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Weiting reference (Paper Report (For work on reports, see pages 78 and 114.) Task The school where you study English has decided to spend some money on either buying more computers or improving the library. You have been asked to write a report for the schoo! director describing the benefits to the school of both these things, and saying which one you think should be chosen and why. Write your report. (You should write between 120-180 words.) Model answer introduction + The aim of this report is to... + This report is intended to... Reporting results + Most people seem to feel that . + Several people said/told me/suggestedthought that Presenting alist + They gave/suggested the following reasons: ‘+ They made the following points: 1 2 “Making recommendations + would therefore recommend (that we expand the Nerarytinstaling 2 nev coffee machine). + Te would seem that (banning mote phones) is the bast idea (DONT begin and end your report with Dear Sinfacer, Tike a Vetter, Introduction DO use headings because this makes teaser forthe L | reacer to tnd the main information DO include wo or the points under each 10 use numbering or boule points Fightght mein points, Use of money for school improvements The aim of this report is to compare the advantages of additional computers and of improving the library, and to suggest which of these would be best. | interviewed a number of students to find out their views. }—~Buying more computers Some of the students thought that this was a good idea, saying computers were useful for * practising writing ‘using the Internet heading * playing games. However, other students said that they preferred to use their own computers at home. 0 say how you cieted the information, DO use a range of specific vocabulary or Set phrases e.9, Some thought this was @ good feo. other Students seid they prefered. but DON'T se ons oF adjectives and dramatic Improving the library Most of the students preferred this suggestion, giving the following reasons 1 Many students do not have @ quiet place to study at home. The library would be a good place for private study, but at present there are not enough tables and chairs there. 2 They feel that up-to-date dictionaries and reference books are needed 3 They want to be able to read modern books written for young people. Recommendations language as you doin 2 story A report gives Factual information details or description, Both ideas have benefits, but the majority of students, DO express opinions D0 wse formal language. T (179 words) felt that improving the library would be more useful | would therefore recommend this. ienpersonaly, DONT express recommendations fr opinions unt the conduson Wien reference (Paper 2) Article (For work on articles, see pages 52, 102 and 126.) Task “+ Fm sure you'll agrae it was a great ies) Developing your points You see this advertisement in a local English + Lats start with (why Cf 50 important take plenty of language newspaper ewer, + Another advantage (of ving a computer that.) + On top of that, ‘Giving your own opinion + I think that my opinion (adltinal celebrations ae very ‘mporent + feseems to me that (people are much more aware ofthe importance of e good cet rowed. Write your article. (You should write between 120-180 words.) Model answer eae |_—— Olinda’s carnival - something for everyone Interesing tle. (ONT start and finish your arte inthe Same way a5 late. ‘When most people think of Carnival, they think of Rio de Janeiro, But Rio isn’t the only city in Braz! that knows how to have parties. live in Olinda, a lovely city in the north-east of Brazil. What can we say ———] about the carnival at Olinda? Just that i's the best in the world! Carnival has its origins in ancient Egyptian and Roman festivals. It was introduced to Brazil by the/ Portuguese, and was influenced by Afcan ythrhs and Indian costumes. Now its a big national celebration, pale eenl ‘Once Carnival starts, the whole town goes crazy! language 1 vote the Everyone's singing and dancing. Parades of people ‘wearing costumes typical of our north-eastern your readers, €9 fy using a questo. folklore dance through the streets, I love the giant DONT forget to street dolls, both the traditional ones such a5 the express your ‘man of midnight’ and the new ones that appear soe each year. The best thing about our carival is that no one has to pay and there are no big stars. Everyone takes DO fish your atl by part, rich and poor, old and young, residents and summing your main tourists. you come, | promise you'll never forget it! Binion oe expressing your feelings (179 words)

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