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Nonsensical Sounds- A sound location company owned by Coulston Rogerson. This company is
stationed in Philadelphia, PA. This company takes on businesses seeking advertisement audio,
and records whatever they need.
Name: Jeremiah
Occupation: Owner of recently started Jeremiah Fisheries, a fishing equipment shop in
Philadelphia.
Goal- To become a successful store owner, get his name out there.
To: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
From: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
Bcc:
Subject: Business Venture
My name is Jeremiah, and I have recently started my own fishing business. I saw your flyer in
the mail and am interested in hiring you for an advertisement I hope to record in about a month. I
already have a script prepared, and would like this to happen in my store, located on 22nd Street
in Philadelphia.
I do not know your rate from the flyer, but I would like to get an estimate of how much this
would cost beforehand. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Jeremiah
Jeremiah Fishing
22nd Street, Philadelphia PA.
To: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
From: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
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Subject: Questions Answered
Right now, the defining factor for my business is hours. If I am recording for ten hours, I usually
ask for around $1500, but if this is a quick three hour job, I can charge about $900. Bottom line, I
do not get up for under $750. Since you are emerging in the business, I can charge you my
lowest rate if the job is under 2 hours.
My schedule is open a month from now, but you need to give me a defined date and time before
someone snatches it up, and I also need a list of all the companies you have worked with before.
Talk soon,
Coulston Rogerson
Nonsensical Sounds
(603) 727-2860
To: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
From: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
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Subject: Possible Date And Rates
Thank you for answering back so quickly, I really appreciate it. I had no idea audio was that
expensive but hopefully we can keep it under two hours, so I will pay the $750. As for dates, if
you are available I would like to shoot on the 22nd. Below is a list of companies I have worked
with. See you then.
Hacker’s Fishing Supplies
Gwendlynn’s Fishing Rods
Kracker’s T-Shirts And Accessories
Brother Bilo Accounting And Financial Services
To: KatzBiloAccounting@gmail.com
From: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
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Subject: Financial Insurance
Hey Jason,
Long time no see man. Glad to see you still in the rat race. We still on for drinks on Friday? Now
for some actual work talk…. *ahem* I have a potential client who has done business with you
and I want to make sure that he is good on the money. Name is Jeremiah of Jeremiah Fishing.
Can you tell me about any transactions he has done with you, and how long it took to actually
receive his payment? Is he good for it?
Talk soon man,
Coulston.
To: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
From: KatzBiloAccounting@gmail.com
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Subject: RE Financial Insurance
Sup man,
Hell yeah we are still on for drinks. Would love some right now. Work is boring as shit.
Anyways, yeah we have a couple records for Jeremiah Fishing. Jeremiah took out a loan from us
on the 12th of March and repaid it in about three months’ time. He seems like he should be good
on the money, was pretty nice.
Let me know if there is anything else I can help you out with before we get shitfaced.
Cya.
Jason.
To: KatzBiloAccounting@gmail.com
From: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
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Subject: Thanks
Katz,
Thanks man. I really appreciate this. See you on Friday.
Coulston
To: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
From: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
Bcc:
Subject: Confirmation And Next Steps
Dear Jeremiah,
After checking with some references, I am now ready to proceed with business. The 22nd is fine
with me, but you need to slap a start time in. I am alright with charging the $750. Even though I
have checked with your references, I still have a policy that requires I ask for a portion of the
payment up front with new customers. I am going to have to ask that you give me the first $200
up front. The rest can come after everything has gone through.
Thanks. Talk soon.
Sincerely,
Coulston Rogerson
Nonsensical Sounds
(603)727-2860
To: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
From: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
Bcc:
Subject: Final Confirmation
Exigence: Coulston needs answers to a huge hole in his wallet after his job with Jeremiah.
Primary Audience: Jeremiah
Secondary Audience: Future business partners of Jeremiah, Jason Katz
Author’s Purpose/Goal: To express anger, ask why there is not a larger check in the mail.
Context/Background Info: The job went off without a hitch, but the incorrect amount was given
to Coulston on two accounts.
To: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
From: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
Bcc:
Subject: Some Questions….
Let’s take a step back and review, at least from my side of all of this.
When I came to the recording session, I was handed an incorrect amount of money from you. I
thought that this was alright considering this would be a seemingly fast job and I could just ask
you for the remainder after.
When the session ran long, I was under the impression that this is just some jitters from you,
thinking that we would get it in the next take. I did not expect this going an hour longer than
planned.
Nonetheless, I am a fairly forgiving man and thought that I would just charge the agreed upon
rate. Sadly I had to leave immediately to go to my son’s soccer game after and could not ask for
the remainder of the down payment.
It is made pretty clear you wanted to short me. If not by the first payment, then made especially
clear when I woke up to see your addition to my bank account was far far under the expected
amount. The agreed upon price was $750 for two hours. So far I have received a total of $500 for
a payment of three hours.
Please note that I am not upset by this. I know things can get tangled up places, and I am fine if
the rest comes in at a later date. But the effort seems pretty clear that you never intended to pay
the full amount. Someone vouched for you, man. Don’t throw them under the bus too.
Coulston.
To: NonsensicalSounds@gmail.com
From: JeremiahFishing@gmail.com
Bcc:
Subject: Apologies
As for the advertisement recording taking longer than expected; that is completely on me. I did
not expect it to take that long.
Please let me know if there is anything else I can do to make this up to you. The requested
amount of money should be in your bank account now.
With many apologies,
Jeremiah
Jeremiah Fishing
22nd Street, Philadelphia PA
Z. De Piero Student:
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202D Business Writing, F’18
Company Profile
Exigence
Writer
Purpose
What’s the writer’s goal? Is it realistic? Have they
identified a concrete, actionable outcome that they’re
hoping to achieve?
Genre Identification
Genre-Specific Conventions
Rhetorical Strategies
Has the writer used various rhetorical strategies to
persuade their reader/audience in the most effective
way possible? From jargon (technical terminology), to
particular details (e.g. the specific amount of $ due for
a claim; timelines for a call to action), to
communication with internal vs. external audiences,
have you (the student) brought each genre “to life” in
realistic ways with your language-based decisions?
Organization/Structure
Mechanics + Punctuation
Focus on “Moves”
Examples of “Moves”
Is your analysis of your moves connected to your
language? Have you quoted yourself to provide concrete
examples?
Interview