7 ways learning a language will make you a better person

There are so many languages in this world. Language is the important things to learn. As Commented [T1]: There are SO MANY languages. Pake ‘s’ ok

we know, we talked to each other with our own language. Without language, we can’t
understand each other. But we usually just speak by our native language. It’s not enough with
just understanding one language, because there are so many benefits if we can speak multi-
lingual. These are some benefits :

Learning language will improve your relationships. Why?. In this world as we know,
each place hasve their own native language, and we can imagine how many languages now. Commented [T2]: ‘each place HAS…’

aAnd in social life, in your school, university or in your office you need to make networking to Commented [T3]: JANGAN LUPA HURUF KAPITAL SETELAH TITIK
OK
fluent your work. If you can speak your friend’s language, they might be feels like close each
other and they might be emphatic to you.

Learning a language will improve your memory. The children with bilingual better
working memory than the children with just one languageBilingual children have better working Commented [T4]: Kamu bisa sederhanain kalimatnya biar gk
redundant, jadi “BILINGUAL CHILDREN HAVE BETTER WORKING
memory than children who speak only one language. It’s not just effect when young, but it’s MEMORY THAN CHILDREN WHO SPEAK ONLY ONE LANGUAGE.”

develop it develops until we growing up. Commented [T5]: “IT DEVELOPS…”

Pake present tense, soalnya ngomongin fakta

Learning a language will make you earn more money. From data of The Economistc, Commented [T6]: “... make you more money.” = membuatmu
lebih banyak uang”
these are the breakdowns by the most useful languages to learn for annual bonuses one of them is Lebih banyak apa? Seharusnya “… make you EARN more money”
atau “… make you MAKE more money”
Spanish with 1.5 percent bonus. For Eexample, in Indonesia, when the menu is written in using Commented [T7]: The economist mungkin maksudmu

bilingual language, the price is more expansive than without using bilingual language. Commented [T8]: Bukan “Example…” tapi “For example..” atau
“for instance…”
Commented [T9]: Sebenernya bisa “uses…”
Learning a language will make you sexier. Specially in Indonesia, if we know someone Inget, kalo pake ing kamu butuh ‘to be’, kecuali in some cases yaitu
‘gerund’ atau waktu verb dijadiin adjective.
speaking with English language or we can say it with the second language, we think they might
be so cleaver and have a high dignity so it’s look like sexy. Commented [T10]: Cleaver = pisau daging
Mungking maksud kamu ‘clever’?

Learning a language will advance your professional career. The employee that can speak
more than one language will more valuable in front of your boss, they might be always useful
when your office or your manager sometime make a deal with foreigner. And you will always
be needed.
 Also, learning a language will delay diseases. How can it be? From the research, people
who can speak more than one language, can delay Alzheimer’s and dementia by 4.5 years. It is
stronger than just using some drugs. So we can say that using bilingual or more is good for our
neuron.

Last, learning language will improve your native language. Believe it or not, example
when you learn English language, you must be learn about grammar. Grammar consists of Commented [T11]: “you must be…” = kamu mungkin/pasti …

structure etc, that some of them are almost same or maybe some of them is different as
Indonesian structure. wWithout we realize, we also compared it by our native language that
maybe we not learn it. So, we learn Indonesian more deep and also we learn English.
Penjelasan:
You must be a doctor = kamu mungkin seorang dokter
She must be smoking weeds now = dia pasti sedang ngerokok ganja
sekarang
Commented [T12]: Kata ‘grammar’ termasuk dalam subject ‘it’,
jadi verb (consist) harus ditambah ‘s’ (simple present tense)