The diagrams illustrate the process involved in the production of electricity

from wind and the most suitable place location. Commented [WU1]: Word choice: efficient

Firstly, a turbine consists of two main parts, blades, and high steel tower. In
addition, very long blades are made by fibreglass or even wood. In the same
way, other parts are installed on the tower. It includes a generator which
produces about 1.5 megawatts of electricity and a sensor on the top of the
generator which information about speed and direction is given by that in
computer department.

The turbine works with wind power, blades are driven by wind in turn
powers a generator to produce electricity. In the same manner domestic
turbine is used for producing electricity, nevertheless much less than a big
one (100 kilowatts)
In addition, the wind turbine is located in two different places, as the matter
Commented [WU2]: “nevertheless” is a transition, use it
truly.
Commented [WU3]: This sentence is not relevant to the
last one, and you have used “in the same manner” In a way
that the following sentence doesn’t come true.

of fact in the direction of the wind. To begin with, the turbine can be located
on top of a mountain which wind strength are is high and has a maximum
result of electricity. In contrast, it can be set up close by coast. However, it Commented [WU4]: Change it.

can’t generate more electricity power because wind strength is not as much
as high places.

In general, the turbine places of locate is so affective effective since, also

every location has its own benefits. Commented [WU5]: You have added so many
information that aren’t necessary and also missed some
essential parts of the process.