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Report
(For work on reports, see pages 78 and 114.)
Task
The school where you study English has decided
to spend some money on either buying more
computers or improving the library. You have
been asked to write a report for the schoo!
director describing the benefits to the school of
both these things, and saying which one you
think should be chosen and why.
Write your report. (You should write between
120-180 words.)
Model answer
introduction
+ The aim of this report is to...
+ This report is intended to...
Reporting results
+ Most people seem to feel that .
+ Several people said/told me/suggestedthought that
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additional computers and of improving the library, and
to suggest which of these would be best. | interviewed
a number of students to find out their views.
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Some of the students thought that this was a good
idea, saying computers were useful for
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heading * playing games.
However, other students said that they preferred to use
their own computers at home.
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the following reasons
1 Many students do not have @ quiet place to study at
home. The library would be a good place for private
study, but at present there are not enough tables and
chairs there.
2 They feel that up-to-date dictionaries and reference
books are needed
3 They want to be able to read modern books written
for young people.
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Article
(For work on articles, see pages 52, 102 and 126.)
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Write your article. (You should write between
120-180 words.)
Model answer
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‘When most people think of Carnival, they think of
Rio de Janeiro, But Rio isn’t the only city in Braz! that
knows how to have parties. live in Olinda, a lovely
city in the north-east of Brazil. What can we say ———]
about the carnival at Olinda? Just that i's the best in
the world!
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Roman festivals. It was introduced to Brazil by the/
Portuguese, and was influenced by Afcan ythrhs
and Indian costumes. Now its a big national
celebration, pale eenl
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each year.
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to pay and there are no big stars. Everyone takes
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summing your main tourists. you come, | promise you'll never forget it!
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