Early Childcare Teacher

by Jessica Jensen

Submission date: 15-Sep-2018 09:41AM (UT C-0500)

Submission ID: 1002353266
File name: 218FA-ENGL-1301-01_72249193_1076563444_Early_Childcare_T eacher.rtf
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Early Childcare Teacher
ORIGINALITY REPORT

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SIMILARIT Y INDEX
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Submitted to Oxford Brookes University
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Early Childcare Teacher
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

100
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/100

Comment 1
great start!

QM Missing ","
Missing comma:
T hough it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can of ten help to prevent a
misreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that
is logically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your
reader to place a comma af ter that introductory element. Such phrases will of ten begin with
words like "because," "while" or "although," as in the f ollowing example: "While everyone was
f ighting, the bear wandered away." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be
conf using.

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Capitalization

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Comment 2
obtain

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this should be a comma
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Comment 4
awkward punctuation in this sentence...do you mean f irst aid, CPR training, and baby care, f or
example, how to warm a bottle.

Comment 5
unnecessary comma here

Comment 6
T his sentence is awkwardly phrased...consider beginning with...An early childcare teacher is
encouraged...

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Comment 7
who is in agreement with them?

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need another sentence here...to evaluate this evidence...don't end paragraph with inf ormation
that needs to be cited

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part-time

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f ull-time

QM Missing ","
Missing comma:
T hough it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can of ten help to prevent a
misreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that
is logically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your
reader to place a comma af ter that introductory element. Such phrases will of ten begin with
words like "because," "while" or "although," as in the f ollowing example: "While everyone was
f ighting, the bear wandered away." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be
conf using.

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A qualif ied teacher receives a

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this is unnecessary...it interrupts the f low of the sentence...but you do need a comma

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Comment 13
environment transf orms

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Comment 14
you may want to include the ratio since you mention it

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Run-on sentence:
T he sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.

QM Missing ","
Missing comma:
T hough it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can of ten help to prevent a
misreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that
is logically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your
reader to place a comma af ter that introductory element. Such phrases will of ten begin with
words like "because," "while" or "although," as in the f ollowing example: "While everyone was
f ighting, the bear wandered away." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be
conf using.

Comment 15
this and previous comma are unnecessary
 QM Missing ","
Missing comma:
T hough it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can of ten help to prevent a
misreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that
is logically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your
reader to place a comma af ter that introductory element. Such phrases will of ten begin with
words like "because," "while" or "although," as in the f ollowing example: "While everyone was
f ighting, the bear wandered away." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be
conf using.

Comment 16
need to revise this sentence f or clarity

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Works Cited belongs in the center

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look at hanging indent; f ont/size.

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this part doesn't belong