest conservation..
Replanting
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Awareness campaign
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Constant monitoring
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Imposed higher penalty
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b. A biography (a text on the life of a person) is usually written in a sequence structure. It first
gives information about the person's childhood, then about the person's adulthood, and then
about his or her later years.
c. A historical text (e.g. a text on the events of World War II) also uses a sequence structure to
a give a chronological order of events in history.
d. A text that explains a process (how something is done, such as making a pizza, or how the
brain processes information) also organizes information with a sequence structure. Such a
text will explain each step in the process from the first to the last.
first
last
finally
when
following
later
next
then
during
after
before
Some words and phrases help to develop ideas and relate them to one another. These kinds of
words and phrases are often called discourse markers. Note that most of these discourse
markers are formal and used when speaking in a formal context or when presenting
complicated information in writing.
These expressions focus attention on what follows in the sentence. This is done by
announcing the subject in advance. As regards and as far as………is concerned usually
indicate a change of subject
Examples:
With regard to the latest market figures we can see that ...
Regarding our efforts to improve the local economy, we have made ...
As for John's thoughts, let's take a look at this report he sent me.
These expressions give expression to two ideas which contrast but do not contradict each
other.
Examples:
We've been steadily improving our customer service center. On the other hand
our shipping department needs to be redesigned.
Jack thinks we're ready to begin whereas Tom things we still need to wait.
Examples:
Our teacher promised to take us on a field trip. However, he changed his mind
last week.
Peter was warned not to invest all of his savings in the stock market.
Nevertheless, he invested and lost everything.
We use these expressions to add information to what has been said. The usage of these
words is much more elegant than just making a list or using the conjunction 'and'.
Examples:
His problems with his parents are extremely frustrating. Moreover, there seems to
be no easy solution to them.
I assured him that I would come to his presentation. Furthermore, I also invited a
number of important representatives from the local chamber of commerce.
Our energy bills have been increasing steadily. In addition to these costs, our
telephone costs have doubled over the past six months.
These expressions show that the second statement follows logically from the first
statement.
He reduced the amount of time studying for his final exams. As a result, his marks
were rather low.
We've lost over 3,000 customers over the past six months. Consequently, we have
been forced to cut back our advertising budget.
As the President of the Environmental Club, you have been asked by your teacher to give a
speech to all students in your school on how they can help to reduce environmental
problems.
HOW TO REDUCE
ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS
There are a lot of ways to reduce environmental problems. As human, we should try to
follow the following suggestions. ______________ we should reduce energy usage. In practicing
this, we should not waste electricity _____use product that have timer. ________we could use
energy saving appliances.__________, we could reduce air pollution. ________________we
could use unleaded petrol _______practice car pooling. ____________we could reduce waste. In
doing so, we could use environmentally friendly product_____________ use recycled
material._____________ we should use washable items.
Support and elaboration consists of the specific details and information writers use to develop
their topic. The key to developing support and elaboration is getting specific. Good writers use
concrete, specific details, and relevant information to construct mental images for their readers.
Without this attention to detail, readers struggle to picture what the writer is talking about, and
will often give up altogether.
Two important concepts in support and elaboration are sufficiency and relatedness.
1. Sufficiency refers the amount of detail — is there enough detail to support the
topicSufficiency, however, is not enough. The power of your information is
determined less by the quantity of details than by their quality.
2. Relatedness refers to the quality of the details and their relevance to the topic.
Part 2
1. Anecdote
Short personal story
o Once, when I was in elementary school …
o I remember the time when
2. Quotations
4. Example
5. Descriptions
Vivid images using “juicy” words that turn the reader’s “brain camera” on
o Appeal to the 5 senses
o Looks like …
o Sounds as if …
o Smells similar to …
o Feels the same as …
o Tastes just like
6. Statistics/Facts
There are a few matters in your school which could be improved. The school’s Perfects’
Board has has a meeting. The perfects have decided to write a formal letter to the
Principal. As the secretary to the board, you have been asked to write the report.
Do remember to:
give your letter a title
use all the points given
provide two relevant details/examples for each of the four points
write in paragraphs
Contents
important issue. There is hardly any variety in food choice as students basically eat
the same type of food everyday. To make matter worse, the food that is served
usually turns out to be cold or half-cooked. Vendors in the school canteen can be
quite rude at times ands some even take out their anger on the students. Mr. Ali
frequently shouting at his customers. We find this type of behaviour intolerable and
high and are still rocketing up for some reason. The students are paying good
authorities and vendors should realize that not all students have enough money to
buy such expensive food. Some students barely have enough money for their bus
fare home. Either way we do not believe in paying for something which is hardly
worth its price. Vendors should be warned to lower their prices and not place too
much importance on profit which was not rightfully gained in the first place. This
is an important issue which should be taken into consideration before the students
our school prides itself on being one of the finest in the state, it is only fitting that we live
up to that little and make sure cleanliness is a priority. For some reason, the cleanliness
level in our school is reducing rapidly. Rubbish is strewn over the floor and there are
mountains of dust in every hook and cranny of the school. Coming back to the canteen
issue, there was a recently reported case of a girl finding a bug in her plate of noodles!
studying environment of classes nearby. It is our opinion that the school is in need of a
Just last week a lower form students was nearly knocked down by an errant driver
who when questioned answered irritably by saying that the students should have
let him pass first. In order to prevent future accidents, we the prefects suggest a
As the President of the Environmental Club, you have been asked by your teacher to
write an article to help reduce environmental problems. In your article, include the
following notes:
HOW TO REDUCE
ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS
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You recently attended a leadership camp organized by the District Education Officer. At the
camp, your best friend was chosen as the best group leader. In school, you have been asked by
your Principle to write an article in your school yearly book.
Friend’s details
Name
Class
Family background
Interest/Hobbies
Exercise 2
Many of your schoolmates are not interested in sports. You have carried out a small scale survey
among your classmates. After gathering the findings you want to share it by publishing it in a
popular magizine.
REASONS
SUGGESTIONS
Exercise 3
You are the President of the Association for the Elderly in your state. You are concerned that the
rights of the golden citizens are not being recognized by the government. Write a letter to the
Prime Minister, voicing your concern as well as giving your suggestions on how to improve the
quality of lives of the senior citizen.
to provide a close
Exercise 4
You are asked to write an article for your school magazine. Your article in on why Malaysian
students are not performing up to expectations in school. In your article, you also suggest ways
to improve the quality of our future students.
Below are some notes you have made on the reasons and suggestions.
Reasons
Overdependence on teachers
Suggestions
Role of teachers
Role of parents