VRA Rough Draft

by Presley Branham

Submission date: 10-Nov-2018 12:18PM (UT C-0600)

Submission ID: 1036519022
File name: Presley_Branham_analysis_rough_draf t.docx (23.75K)
Word count: 1206
Character count: 5789
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Visual Rhet orical Analysis Word Count

1 source?

ts

28+

7
mis

mis
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26
4

mis
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ts

7
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f ont

wce

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wce
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out spec out line alignment

out f ormat
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

11 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
4%
INT ERNET SOURCES
0%
PUBLICAT IONS
11%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
Submitted to Alvin Community College
St udent Paper 7%
2
journals.plos.org
Int ernet Source 2%
3
Submitted to CSU, Fullerton
St udent Paper 1%

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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PAGE 1

QM incorrect
incorrect

QM Visual Rhetorical Analysis Word Count

Your word count:

Minimum required: 1050

Maximum: 1400

Additional Comment

1093

QM 3
Your title needs to ref lect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

QM source?
You must document where you get your ideas.

Comment 1
??

Comment 2
Remember that you must cite a source in the introductory paragraph that gives
information about the sexism in media during the time period the video was made. T he
rest of the paragraphs must cite only the video or photographs you are analyzing.

QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
 Comment 3
List examples separately, and explain how each example reveals sexism.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction f ormat--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is
in the Research f older in the Inf ormation & Books area of the Blackboard class.
Additional Comment

Check all of your introductions to quotations to make sure you use complete sentences
(independent clauses) and colons as required.

QM 7
Incorrect citation f orm
Additional Comment

See me.

QM mis
misquote
Additional Comment

Quotes have to be word f or word.

QM mis
misquote

PAGE 2

QM ts-structure
A topic sentence should be a simple or a complex sentence.

QM 26
Improper quoting f orm
Additional Comment

Check to make sure that all of your quotations are f ormatted as assigned.

Comment 4
List examples separately, and explain how each example reveals sexism.

QM mis
misquote
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Comment 5
Explain how each example reveals sexism.

QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

f ocus

Comment 6
Explain how each example reveals sexism.

Comment 7
Remove--see note beside introductory paragraph.

QM 7
Incorrect citation f orm
Additional Comment

Check all of your parenthetical citations to make sure you have used the assigned f ormat.

PAGE 4

PAGE 5

QM center
Center your title.

QM f ont
You must use a 12-point T imes-New Roman f ont.

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to f ix the problem.

QM incorrect
incorrect

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to f ix the problem.
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QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM outline alignment
Your outline is not aligned properly. Please see the "Sample Outline" page in the Research
f older, which is in the Content area of Blackboard.

QM out spec
Your subtopics need to contain specif ic details.

QM out f ormat
incorrect outline f ormat
Please see the "Sample Outline" page in the Writing Inf ormation f older, which is in the
Inf ormation & Books area of Blackboard.