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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.

Others,
however, say that this would have little effect on public health and 并列宾语从句 that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Solution 题型

极端不成立法则:
best
具象思维:
sports facilities—easy-to-reach local sports centers/stadium etc.
facilities 不等于 equipment

首段:
参考答案一
A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general public 题目讨论对象,with conflicting views
on how to tackle this worrying trend.
One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities 题目讨论对象 to encourage a more active lifestyle.
Generally, I think that it takes more efforts to address this issue.

参考答案二
It is easy to notice that the health level of the general public today is declining rapidly 题目讨论对象.
While 尽管 some people might think the best way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities 题目
讨论对象, I tend to hold a different opinion.

参考答案三
How to improve the health level of the general public has been a major concern to many.
While 尽管 some people might think the best way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities 题目
讨论对象, I tend to hold a different opinion.

主体段结构:
驳论/让步
Some people think that the best solution is to...
... ...
But this solution has some obvious limitations, because it might be only attractive to those who are already fit and leading
a healthy lifestyle, not those who most need it.

立论:
However, there certainly are better ways of addressing this problem.
Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing more sports equipment in public places...
A more effective solution should be to impose high tax penalties on 征收税务罚款 high-fat food products, tobacco and
alcohol. ... Healthy lifestyle should be better introduced to the general public to ....

结尾段:
To conclude, focusing on sports facilities is a narrow approach and 并列谓语 would not have the desired results.
Other important measures should be adopted as well.

议论文转换题目的陈述方式,但写作任务一致,文章结构内容不变:
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. To what extent
do you agree or disagree? 一个观点的讨论

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,
however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these
views and give your own opinion. 两个观点的讨论

议论文有选择、有侧重的逻辑结构

首段:
讨论对象引入句(1-2/3)+中心观点

主体段立论:
分论点一+拓展
分论点二+拓展

主体段驳论/让步:
分析对立面+再次声明自己观点的正确性

尾段:
总结(+简短补充或升华)

主体段立论段和让步段顺序可灵活调整,注意措辞即可。

说明文:
The health level of the general public is decreasing dramatically. How to change the situation?

首段:
... This essay will demonstrate some possible/potential to tackle this problem.

主体段:
采取递进式引出解决方案

One possible solution should be ...

Another way to handle the issue could be ...

A more effective approach might be ...

结尾:
Overall, ...

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