Name : M Ainur Roziqin

NPM : 1635511019
Class : 5A / 5th Semester

Step 1: Paragraph Plan

Topic Sentence 1 : Bung Karno was a charismatic figure and had great
influence
Support 1 : The first president of Indonesia
Details :
1. Played an important role for the liberation of Indonesia
2. A digger Pancasila
3. Continued his study in Bandung

Topic Sentence 2 : A leader who has good communication

Support 1 : Mastering 7 foreign languages
Details :
1. English, France, Germany, Arab, Chinese and Latin
Support 2 : Had many achievements
Details :
1. Lenin Peace Award (1960)
2. Horored Star Philiphine (1965)
3. Doctor Honoris Causa from 26 Universities
4. The Order Of The Supreme Companions of OR Tambo (President of
South Africa - 2005)
Step 2: First Draft

The Best President of Indonesia All The Time : Soekarno

Bung Karno was a charismatic figure and had great influence for the
indepence of Indonesia. He was the first president of Indonesia. He who was also
known as Ir. Soekarno was born on June 6, 1901, in Surabaya, East Java. He
played an important role for the liberation of Indonesia from Dutch colonialism.
He is a digger Pancasila. He was proclaimed Indonesian independence which
occurred on August 17, 1945. Soekarno went to primary school in Mojokerto and
after that he continued to high school in Surabaya. There were many advantages
by having education in Surabaya. One of those was he knew many figures who
had reformist soul and they were willing to struggle for Indonesia’s independence.
After he graduated from high school, he continued his study in Bandung. At that
era, he chose Netherlands engineering school or now it is well-known as ITB
(Bandung Institute of Technology) (Oltmans, 2001).

Soekarno mastered 7 foreign languages such as English, France, Germany,

Arab, Chinese and Latin. It helped him to communicate with others leadership in
the world. Many people around the world admired him because he is a courageous
person. Until some name of the streets was named ‘soekarno street’ like in Jeddah,
Holand, etc. Because he has been a honor person with various achievements in his
career, such as Lenin Peace Award (1960), Horor Star Philiphine (1965), Doctor
Honoris Causa from 26 Universities, The Order Of The Supreme Companions of
OR Tambo (President of South Africa - 2005) (Sudjatmiko, 2010). His struggle
would be incredible history for Indonesia. Because he ever said “JASMERAH –
Jangan sekali-kali melupakan sejarah”
Step 3: Revising and Editing

The Best President of Indonesia All The Time : Soekarno

Bung Karno was a charismatic figure and had great

influence for the indepence of Indonesia. He was the first
president of Indonesia. He who was also known as Ir.
Soekarno was born on June 6, 1901, in Surabaya, East Java.
He played an important role for the liberation of Indonesia
from Dutch colonialism. He is a digger Pancasila. He was
proclaimed Indonesian independence which occurred on
August 17, 1945. Soekarno went to primary school in
Mojokerto and after that he continued to high school in
Surabaya. There were many advantages by having education
in Surabaya. One of those was he knew many figures who
I think it isn’t had reformist soul and they were willing to struggle for
important sentences Indonesia’s independence. After he graduated from high
school, he continued his study in Bandung. At that time, he
chose Netherlands engineering school or now it is well-
known as ITB (Bandung Intitute of Technology).

Soekarno mastered 7 foreign languages such as

English, France, Germany, Arab, Chinese and Latin. It
helped him to communicate with others leadership in the
world. Many people around the world admired him because
he is a courageous person. Until some name of the streets
was named ‘soekarno street’ like in Jeddah, Holand, etc.
Because he has been honor person with various
achievements in his career, such as Lenin Peace Award
(1960), Horor Star Philiphine (1965), Doctor Honoris Causa
from 26 Universities, The Order Of The Supreme
Companions of OR Tambo (President of South Africa -
It’s perfect tense and 2005). His struggle would be incredible history for
must to use participle Indonesia. Because he ever said “JASMERAH – Jangan
sekali-kali melupakan sejarah”
verb ‘honored’
Step 4 : Editing

The Best President of Indonesia All The Time : Soekarno

Bung Karno was a charismatic figure and had great influence for the
indepence of Indonesia. He was the first president of Indonesia. He who was also
known as Ir. Soekarno was born on June 6, 1901, in Surabaya, East Java. He
played an important role for the liberation of Indonesia from Dutch colonialism.
He is a digger Pancasila. He was proclaimed Indonesian independence which
occurred on August 17, 1945. Soekarno went to primary school in Mojokerto and
after that he continued to high school in Surabaya. After he graduated from high
school, he continued his study in Bandung. At that time, he chose Netherlands
engineering school or now it is well-known as ITB (Bandung Institute of
Technology).

Soekarno mastered 7 foreign languages such as English, France, Germany,

Arab, Chinese and Latin. It helped him to communicate with others leadership in
the world. Many people around the world admired him because he is a courageous
person. Until some name of the streets was named ‘soekarno street’ like in Jeddah,
Holand, etc. Because he has been honored person with various achievements in
his career, such as Lenin Peace Award (1960), Horor Star Philiphine (1965),
Doctor Honoris Causa from 26 Universities, The Order Of The Supreme
Companions of OR Tambo (President of South Africa - 2005). His struggle would
be incredible history for Indonesia. Because he ever said “JASMERAH – Jangan
sekali-kali melupakan sejarah”