Thank you for your blog post!

Here are some comments that will help you improve

your writing skills.

Sentence 1: Vocabulary error 'for'.

Sentence 2: Good job.

Sentence 3: Good job.

Sentence 4: Good job.

Sentence 5: Vocabulary error 'insecurity".

Sentence 6: Good job.

Sentence 7: Good job.

Sentence 8: Good job.

Sentence 9: Good job.

Sentence 10: Don't put 'are 'and 'is' together.

Sentence 11: Vocabulary error 'job'.

Sentence 12: Good job.

Sentence 13: Good job.

Sentence 14: Vocabulary error 'contribute'.

Sentence 15: Good job.

General comments: Use a dictionary to avoid vocabulary errors.

Grade: 3.75/4

Remember that starting today, you have 7 days to submit corrections if you wish to
improve your grade. If you don't submit a correction your final grade will be 3.75.
 ESTE ES EL TRABAJO QUE OTRO DÍA ENVIAMOS

Blog 3
My ideal country is a nice place to live for many reasons.
There are many beautiful parks around the country.
There is a big library where people can find a lot of Spanish and English books.
There are many clean streets in my country.
There is a good police department that controls the insecurity.
There is not any car or bus which uses gasoline.
There is an excellent hospital that offers a good service.
There are some free Wi-Fi services around my country.
There is a big recycling place where the trash goes to.
There are is an excellent school and university that offer a high level of education.
There are a lot of job places for all of kind of professions.
There is a modern bus station in the capital of the country.
There are many restaurants that offer healthy meals.
There are some solar panels that contribute to energy of the country.
There are good roads in my country.
Commented by: amullovalente On: 22 Dec, 2018 at 9:19:33 AM